Soul Travels Through the Delta, I Am Not the Evil Cat Mao Tou

The novel has good points and bad points. First of all, the novel written by the author is really good, the setting is very novel, and it is the best-looking among the Delta novels. The characters are also designed with their own characteristics. They are all different people, and there is a sense of three-dimensionality. I hope the author will work hard to update and try not to stop updating. Come on. Then there are the shortcomings. It is not so clear who the protagonist is, and the author does not write behind-the-scenes stories. The group portraits are too big, and the entire team has content. The image is well-shaped, but this takes away Luna's role. So far, Luna, the protagonist, has not accounted for too many appearances and roles, which makes people feel no satisfaction and no sense of substitution. The main plot is still clear now. Earn 10 billion and return to reality, but the pace is a bit slow. The protagonist has not yet entered the aerospace picture. Most people may come here to see the protagonist in the aerospace base, killing people with his awesome skills, and picking up a girl and messing with Lily and so on. However, the pace is too slow and it does not bring any sense of satisfaction. And my personal suggestion is that the author can write some scenes of meeting the anchor in the game, which can effectively improve the sense of immersion and excitement. As for how to write, the author can learn from other delta articles, such as breaking into cars, taking the anchor to eat, etc., Etc. After unlocking the aerospace map, you can also play Wang Yuhao, the protagonist, and the three red wolves to attack the top-secret aerospace and treat the escorts like dogs. Finally, I hope the author can write about Lily, a double queue with Claire the puppy, etc. This is what I came for, and I look forward to it. Come on, author

To be honest, this book is not that great but it is worth reading. (Next is what I said to the author) The goal of 10 billion is biased toward daily life, and writing too many games is too repetitive, and you will get tired of watching too much. You can write more plots. The author's existing plots show that the author can write, and you can also write about how other players noticed the protagonist and so on (or directly call an activity in the Cockroach Underground called "The Lord Comes", etc.) Summary (for reference only, don't blame the right or wrong. From a reader's perspective, I will still read it if the author does not change the outline and continues writing): There are fewer games and more daily plots, so that players can notice the conflicts or incidents caused by the protagonist group. Not education! Not a criticism! Just a suggestion, don't criticize me! You can also post the relevant discords so that the author can refer to them more! If others agree with my points, please give it a thumbs up!

Look, it's a little bit toxic, but it's not bad, so look good [laughs] Is there any emotional line between Luna and Hayate in the back? [What] I want to see Lily! Lily is awesome It's my personal feeling to add some toxic points here! ! ! ! If not, I'd like to apologize in advance! ! ! [Sending Hearts] Also, this book seems to be very good so far! ! [Sending Hearts] Is there any other author who can update four times a day? It's not enough to read [Thinking] @

It feels very good. Both Onslaught Brother and Shushu can find their shadows. Being bombed at the evacuation point, being fed by the big brother, seizing the house, the super hero Lao Sai in the sky, it is very real, and everyone who has experienced it can relate to it.

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Okay, I'm really looking forward to Claire's plot later.

I love reading it, the writing is very good, the subject matter is also very novel, I take everyone to understand the background story, and the writing is also very careful, can you do it faster, it is not enough to read

Why is there no blast in Gan Yuan? Is there a female protagonist?

Can the author write more? My children are short of books. The author's writing is really beautiful.

I think the author is writing well at this stage, and I look forward to future articles [laughing]

Personally I think it looks good

Very nice and very logical

It's well written and very interesting.

The author can't be a bad author [Sending my heart]

I think it's a good delta novel

It's a pretty good new book. Although the author may not have written about group portraits and it looks a bit weird, it is indeed a good book.

Good looking, good luck to the author

This book is so beautifully written. I just beg the author to hurry up. The child is hungry.

Beautiful😄 Ahhhhhhhhhh

This is my favorite type of novel

Save the good author

Wow, oh, oh, oh

This book is quite nice

Not bad, you can taste it when you are bored

There's no system, and it's not that pure fun.

Very plump, just a little bit short

It's very nice, and this setting is quite new. You old bastard, please update it quickly.

It's beautiful, the subject matter is novel, and the writing is good and worth reading.

I want to see the special cg of Luna and Hayate