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It is much better than those mindless novels. This is a book with the author's own thoughts. The protagonist is more of a promoter and spectator, allowing unsatisfied people to grow themselves and change the original ending. Most of the highlights are the supporting characters (or the original protagonists). If you have time to calm down, you can take a look. I don't know if AI is used too much. I have to say the same thing many times. There is indeed too much repetitive content. There is a suspicion of a poor word count. Sometimes it also contradicts itself. The more I read, the more tired I became and finally gave up the book (the author probably didn't allow comments later because he was afraid of being scolded by readers). It's a pity that for a good book, the author can't calm down and slowly refine it.

It's hard to review this book. The writing style is okay. Think about it, I'll give it a five-star encouragement. I pulled it from the story of the second world. How can I put it, it's not too bad to read, but this kind of literary and bland writing method can't at least retain me. After all, I have to work all day, and I need to read this novel in fragmented time. It's the kind of novel that can give me positive feedback in time, stimulate my dopamine secretion, and make me feel happy. This one obviously can't do that. It's too everyday and too bland. I don't know if it will be changed later or whether it will be better, because most people, including me, can't see that...

It's a very good book, it can change your life and destiny. The angle is quite interesting. I felt very calm after reading it. It didn't pretend to be a slap in the face. I liked it very much. Now I especially like the part about changing Fan Shengmei's fate. This girl who is very struggling has fundamentally changed her life. It's the first time I've seen this angle, and it's very good. The rating is too low and unreasonable. Lord Miaomiao has arrived. Looking forward to Zhao Jinmai's film and television dramas

The writing style needs to be improved, and the characters can be polished a little more. They don't need to be so extreme, just a little more humane.

I watched the jump first. I watched the next two worlds first and found them to be surprisingly good. They received good reviews. There is a cuckold plot in the book. After reading the last two worlds, I am now reading the previous one, Ode to Joy. The protagonist is with Qiu Yingying. When Qiu Yingying is not with Supervisor Bai, the protagonist does not want her. After Qiu Yingying is dumped by Supervisor Bai, the protagonist goes to take over again. Unexpectedly, it is a cuckold boss. I am speechless.

Overall, it's good, but the AI ​​traces are too heavy. The male protagonist has always been bland, like a personal computer, and some things have been repeated several times. But I can still watch it, after all, it's not too outrageous. So I gave it a pretty good rating.

This is a book written in a serious manner. There is no gnashing of teeth in the hope of revenge on anyone, and no speculation on others with the greatest malice. Everyone is an ordinary person, and they are all facing life. Human beings are a contradictory body, some are good and some are bad. There are always one or two trends in the world that fill my hundreds of dreams. There are always more good things than bad ones. You should have more beautiful illusions about life.

Great writing. Very smooth. But I suspect a lot of AI was used, and many paragraphs and plots were repeated. In addition, if you know how to use AI, you can generate more. 20 Is not difficult.

The score is too low, hahaha, but I especially like to watch the male protagonist's perspective of fast travel, five stars encourage it. Well, I skipped the first story, there were too many modifiers, and it was very tiring to watch. The second story has ten lines at a glance, but it has the feeling of being a good man in a female channel's fantasy. The third story is okay. Gradually I feel that the protagonist is a bit interesting, but the protagonist appears too few times. I always feel like I am making wedding clothes for others. I hope the protagonist is the focus of the story!

The writing is very good, and the real writing is not AI. But what needs to be strengthened is the description of the life of luxury, or high-end life, in a more detailed way, so that everyone can feel more involved. Oh. And my favorite is Jiang Pengfei, who is only thirty and the golden years, which I wrote recently. I hope that the good life can be written more realistically, so that we can have a sense of empathy.

The writing is very good, especially the narrative method, especially the real place names (which have a strong sense of immersion) and the emotional scenes. The vague sense of alienation can be said to be the best among the fast-travel books I have read in the past year.

Well written, the five points is indeed low, it should be above 7.5. However, the second dungeon's protagonist appears a little less. It is recommended to increase the protagonist's appearance time.

Come on, a 20-year-old bookworm agrees. The characters are rich and immersive. It's really good. The author writes well.

It's worth watching. I stayed up late to catch up on it.

Each storyteller adds his or her own narrative line, and the structure is solid. The personality of individual characters and the personality of the person being picked have changed too much. Since it can be written to the time of 2035, too much contrast in personality is a problem. After all, in the era of information explosion. Overall, it's very good. The story of "Ode to Joy" is so sweet that it always makes those who watch it smile unconsciously. Come on, good.

The writing really got better and better after that. I had always been discouraged by the first few chapters before, but this time I listened to the author and started reading directly from the later volumes, and I succeeded in reading it. I especially recommend the world of Ode to Joy. It was the first time I felt the charm of Qiu Yingying in a fan. Most authors write fan fiction in a very superficial way. Some of the more multi-faceted and complex characters in the original drama lose their vitality after they write them. But this article is different. You can deeply understand why Qiu Yingying is worthy of love and why the protagonist falls in love with her. This is rare in secondary creations. The protagonist written by the author is not a doting tool, not an NPC who loves his wife. He has thoughts, selfish motives and is not aggrieved. When I see the protagonist paired with the character in the original drama, I will not feel a mismatch or aggrieved by the protagonist🥺. This is really rare, especially from the perspective of the male protagonist. The author puts the original When you look at the characters as human beings, you can see the shining points of other characters. You will not randomly cast characters or open up harems randomly. The emotional lines are all natural. Some worlds are 1V1 doting on wives, and some worlds have multiple heroines. They are all developed according to the plot. They are not random settings. It is really good. Give the author some chicken legs🍗

After watching three worlds, the protagonist seems to be the reincarnation of a plant spirit. There is no joy, anger, sorrow or joy. Maybe the author expresses it, but I don't feel it. It's like a program, expressing then based on if. It's very rigid and pseudo-human. Maybe it will be okay later hahaha [laughter]

A bland pretentious literary youth fairy tale, you can watch it if you like it

I'm about to see the latest update. At first I thought it was different and unique from other astronomy. To summarize now, the first few worlds are a pair of people for a lifetime. The last few women are just making money, and they will not refuse anyone who comes, and the women will reconcile themselves. The general formula is to make money by speculating on coins, and after a few billions, you will dominate Cinderella. It's not that you can't write it like this. But we can't keep writing about these things. There will be nothing new after the three-point axe, speculating in currencies, buying shares in a house for a woman, accepting everyone who comes, and growing old together. A routine uses millions of words.

The writing is really good, especially the first and second stories. I feel that what the author wrote is really good and only thirty. I am reading the third story, but I don't feel as moved as the first two.

AI is ai. It makes people confused [laughing and crying]

Everything must be studied before you can understand it. This book has the words "so rich" written crookedly on every page. I couldn't sleep anyway, so I read carefully for half the night, and then I saw the words between the words. There were two words written all over the book, which were "diaosi"!

Good-looking, not frivolous, not aggressive, full marks 💯

Tomato's top novel, crushing Wubai's level. Volume 1.2.3 Is good, starting from the end of volume 3 is not so good, starting from volume 4, water makes money in daily life.

I skipped and watched the Ode to Joy part first. I really like the protagonist's way and attitude towards the original owner's parents. I especially can't accept the situation where one's soul has passed through and the original parents are so moved that they don't want to take it anymore. Treating them better than my own parents is totally unacceptable to me.

Not bad. Like the heavens and the world. When it comes to stock trading or starting a company, it doesn't matter whether the data is correct or not. These are just means, not ends. Each world has to take a different path to be interesting. Although the world behind is sometimes wild and unconstrained, the rhythm is good. This kind of Zhutian book is considered to be among the better ones in Tomato. The more you write, the better, and don't procrastinate.

If the author can read it, I suggest that a world should not be too long. Some people like it, and some people are not interested in it. Those who like it will patiently read it, and those who are not interested will wait until you finish writing this world and open the next world before reading it. Once time passes, the book will basically be forgotten. Unless it is particularly exciting, few people will pick it up again and continue reading.

Very interesting, the author writes very logically

Everything else is pretty good, but the choice of objects is a bit hard to describe. You can definitely choose something better.

It's really good. At least what I saw was really good.