[Comprehensive comics, All Worlds, Transformers, Japanese G1, Yuanzu comics, dw, U version]
In the G1 world, the scientist Wind and Thunder Optimus Prime, who was supposed to be buried under the attack of the Unicron together with the Big Mac United Fleet, traveled through time.
When he opened his optical mirror again, he found that he had arrived at the mysterious planet recorded in the Iron Castle Archives - Earth.
Just when he thought he had arrived at the era that belonged to Optimus Prime a hundred thousand years ago, he discovered...
"Huh? Why is there the aura of Unicron deep in the earth?"
Reader comments
How to say it? I also write TF fanfics. The themes are machine warfare + TF + individual American comics. I post them on the cw cat next door.
As a TF fan, your progress is too fast and the plot is too rushed.
Moreover, the combat power has been increased too much, and things that should never be done are included, that is, original characters without pictures.
But the plot itself is quite well written, but the reactions of some of the characters are too bland... I have recently planned to write a local gangster fanfic to relax.
Again, for this kind of core-oriented work, the characters in the original work are of sufficient size, so there is no need to create original characters.
And even if you want to create something original, it's best to create an image-based plot. If you don't do both, I think it's better to create a picture for the original character, otherwise you can only use the reader's brain ()
All I can say is keep up the good work, as long as the updates are not unstable like me. Although one of the main reasons why my updates are unstable is because I am conceiving the outline...
The teacher wrote really well! Very few people can write about Japanese G1! The teacher's writing really restores the style of the Japanese version. Those who like to watch the Japanese version must not miss it! And judging from the content, the teachers' qualifications are also very rich. It's really comfortable for those of us who like to focus on details😌
The lecture is very good and will provide reflection chapters.
Let's talk about the scrapped part of the original work.
Come and support, the professor has done a great job [Like] It is eclectic and should be burned at the same time.
How to say it? I also write TF fanfics. The themes are machine warfare + TF + individual American comics. I post them on the cw cat next door. As a TF fan, your progress is too fast and the plot is too rushed. Moreover, the combat power has been increased too much, and things that should never be done are included, that is, original characters without pictures. But the plot itself is quite well written, but the reactions of some of the characters are too bland... I have recently planned to write a local gangster fanfic to relax. Again, for this kind of core-oriented work, the characters in the original work are of sufficient size, so there is no need to create original characters. And even if you want to create something original, it's best to create an image-based plot. If you don't do both, I think it's better to create a picture for the original character, otherwise you can only use the reader's brain () All I can say is keep up the good work, as long as the updates are not unstable like me. Although one of the main reasons why my updates are unstable is because I am conceiving the outline...
The teacher wrote really well! Very few people can write about Japanese G1! The teacher's writing really restores the style of the Japanese version. Those who like to watch the Japanese version must not miss it! And judging from the content, the teachers' qualifications are also very rich. It's really comfortable for those of us who like to focus on details😌
The lecture is very good and will provide reflection chapters. Let's talk about the scrapped part of the original work.
Come and support, the professor has done a great job [Like] It is eclectic and should be burned at the same time.
Very well written, keep it up