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There are no serious problems at the moment. To be honest, I don't have any hope for a two-player survival theme. However, the recent new book is not bad and has rekindled my hope. The setting is easy to understand.

Yes, the writing is very smooth. If the relationship and survival scenes are well written, this book could be rated 8.5 Or higher. The pace of writing feels a bit fast. Some events that can promote the relationship and the development of the plot can be written in more detail. For example, in the weird cabin, you can first foreshadow the uneasiness of the male protagonist who is about to encounter life-threatening danger, and wait until the emotion reaches its peak. Suddenly he was attacked and forced to separate under multiple impacts. Then the heroine would do a revolving door and pounce on the male protagonist. Secondly, the male protagonist could also do a revolving door. Or he could watch the female protagonist slowly go away but be helpless and then wait until the witch is about to imprison him and be pulled back by the female protagonist. I am a very young person. This is the only thing I can think of. Come on, the writing is very good, I hope it won't be too bad ദ്ദി˶>ω<)✧

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I really like reading this type of love survival game. I hope the author can keep writing it.

I've read a lot of harem stories with similar themes, and I've also read a few of Lone Wolf without a Heroine, but this is the first time I've read it with a single heroine and two people surviving. It's quite new to me, and now that I've read it, I feel like it's really well written.

It's a pure sweet single heroine. It's okay. The shortcoming is that it's relatively bland.

How shameless! The protagonist's hook is very open, and the excitement is enough. The interaction with the heroine makes the body warm, and the sweetness is enough. I haven't seen any poisonous points so far, so I won't poke it! Also... When will the training be given? The author has let himself go, he is so curious [laughing]

Come on, you can write it

This is a very good book in a survival novel. The heroine is not as useless as in some survival novels. It can be said that the male and female protagonists complement each other.

It's my type

I think it's very beautiful

I originally went to bed at 11 o'clock today, but I went to bed after 1 o'clock in order to finish listening [laughs] I ran away from the author [crying] My book

Although there is a slight problem, it is okay. It would be better if the sentences are more fluent.

It's quite fun, sometimes I actually laugh [face covering]

Not a multi-girl survival story. The writing quality surpasses most survival novels. There are many modes, and the talents are random and unique. Love to watch.

At present, it seems that it is acceptable

Good support [eating melon]

Beautiful, no need to say more

The author is awesome

OK [Like] The settings are quite rich and very good.

I think it's a cool article.

Sugar is too sweet, isn't it sweet? [Laughing evilly] [laughing evilly]

It's okay, just a little bit missing

Very good book

It's a good book. The plot is also very broad. Is the protagonist able to use his abilities as a trump card? It's reassuring to read😌

Able to know how to cooperate with teammates and help each other. Staying Stronger in the End Times is a particularly beautiful novel

It's a good little dessert with unlimited streaming and a little love element. It's good that the love element accounts for more than other games of the same type. However, the plot and shooting may still be a little lacking compared to the same type of unlimited streaming. Overall it's pretty good.

I've watched so much about survival, how can I be so horny?

Beautiful [Adoration], the heroine Su Li is so cute [Admiration] [Blowing Kisses]

Rui Comments: It seems really sweet! It's like the sweetest lollipop in the world dipped in honey with sugar added - sweet and sweet