Dragon Clan************

It's okay, the rhythm is comfortable, and the plot doesn't have any serious flaws. The above mentioned failure to enter the academy is purely based on the invincible flow of the starting point. It's not that there is no other world with a high starting point, and it's not that the invincible writing is written clearly. What are you doing with those clichés? In terms of pure plot, it is quite lively and interesting, and it can also arouse curiosity.

It's a good book, the setting is mature, the world view is innovative, and the writing is good. I'd give it five points just for these alone. But to be honest, the difficulty of the middle dungeon was a bit too high, which made me feel powerless for a time. All the characters in the book are too powerless in the face of power, and there is no chance of winning. It seems that the people in the dwarf city are not dead because the villain is showing mercy, which is too desperate. So I opened a comment on that place, and sure enough I found that many people were talking about this in the comments. The biggest problem with this book is the reader's expectations, or in other words, in order to make the logic of a certain plot smooth and to achieve a certain effect in a certain scene, the readers' expectations will be deliberately ignored. For example, the narrative style of the battle between the protagonist and the old man at the beginning of the book is relatively joking and relaxed. This causes readers to subconsciously use that part to judge the style of the book. In the end, they come to an inaccurate judgment, thinking that this book is a relatively relaxed, Feng Aotian-style story. Then I read this book with this expectation. When I read the part about the dwarf city, I suddenly realized that something was wrong. I found that the teacher and the protagonist who were incapable of defeating them could not defeat this group of cults that were empowered by power. The expectations of Feng Aotian that the previous readers thought were suddenly shattered. Oh, it turns out that this book is not a good book in the ordinary sense... Another point reflected in the protagonist's autobiography is the part where the dwarf town breaks through the siege. When the protagonist could not defeat the three assimilated bandits, he thought, "If the three bandits had not been spared, there would not have been so many sacrifices." The protagonist blamed himself for all the faults. Of course, as a God's perspective, we know that even if the protagonist kills the bandits, the result will be the same. The three bandits are actually dead, and the person fighting the protagonist is actually the powerful mastermind behind the scenes. Even if the three bandits are not dead, there will be others who will play their role on their behalf. But the author did not explain it, but instead took the mistake from the protagonist's perspective. I know what the author means. Maybe he wants to show the immature side of the protagonist, maybe he wants to show the kindness of the protagonist, maybe he wants the protagonist to change. In short, this idea is logical, but when it comes to the narrative of the story, this sentence is equivalent to strengthening the impression on the reader. Many times, a sentence spoken by the protagonist itself can convey a certain message, and this information, placed in that context, is that the protagonist's Virgin caused more than 200 people to be assimilated into the cult. This event was strengthened by the protagonist's inner monologue, and even replaced reality in a sense, which made the entire narrative extremely depressing - -The protagonist's kindness led to a series of subsequent events, leading to the assimilation of more than 200 people, causing his own teacher to almost die. In the end, it took a lot of effort to barely escape, and all of this was due to the protagonist himself accidentally letting three villains who should have died - So is this a fact? Unimportant. After reading that overly depressing plot, I even had the feeling that I didn't want to continue reading... It was too depressing. It was completely different from the previous story style. The protagonist could not see any winning points. Even though it was later added that the sixth-level spell was the so-called third power, which is not true or false, it was not important... I couldn't beat it. I still couldn't beat it. It was too desperate. So desperate that if I closed the book at that time, I would not want to open the book again... Then the rest of the story returns to the pleasant feeling at the beginning... In short, I can't tell whether this is deliberate or accidental, but this book is really excellent in other parts. In a sense, it reminds me of another novel I read before, called The Cup of Filth, which is about an old woman detective and an assistant looking for murderers in another world. The story of the hand still has a novel world view and a reasonable setting. In this book, it is the apprentice heroine and Professor Lao Deng. To be honest, this relationship is quite interesting in my opinion. I think if you don't mind some not very exciting developments, this book is quite interesting and highly recommended.

I can only say that it is really good. It is purely handwritten, logically logical, and advanced layer by layer. It is absolutely the best work in Tomato.

It looks okay so far, but the premise is not to view the Dragonborn as the protagonist. The current point of view is similar to looking at the player's operations from the perspective of an NPC. The NPC is the Dragonborn and the player is the Dragonborn's teacher. The Dragonborn will probably not be promoted to the protagonist until he is separated from the teacher.

This is the best book I have seen in recent times. The world view is complete (basically a traditional Western fantasy world view), and the main characters are full-bodied (the creation seems a bit stiff, but the main characters' personality characteristics are in place) Looking forward to the college chapter [love] Ah, more than a hundred chapters have been spent on the way to the academy. . . When will it arrive? . .

Self-consistent logic, very exquisite magic from another world, Hao Kan [laughs]

I feel okay, I said it was due to overeating, but I feel like I've read too many invincible articles.

Good-looking, good-looking, very good-looking

I finally struck gold [laughs]

Dragon Lady just gave me five stars, and the writing is so good, Tomato owes me five stars🌟

I'm afraid it's almost gone and I can only leave one five-star [crying]

Saffir is quite pure and cute, but she can't be the protagonist like this. When will she be able to be the main character on her own?

Congratulations, I found gold

The mutual loss between the protagonist and Lao Deng is so interesting

Can watching a 60-second commercial help compound your relationship?

The writing is good, the plot is well-paced, so good [Love]

It's good to read. Don't stop the author [crying][crying][crying]. It's a slow-burning movie, not invincible. I don't think there's anything serious about it.

It's a good book. Although the protagonist is a little frustrated in the early stage, I don't think it affects my evaluation of this book.

The only drawback is that it's not enough to watch

It's so beautiful, please give it a try, author

Yes, the logic is smooth

You can see the care in writing.

Very nice, why not updated😭😭😭

I saw the latest chapter and realized that there have been no updates for 3 days. Don't stop updating [Explore]

It's pretty good, and the author is very skilled. Are there any other books? It's a pity. The setting content is obviously good. Maybe there is something wrong with the pacing. I said I was going to school. It's close to 200 chapters and I haven't reached the academy yet. The content after the release of the dwarf city seems a bit too watery.

How cool🤓, the character development is very good

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking, good-looking Cute, cute, cute, cute 😊

Very very beautiful

Beautiful, no need to say more

Beautiful, very good Western fantasy novel