Demon Slayer*************

The author's writing is very good, but there is one scene that I don't feel very comfortable with. The old man Lintaki had good intentions, but he didn't expect that the ghost he captured could live so long. He also targeted the disaster relief mask he made and gave to his apprentice, causing the disaster relief to become a doom mask. Here, the author, you put Qiang Usagi's character has collapsed a bit. He will not doubt his master, nor will his faith collapse. He will only be very angry. The original hand ghosts said this to make them angry and reveal their flaws. The reason why the original Qiang Rabbit's sword broke was that he almost killed all the ghosts on the mountain. The weapon was seriously damaged and the hand ghosts were extraordinary.

There is a problem with the timeline. When Kanae Edu became a pillar, Giyuu should have become a pillar. Even if Giyuu did not become a pillar, he would have passed the final selection long ago, and his Haori only changed after the death of Souto.

It's quite interesting, but after finishing Tong Mo, I felt that the timeline was messed up. Why did it suddenly jump to Natian Spider Mountain? According to the first volume, the protagonist passed the selection and took on several tasks. This period should not have been long. At the beginning of the second volume, the hero is already a pillar. It looks very strange, and wasn't Qiantu rescued? Why is Giyuu still wearing a two-color haori? Um. . . . . . . . Anyway, the timeline feels very confusing since the beginning of the second volume. It feels like several years have passed since the protagonist took on several missions. . . . . .

Kenshin does not require any breathing techniques. For example, if Kenshin traveled to the world of One Piece, he would be just a step down the road in terms of his combat power, but no one would doubt that he would reach the height of Hawkeye in a very short period of time. This would be like... One person scored 100 points in the exam, but his paper only had 100 points, and another person scored 150 points in the exam, because his paper had 150 points. It is unfair to think that the latter is better than the former based on the scores. 100 Points is the limit of the world of Rurouni Kenshin, not Kenshin's limit. A person who touches the ceiling in one world should grow taller if the ceiling is raised in another world, because that is the strongest in that world.

Pretty good

Good looking~Five-star support~

It doesn't quite match up with the timeline of the original work, and the specific plot is also different from the original work. Overall, it's okay.

I didn't expect to see it in Tomato, a fanfic of Rurouni Kenshin. The author's description fits my imagination of Kenshin very well. It's a pretty good fanfic

It's pretty good so far. I feel like watching Kenshin. I just hope that the heroine is Kaoru.

Yes, it's well written.

Good looking, come on author

[Like] [Like] [Like] [Like], the author writes well, keep up the good work

The characters are good and the plot is good too

Wealth and honor are what people want.

Worth recommending, pretty good

Very distinctive and consistent with the original work

If you change the timeline part, it will be a good book

It's pretty good, but the timeline doesn't match up.

There's nothing else to say, just go for it, it won't be a loss at all

The writing is really good. Come on, author.