Help! Something's Not Right About These Magical Girls

Most of the books on the market with similar themes have male protagonists who have changed their gender in the later stages. I really hope to see a novel where the male protagonist does not change his gender and joins a circle of magical girls to start a harem. I hope the author can surprise me. Finally, I want to say, I am Guan Yu, and this is Liu Bei [laughing evilly] I didn't expect that people are still commenting on the book review I posted a long time ago, so I'll reply to it all First of all, the book review was written when the book was first published. At that time, it was normal for the male protagonist to have no food. I did not expect that the author could make no progress in more than 200 chapters. In addition, it would have been good to just play Liu Bei at the beginning. I don't know why the author insisted on making a phantom male protagonist. He has independent thoughts and all the memories of the interaction between the male protagonist and the female protagonist. It is indeed a bit poisonous. The character creation is also not very good. The male protagonist's personality is too bad. He doesn't take the initiative, refuses, or is irresponsible. Especially when Nuanyang Zhiqiu confesses his love, he replies, "I like everyone in the Fairy Castle." It makes me really uncomfortable to watch it. You either refuse or accept, what kind of man are you if you try to avoid problems by changing concepts? I don't know if the male protagonist is pretending to be sweet or real, but he has already given up on the book [smile]

It's good-looking, but so short... It's heart-warming [laughing evilly] [laughing evilly] Everyone, run, this is a eunuch novel. The whole book is only ambiguous but not in-depth. There are five female protagonists and none of the protagonists. It made me laugh.

This book is so well written, a classic among classics, a poison among poisons, the protagonist Jia Junzi steams goose heart When writing about magical girls, I can tolerate some mindless plots. But you can't force all readers to follow you, Akaishi. I wanted to write a little bit about everything in this book, but ended up compiling it as a basis.

Liu Beiwen, each of the five magical girls possesses unique skills. They are extremely powerful, and the protagonist also has fighting ability. He is a magical boy. There is no sign of being exposed so far. Now I am looking forward to the plot after the exposure [laughter]

Come on, big brother who writes Huang Su (ง•̀_•́)ง

The perverted heroine and the magical girl hero, good-looking, uncle, recommended [learned]

Come on, big brother who writes about the emperor's uncle! Okay, I admit that what the author writes is a healing article written by sunshine. There is absolutely no unhealthy plot. It is positive and very good.

It's quite interesting. I hope the male lead is not a eunuch. Listening to advice to eat enough to select readers in Chapter 183 [awkward laughter] I heard that since I was green, it can also nourish my stomach.

Very good-looking. The male lead is definitely not. I, Sun Xiaochuan, never lie to others.

The writing is okay, but the magical girls appear relatively rarely, and I want to see more content. And because the male protagonist is afraid of revealing his identity, he watched Wu Youyou lose consciousness after being beaten. I can only say that it is unbelievable. This is the situation, and it is still 🐢, even if you take action to make Wu Youyou lose consciousness, and then go on a killing spree, I will not find fault with you [face covering]

I recommend it, the heroines each have their own perversions, it's a very interesting harem story, but I suggest you don't overdo it. This book is really addictive, and it will definitely be revised by being caught in the dark room many times by mythical beasts. Please read it and cherish it.

The writing is quite good, and the author's control over the character is relatively good. I was originally very dissatisfied with the young lady, but a few conversations with the little loli later brought the character back, from the coquettish young lady to the tsundere young lady, and she also gave people real money to do the work. Like 👍🏻 The plot is also relatively good and worth recommending Correction, this warm sun hobby is indeed a bit too much. The exhibitionist hobby is something that can only be seen. I am really afraid of being cheated when I am a girlfriend. But since the author said that it has only been seen by the protagonist, then I believe it. After all, the author is the creator of this novel world.

The author is extremely self-centered and has no habit of doing good things. The author is advanced in thinking and good at debating. He says "there are no perfect people in the world, only people who keep getting better." This allows readers to understand that the heroine is actually getting better if she does not change her "good hobbies" for hundreds of chapters.

The plot is really well written, and the author's update speed is also quite fast. However, the senior sister in the later stage is really a bit disgusting. The protagonist is strong and treats the senior sister like a 🐢🐢 [facepalm] [facepalm] Currently Chapter 414

Not bad, if you can accept that some of the heroines are perverts and the protagonist can become a magical girl I can't stand it anymore.

Come on, big brother who writes about the emperor's uncle There is no end to the turtle, but the author's reality is like this

Oh, Yunduo😲😲😲 da da da da da 😆😆😆 I really want to play Yun Shen 🤤🤤🤤 Yun Yuan Shen😋😋😋 Dang dang dang dang 😮😮😮Watch the exciting and colorful 😃😃😃Yunyuan Shen😍😍😍oooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo😢😢😢🥳🥳🥳😉😉😉😁😁😁🤩🤩🤩Want to play Genshin Impact 😙😙😙 Yun Yuan Shen 😀😀😀 Hahahahaha 😄😄😄 Let's play Genshin Impact together 😊😊😊 Yun Yuan Shen 🤩🤩🤩 The author did not find a perfect timeline, and all the heroines died. Many holes were not filled in and it ended in a hurry. It's also considered bad.

I just feel that the progress of this book is very slow. At the current seventy chapters, if you really want to say that the development progress of the male and female protagonists is about thirty or forty, because the male protagonist does not recognize him, and he does not really mate or do anything with sex. The one named Lu is actually the most promising. Although the daily interaction with the male protagonist is only about 1%, but If the identity of the magical girl is revealed, it will be a direct attack of about 60 or 70%; the other three magical girls are 10% overwhelming. I just think that the heroine is looking for someone to satisfy her XP. As for the protagonist, it doesn't matter who she is. She doesn't have that twisted sense of possession of the protagonist's entire individual. This is the most obvious difference between Youyou and Senior Sister Lu and the other three heroines. Is it because of the male protagonist that they have perverted XP, or is it because they are perverted and happen to have a male protagonist, this is very important. Finally, it is indeed a bit slow, and there are not many magical girl battles. Then, the daily relationship progress bar and worry line are okay, but other progress bars are average. Overall, it's worth a look, and despite its flaws, it's still solid.

Would anyone really like a heroine with exhibitionism? There were also banquets from all over the world. . .

Yes, the ninja among the male ninjas is very good at pulling, retreating and retreating.

Although surrounded by beauties, I have to say that this is indeed a theater of gods. Those five girls really live up to their names. There are too many elements (such as: the pet-type black hole heavy girl, the author's incarnation as the ultimate YY girl). Of course, I am quite happy to watch it.

Come on, big brother of Crab Roe Cake

I don't know. The author said that if you give a five-star review, you'll get more updates, so here I am. Don't listen to their nonsense, the comments are all fake. The author is a good citizen, and what he writes is about art. Don't listen to their nonsense.

I can't bear to watch it. The avatar playing with the heroine is so poisonous that he died [vomit][vomit] [vomit] [vomit] [vomit] [vomit]

It's okay, mainly because it has some quirks. Although the heroine has not been seen, it is still recommended for people with mental mysophobia to watch it with caution.

How to put it... I have to say that it is indeed poisonous, but as a veteran of tomatoes, I am already immune to 90% of poisons. When reading this book, you must be prepared and cut it from beginning to end to see if you can still eat it. It is very important to read tomatoes to develop poison resistance. If I can read it, it is my answer to 14,000 hours ദ്ദി˶>ᴗo)✧

The protagonist and the personal computer Everything else is fine The back is really too turtle

It's okay. I have high poison resistance. The two of us with three accounts have more than 20,000 hours of playtime. I can handle it. It's quite interesting. Some plot arrangements are really outrageous. It's worth watching. Well, don't watch it if you have low poison resistance. But it's really interesting.

The daily life of the male protagonist and the female protagonist is very interesting, I like it very much [smile] The villains are also very vividly portrayed. I like this kind of literature where everyone has a light and dark side. Poor Chinese language, weak comments

The book is quite good, and the Spring and Autumn section is also good, but I was a little tired from reading it. It was probably caused by the fact that the heroines are gods and men. I felt exhausted, and I hope it can alleviate some of the illness, especially the yandere heroine. The gravity position was unfolding, and I was so hung up that she was not crushed to death.