Between Flammable Oolong Tea and Sea Breeze

It's a Bilan fanfic worth watching. The main character is pretty good. She's a Chinese international student. The heroine seems to be Kiyoko. One of the funny things is that the main character's parents sent a Taiwanese tricycle over [laughing]. I feel like there are only 4 Azur fanfics in Tomato that I can read, Sebas, Tsubasa Amamiya, Aoyama, Yuu Touhou, Sebastian and Tsubasa Amamiya are finished, Aoyama and Yuu Touhou are always discontinued, I hope this book can be written well, not to be discontinued or unfinished, and at the same time have more original plots

The beginning of a dream, but don't worry about what kind of dream it is, a nightmare is a dream anyway

I think the writing is very good. It is the first in the Blue Sea category to feature Kiyoko as the heroine. The writing is not hurried, the pace is brisk and interesting.

This book has many advantages. First of all, it writes very well about the feeling of hurting friends in the daily part (of course, I am not referring to the scum group). Since the main line of diving has not been advanced yet, it is only something to look forward to in the future. Then for the love part, it is worth mentioning that I chose characters that appear in the original work instead of characters from other anime. If it is a character from other anime, a situation will occur, that is, the factory setting of the female protagonist will only be related to the male protagonist, and she will be strongly bound to the male protagonist. This is a common problem I found after reading so many Bilan fanfics, which will lead to the love drama being completely independent from daily life. And Kiyoko herself is a character related to Aina Qiang, so there will be more things to write (this is a personal hobby) Bilan itself is a comic that combines love and daily life. It is more like the type of stuffing sugar into daily life. Preferring this kind of writing will make me feel more like Bilan. The above are all personal opinions ()

Where can I find someone who can watch Blue Sea, play tokusatsu, and play horse racing girls at the same time [Adoration]

There are original works and adaptations, and the Japanese culture is not as awkward as deliberately changing the Chinese style, but it can incorporate the jokes we are used to. The character of the protagonist is very consistent with the kind that although integrated into Japanese culture, is still a Chinese instinct at heart, without any sense of violation, and full of coma.

I have read several Bilan fanfics, some are purely embarrassing, and some are beyond recognition. This one is very good. The daily protagonist is still Iori, and Liu Zishen is very involved in it. The content is also very close to the original work.

I have been following the main plot for about half of the time, and I have modified some of the plots of the anime, replacing some of the plots between Iori and Aina with Kohei and Aina. I have never read the comics and don't know what the comics are like, so I am somewhat opposed to this replacement. After this replacement, there will be no change in Aina's emotional line, which is quite unnecessary. The author's writing skills, description and narration are all online, and he can fully display the interesting aspects of the original work, which is great. The new characters are not obtrusive, the interactions are interesting, and the new plot is also interesting. The new characters are not made to look out of place. It feels like it is not easy to write funny fan fiction in this type of novel. It is rare that the newly added plot can be interesting.

No, I just have a question, why does the protagonist's name change so often? Sometimes Liu Zi Ginseng, sometimes Liu Pleiades Ginseng... How should I put it? Is there any protagonist who is exactly the same... It's just the original plot and then adding a protagonist, so I might as well read the comics... Nothing happened when I was decorating the room for Iori, and nothing happened when I was practicing entering the water. Instead of calling the protagonist Yanagi Ginseng, I might as well call him a camera...

It's not bad, it has that flavor, but the main character's name keeps changing. One star deducted.

The writing is very natural, Liu integrates well into the diving club, and it feels like watching a version of Blue Sea with Liu. One thing worth praising is that the author is willing to let Liu suffer. He is not the kind who can always win (although Liu's normal strength is at the highest level among the trio, and his adaptability is comparable to Mo Xuluo). The master's defeat is even more exciting.

Except that the integration of the protagonist is a bit stiff, it is already very good as a fan. However, I suggest the author insert some pictures in the comment area for some famous scenes so that people who have not read the manga or the manga can understand it.

It's good to watch. It's one of the better works among the Blue Sea fanfics. It doesn't overshadow the original protagonist Iori. The plot is smooth and the content is rich. I just don't know why the rating is so low? Come on! [Cool]

Average, how should I put it? Most of the main plots are the same whether there is a protagonist in the original work or not. It's just that what happened in the original work and the protagonist is added in have not changed much. It's almost like watching The Blue Sea again.

Originally, because the original plot accounted for a small proportion, I just wanted to give it 4.5 Stars instead of 4. But because of the sense of CP between the protagonist and Qingzi, I chose to give it five stars. Although there is no special unit plot, it is still very enjoyable to watch.

The excellent writing style brings the characters and famous scenes to life on the page, making you pee in tears. At present, there may be one of the few fanfics on Tomato that fits the narrative style of the original work. The emotional line is smooth and flowing without being abrupt. In short, it's so good.

It's really good! And Kohei, it seems we are close friends [crying][crying][crying] Very good book! ! ! Also, if I have heterochromatic eyes, I would be willing to have a younger brother who controls a gentle sister, a younger brother who controls twin loli sisters (note: not related by blood), a tsundere childhood sweetheart, a cute and adorable roommate, drive a luxury car, and live in a mansion [crying] [crying] [crying]

The protagonist and Kiyoko have more interactive chatting

It's surprisingly good, and the heroine is also good. It's nice to add more interactions with the heroine without interfering with the normal story.

Why is the rating so low? If you can't read the new chapter, Wadashi (I was originally worried about how Kiyoko would do cp without diving, but it turned out to be good when I thought of it. Also, why didn't the communication between Iori and Moore follow the original work? It feels better) Single heroine Kiyoko

The heroine is Kamio Kiyoko, who respects the original work, does not remove the CP, and incorporates her own original plot into the original work.

Good looking Nice atmosphere And the main reason is that the author wrote the brotherhood of the scum group very well. The only problem now is that one chapter a day is not enough

It is rare for Azure Haven to have no sense of fragmentation caused by the addition of characters, and it is well integrated into the plot, and there is no drama that steals the original characters. They work well together and integrate with each other.

I don't know why the ratings of Bilan's novels are generally low.

The blue sea, the protagonist "shares the joys and sorrows" [face covering]

It feels pretty good-looking

It's good to watch, I love to watch it, when will Yanagi and Kiyoko complete the life level jump against the scum group?

Pretty good, no drama at all There is no sense of violation. If you say this is written by the author of the original comic, I believe it.

Very good, a rare blue sea text

The writing is so sublime [like it], the male protagonist has perfectly blended into these residues