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The writing style is very delicate and the logic is very clear. There are few people now, so I will say a few words first. I hope the author can stop adding emotional scenes to the main drama. The current rhythm of friendship and family is very good. It is comfortable to read and can attract many non-CP readers. It is considered a relatively good book. In fact, I don't want this book to turn into a stock-buying book with multiple female protagonists or a single female protagonist popping up out of thin air in the later stages, which is very boring. If the author has this tendency in the later stages, I will have to leave the book with regret. I know that the protagonist is a human being and will have certain emotions. There is also the appearance of a partner in the play in the early description. I think it is normal for him to long for love. But as a reader, from my perspective, I hope to see an ordinary person who reaches the top through hard work. This is a kind of long-term satisfaction. If I want to watch an emotional drama, I can look for many examples that have already been on the market and watch them. Maybe they are really good? But my original intention now is to watch the growth of an extremely ordinary person. I don't know yet what the author will do in the description of emotional drama, but the answer most authors give me is: there is so much stuff in a good book. The vast majority of successful cases with female protagonists have already given enough hints in the early stage, such as childhood sweethearts, classmates or classmates. This kind of article has already explained that there is a female protagonist at the beginning, so the reader has a high degree of acceptance, and the interaction with the male protagonist will not be too obvious. It's strange, but so far I haven't seen a more inclined "female protagonist", so I will treat this seedling with great expectations. I hope the author can read my long review. It's okay if you can't. I will try to trust the author's subsequent development.

I just want to read articles that are assisted by the system and that I act seriously. There are relatively few writing on this kind of subject, and it is difficult to get out of the circle. Every article is blessed by the author's own likes. I am very happy every time I find this kind of article. The author's writing is not formatted. Each simulated story is very real and emotionally delicate. Some stories remind me of myself. The writing style is also very good. Many details can only be written by people who have a deep understanding of life. What I want to convey throughout the article is more realistic, but it is not sadistic, it is just purely touching. It is embedded in the form of a semi-refreshing article, giving people a lot to think about, and they can also find something exciting in the progress of the protagonist. Now that I see it, I feel that the content expressed in this article is very important. I like reading this kind of subject because I want to see countless different, real lives and the protagonist's attitude of working hard as an ordinary person after getting a chance. The author has written it, come on, come on.

I don't like book reviews very much, so I hesitated for a while and gave my evaluation anyway, for the sake of the book and the author. It can be seen that the author put a lot of effort into this work, and I also see the author's sincerity. I think this is the key to writing a book that readers will truly love. The content is very delicate. Watching the protagonist grow up step by step, it seems like I am really watching a dedicated actor fighting for his career and life. I was really pleased when the protagonist won the award. His efforts and the life experiences he experienced in the simulation have all yielded substantial results. Some passages in the book are also very touching. I can see that But it feels like the protagonist develops a little too fast, and it seems to be expected. The protagonist seems to be taking every step very smoothly. After reading more than sixty chapters, I thought it was the finale and I didn't know how the protagonist would develop in the future. Three stars for the work and two stars for the author [laughs]

It's really beautiful, with ordinary life and a touch of sadness revealed between the lines. I burst into tears, I was very touched and sad! The author's writing style is very delicate, very much like prose For the first time, I have a concrete understanding and understanding of the word "disability". This is a cruelty that cannot be empathized with. Any reactions and expressions of emotion in their eyes are torture to them and open scars. (Text: Like a layer of glass) The dialogue between the protagonist and his family was plain, real and natural, which made me feel like my own life. Especially the part about building a house and sending the protagonist out, it was so real.

It is an "attack on the apocalypse" written for every ordinary person Opening this book is like opening a mirror that reflects life. It uses the most solid and delicate writing power to make the word "hard work" jump out of a slogan and become a real temperature that every reader can touch. You can feel your own resonance between the lines. The author's writing style is very deep. I read 45 chapters and took 41 notes. I sketched in Xu Jing's growth story and really learned a lot [laughs]

It's nice to read, but there are too many details, but the author said he has many outlines. I hope that the experience plot can be a little shorter, or it can be published in one chapter. Particularly good stories can be expanded according to the comment area, because it is impossible for every story to suit everyone's taste. If you can't finish reading it every day for several days, if you are not interested in the non-fiction main plot, you may want to skip it, which wastes your efforts and affects the reader's experience. It is not that the story is not good, but many people watch entertainment. No matter how much you like plain plots and down-to-earth writing, you come here for the thrill of the protagonist's success. And these experience stories, the kind you want to write that can make people think and hone the protagonist's mood and acting skills, are not very satisfying stories. Many of them are even ordinary and difficult [face covering] The first few seem okay, but the latter may be a bit boring. The main reason is that some are too long, and they are the same for several days in a row, which will make people forget what they are watching. . There may be many people praising the writing skills and the good stories written, but really few people come in for the stories of suffering or ordinary stories. It's okay if it's shorter, it can be regarded as a speed-running plug-in. The point is, this is entertainment, what you have to do is to let the protagonist experience these, not let the readers experience these [face covering]

The author writes well, the emotions are very delicate, and the story is very real, but this reality will make this book a bit picky for readers. In addition, maybe because of the newbie, the rhythm is not well controlled, and the overall feeling is a bit dull, but come on, add bookshelf (it is really dull, including when the protagonist wins the award, I only saw a hint of ripples when the protagonist signs the contract, I hope there can be more improvements in the future) By the way, in the latest chapter, I saw that the author did not write about the process of The Sims, which is a bit regretful to me, because to me, The Sims seems more real, attractive, and more immersive. On the contrary, there is a bit of separation from the script rehearsal, because the real experience of joining the crew is too far away from us (for example, in the deaf-mute book, I prefer the real experience of The Sims) , I feel that the emotional description will be more delicate, or the author has already described the protagonist's parents, so it will be more emotional or something. Anyway, I personally prefer detailed description of simulated life. In addition, rehearsal is secondary to simulation. There is no need to separate the script and write six chapters. When I saw those six chapters, my feeling at the time was: Why is it not over yet, and the rhythm of that part is too slow) The above is just my personal opinion. The author can refer to it or not. There are not many original works now. Come on, author. It is still very interesting, but it is too bland and needs to be adjusted. There are not many chapters now, so it is not too conspicuous. Anyway, come on.

Simple description, wonderful story. This is a reason for five stars. [OK] The most annoying thing about this book is that I saw this place (Silent River). A system simulation takes up more space. And there are so many of them that are inexplicable [smile], and they don't have much to do with the main plot and future promotion. Maybe it's just the author's own desire to express his emotions. But don't accept it.

In addition to the acting plot, a simulated plot is also added, which is equivalent to doubling the plot. It is written very delicately. I am immersed in each character. I feel like I have experienced their lives. The most profound impression is the changes in life due to acquired deafness. He just cannot hear, but he seems to have problems somewhere. It is a very real feeling.

It's good-looking, a breath of fresh air in Tomato entertainment industry writing, with delicate writing, regular script, and progressive transitions and the protagonist's perceptions. Although there is a system, it does not become the focus of the plot. It is more of a support. The character of the protagonist is actually not bad. The reason why I didn't stand up in Tomato may be because the beginning is relatively bland, which is not suitable for the bloody website of Tomato.

Very well written! ! It doesn't have that fast-paced, thrilling drama where everyone suddenly gets scared and then becomes exaggerated, it's more natural! Then the story will make people feel a slight sense of happiness, and you can also feel that the protagonist really likes acting. The golden finger is very useful, but you also need to work hard. I look forward to the follow-up! I think this is one of the actor's articles compared to Qing Shui Hibiscus! Well worth seeing

The author writes very delicately. I like the character of the protagonist very much. I also like to see the growth process of an ordinary person. The author writes very well. I will always support you [flying kiss] [flying kiss] [flying kiss]

There is no actor in life, and there will be no audience in life. The best thing about this book is that it tells an ordinary story in an ordinary way, but inadvertently makes you cry.

I was surprised to find out how good this book is. I don't often read this kind of book📚, but instead I found a good book [shy][shy][shy][shy][shy] The content is not watery, the emotions are delicate, the setting is interesting, and the words have my own ideas and style! All in all, a rare good book

The story and plot of the simulation are very well written. The system does not make the protagonist invincible and the IQ is online. Unfortunately, not many people read it. I hope there will be more updates. Come on, the author!

The help given is not small, but it is purely for guidance. Now it is not much, but it makes people look forward to the follow-up development. Book lovers who like this genre may wish to give it a try, don't become addicted to books [crying]

The writing is quite good, but your content is basically the same as that of the global actor, and the previous scenes are also very different. I have to change it a little, mainly because that book has not been updated for a long time. Come on, author, I hope you can write a better ending.

It's a really good movie article. It goes back to the most essential thing about movies, emotions rather than flashy and exaggerated descriptions. It seems very delicate and very comfortable at the moment. It's a good book. You don't have to be too anxious while sitting. Keep writing and keep updating. The more chapters you update, the more people will read this book. Stay calm and stick to it.

Looks pretty good

I once read a book with a similar system. Later I discovered that I had a split personality. There were several simulated dreams in the middle that were quite touching.

To be honest on Tomato, the writing is really good.

It's so beautiful. I read it in math class and it made me cry [cry][cry][cry]. The article is emotionally delicate and very engaging. I like big books very much.

The image of the male protagonist is very real. He has become better from a small character through layers of simulations. It feels very fulfilling and every simulation is very touching.

I've only read chapter 7 and I'm already deeply attracted. The writing is really good. Please update soon. Why was it taken off the shelves? I haven't finished reading it yet

The content is very novel, it is easy to read, and it is a very interesting work.

Damn it, I just added it to the bookshelf. After reading it for an hour, I quit and took a look. It was removed from the shelf?

Beautiful, very immersive

Super super good book

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking

There are not many authors who write books seriously like this. Come on.