This story is purely fictional, please believe in materialism!
[Live broadcast + systemless + folklore + popular science + decisiveness + supernatural + thriller + Chinese horror...]
(Listen to my advice. Starting from Chapter 88, according to readers' suggestions, the main plot will be brought back to talk about supernatural beings. There is no urban immortality. Please feel free to eat)
Live broadcast of popular science and folklore, but I almost sent myself away.
I wanted to make a living by relying on ancestral craftsmanship, so I opened a live broadcast room to talk about folk taboos. Nine dollars and nine one time connection, no matter how young or old you are.
Until late at night, a girl came in and said that she always dreamed of old houses and laughing children. I asked her to wrap the collected dolls in red cloth and put them at the crossroads.
The next day she cried and thanked me and said she had a good night's sleep.
I'm on fire.
But then, the truck driver Zhang Lianmai showed the strange black and blue handprints on his arm: "Anchor, I bumped into a man in red while driving..."
I taught him how to crack it, but that night he received a private message from a stranger:
"The method is correct, but what you have solved is only superficial."
Wait until I finish meeting this person.
…
Who knows, what happens next will become more and more sinister
Reader comments
Let's give it four points for now
Reason: As far as what I have read so far in chapters 40 and 50, the protagonist encountered two accidents. The first accident happened because he had no experience and did not expect that someone would trouble him, which led to a sneak attack. It can be understood that the first time he encountered it, he had insufficient equipment and insufficient experience.
However, when he was searching for a grave for the second time and encountered a red and white collision, he still did not learn from the experience of the first sneak attack. He went into battle naked and did not have any talisman papers that should be prepared (either attack talisman papers or defensive talisman papers. Even the talisman papers were drawn on the spot). This was when he was a child. When the protagonist's grandfather asked him to practice drawing talisman, he failed several times before he succeeded in getting a talisman paper. I know it may be to show that the situation was urgent at that time, but the situation was urgent at that time, couldn't I prepare to draw the talisman paper before departure? Not many, at least a few emergency talisman papers should be prepared. [Stare][Stare][Stare]
The beginning and the rest of the story are well written, but the part where I went home and got involved with the association was not so good. You can write some plots that help netizens solve difficult problems, but don't go too far and start a live broadcast. The characters in the later stages can also be more mature and stable. After all, I have experienced so much. Come on, a little suggestion [smile]
The pacing is great and the writing is also good.
The only problem is
1. The protagonist's temperament is unstable. He matures at one moment and escapes from the second phase at another.
2. Minor plot roles receive little feedback
The beginning really gave me the feeling of reading folklore novels earlier. Returning to my hometown brought me back to reality. It's a pity.
The writing style is logically clear, the three views are correct, and it is well-founded. It can be read as a "metaphysics" article. It is excellent.
Not bad, very good, very interesting, keep up the good work
You still give me a thumbs up, hurry up and write a book.
It looks good, keep up the good work💪
A little wobbly but the content is okay
In fact, I think it's well written. The author cares too much about what the outside world thinks. I watched it with gusto from beginning to end. Come on, author, don't belittle yourself
Good looking, support the author
I thought it was okay after reading the beginning, but I'm worried about turning to immortality in the future. Can anyone give me an answer?
Let's give it four points for now Reason: As far as what I have read so far in chapters 40 and 50, the protagonist encountered two accidents. The first accident happened because he had no experience and did not expect that someone would trouble him, which led to a sneak attack. It can be understood that the first time he encountered it, he had insufficient equipment and insufficient experience. However, when he was searching for a grave for the second time and encountered a red and white collision, he still did not learn from the experience of the first sneak attack. He went into battle naked and did not have any talisman papers that should be prepared (either attack talisman papers or defensive talisman papers. Even the talisman papers were drawn on the spot). This was when he was a child. When the protagonist's grandfather asked him to practice drawing talisman, he failed several times before he succeeded in getting a talisman paper. I know it may be to show that the situation was urgent at that time, but the situation was urgent at that time, couldn't I prepare to draw the talisman paper before departure? Not many, at least a few emergency talisman papers should be prepared. [Stare][Stare][Stare]
The beginning and the rest of the story are well written, but the part where I went home and got involved with the association was not so good. You can write some plots that help netizens solve difficult problems, but don't go too far and start a live broadcast. The characters in the later stages can also be more mature and stable. After all, I have experienced so much. Come on, a little suggestion [smile]
The pacing is great and the writing is also good. The only problem is 1. The protagonist's temperament is unstable. He matures at one moment and escapes from the second phase at another. 2. Minor plot roles receive little feedback
The beginning really gave me the feeling of reading folklore novels earlier. Returning to my hometown brought me back to reality. It's a pity.
The writing style is logically clear, the three views are correct, and it is well-founded. It can be read as a "metaphysics" article. It is excellent.
Not bad, very good, very interesting, keep up the good work You still give me a thumbs up, hurry up and write a book.
It looks good, keep up the good work💪
A little wobbly but the content is okay
In fact, I think it's well written. The author cares too much about what the outside world thinks. I watched it with gusto from beginning to end. Come on, author, don't belittle yourself
Good looking, support the author
I thought it was okay after reading the beginning, but I'm worried about turning to immortality in the future. Can anyone give me an answer?
Yes, true and false, false and true