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Players in the Harry Potter Game Traveled Through Time and Raised Their Hands to Eat the Big Melon
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Hp's Article Is Asking for an Article That Cuts Harry to Black or Destroys Harry
I want to read a book like "HP: The Savior Is Negative Again Today".
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More, ten chapters, ten chapters per person. I didn't like the plot of discussing the potion quantification process with Snape. In the novel, Snape is like a new recruit, silent and full of strong words. Compared with the impression of opening his mouth and spraying venom from one hand, secretly poking at your stupid prison bat, the image feels fragmented.
After reading the latest chapter, this book currently deserves five stars. It's quite interesting, at least it breaks the rules, the starting point is very different, and it's very fresh. I've had enough of the nanny stuff in Harry Potter. Oops, I'm so annoyed. Why did the author add a weapon like a gun? It suddenly became boring. Alas.
1. I haven't seen any stupid settings for the time being, so you can rest assured. 2. It's not as fairy tale as the original work, but feels like a more realistic story. 3. It is logical, the details are well described, and it is decisive in killing. 4. The overall feeling is pretty good, recommended!
This is a very thoughtful book that analyzes the world of Harry Potter from another angle and pulls the plot that was originally biased toward fairy tales into the daily life of the wizarding world. The protagonist has great ideas, methods and plans for doing things. The golden finger is very powerful and practical, but it will not ruin the plot. And the biggest surprise is that the protagonist is actively and subtly changing the world, instead of those weaklings who shout "I can't help it" but can only follow the flow and be arranged by fate.
A pretty good hp fanfic. But the method is still too mild. I want to see the blood flowing into the mouth of the river!
Yes, it's a good book. There's not much to read at the moment. It's enjoyable enough. The original plot is OK. After entering Hogwarts, it didn't follow the main plot. Harry also became a snake house. Overall, it's good. If the plot didn't twist later, this book could still get a good rating [Like]
It's okay. When I first started watching the first bit of the plot, I thought it was some good-for-nothing male protagonist in the beginning [laughing evilly]. The rest is okay, it's quite interesting, but it's a bit too late to enroll in school [facepalm]
It's a cool article about the male channel system. It's well written and can be rated as 9 points. It's pretentious but not too much. It's systematic but not invincible and needs to grow. It tricked Harry into the snake yard at the beginning. It's innovative. There are not many chapters at the moment. Please give me 5 stars to encourage me and collect them for updates.
It feels like a very novel novel among HP fanfics. I personally think it is very good-looking. The protagonist is very elegant and fits the characteristics of the Snake Yard very well. Overall, it is very interesting to read.
It's rare to see an author write something so appetizing. Cool article. Don't feel aggrieved. This is what I like when I read a novel. I hope the author maintains the style. There are only 59 chapters so far, and I finished reading it in just a while. It's not enough to read.
It's nice to see. Training Harry and Marco is like training a dog. In order to keep Harry around without being annoying, the first grade used unexpected methods to beat Lao Deng to death [eat melon] [eat melon]. You can see for yourself, without the knife. The relationship aspect is handled logically, even Lilia is too cute, and Furui Gospel
There are some minor flaws, but it's still a HP article in Tomato, ranking among the top two good articles! ! I have read almost all the fanfics in Tomato. They are either too childish or the writing is too naive! There are only two books that I think are excellent, this is the second one
Oh my gosh, it's so beautiful. This is the first time I've seen such a well-written Harry Potter fanfic. I personally like the character of the protagonist and the theme of krypton gold very much. The overall interaction with the three little ones is also very good. I intentionally downplayed those two and focused on Harry. Oh my god, it's a love story in a dream. After reading the novel for so many years, I feel like this It's really rare that a book can make my eyes shine, especially for an old IP like Harry Potter with no innovation. It's really amazing that it can be written so well. I hope the author doesn't want to be a mess or a eunuch. I wish the author good health and more updates. It's really not enough [crying] [crying] [crying] (give me four stars for protection)
A little bit of trouble: Chapter 19, I am a time traveler, and I still reveal information to others before they die [face covering] I don't know if it's considered poisonous: Chapter 199, oppo, I really can't stand it The pit between my brother and my mother has not been filled. The pace seems a bit too fast, as the actual time span of the entire book is one year. Others feel okay (maybe I didn't expect it for the time being)
Anyway, I think the male protagonist is very cool. His methods are extremely ruthless and decisive but he is able to remain fair. His method of conquering his subordinates is both rewarding and popular. He possesses black magic but does not kill innocent people indiscriminately and loses his humanity (he only kills small animals in order to upgrade). As a new generation of demon kings who have established a new order (rules that are friendly to weak but kind-hearted people), does it feel like he is even better than Emperor Ge? Voldemort's noseless shoe doesn't even deserve it? Every step of the plot advancement is on the fun side. It is very good. I sincerely recommend it. The only bad thing is that it is still being serialized. I am afraid that it will be unfinished. I pray...
I feel like the rating is low, but it's quite interesting. It's just that the pace of time is too fast, and the game is over in more than half a year. If the time span was longer, it would be interesting to take a magical technology route and go out of the planet. But that's enough. I didn't see many comments later, which is a pity.
I quite like it. It's very funny and may be a little OOC, but I just watch it for fun. I like the setting of the protagonist and it's also very well written. It felt so sudden that the principal died there. Didn't he still want that arrangement? How could he be willing to die? Although the protagonist was resurrected later By the way, there will be a bug in the setting of the protagonist, which can easily make it worthless, but it's just a novel, so don't worry about it. In Chapter 120, I suddenly explained that I understood why the principal was willing to die at that time. I personally don't like some of the plots at the end
This book is good at the beginning, but I don't know what it will be like at the end. The mother and brother in the back were cleared
There is no trace of AI. Well written.
I really like this kind of krypton-gold theme, especially when the protagonist hits people with Copper Nuts. It's very cool, and it's strong enough. It's a very novel HP theme. I recommend everyone to get into it.
It's rare to see such good Harry fan fiction.
Good news, this is a rare book Bad news, this is a new book that just came out
It's well written and the content is quite interesting.
Like, like, like, like, very, very, very, very beautiful. Highly recommended.
It's super beautiful. When men look at it, they are menstruating [roll their eyes] [roll their eyes] [roll their eyes] [roll their eyes] [roll their eyes] [roll their eyes] [roll their eyes] [roll their eyes]. Women look crazy [stunned] [stunned] [stunned] [stunned] [stunned]. Vegetative people get up and dance to music [KISS] [KISS] [KISS] [KISS] [KISS] [KISS].
The book is very good, you can rest assured to follow it. The capital and strength of the book go hand in hand. No poisonous points have been found for the time being. Keep it up and present today's power generation for love [please update]
The beginning is pretty good, but the beginning is flawed but it gets better quickly. It is no longer even separated from conflicts with people, but a larger-scale struggle with the environment and rules, and the characters shine brightly. Around chapter sixty, I feel like I'm starting to let myself go. The character also gradually changed from the original devil to a daddy.
Very enjoyable writing, good reviews
It's very interesting. Please write better, author [laughter]
Very good, awesome