Giving Ye Luoli’s Brain-Dead Plot a Moon Goddess-Level Shock

There is no lag in the plot. Every time Selene makes a move, she accurately hits the key points of Ye Luoli's plot - preventing the protagonist group from having a meaningless quarrel at the entrance of the elite elementary school, preventing the bright colors from triggering the ban in the Floating Cloud Tower, intercepting the elixir given to Wang Mo by Prince Hu Shui, and effectively plundering the magic power in the Phantom Corridor to trap the miserable Mandora. Each time, it not only completes the system task, but also corrects the brain-dead plot that makes people dig their toes on the ground. The logic is self-consistent and full of satisfaction. The mystery of Pang Zun's source of pollution and the secret of the abandoned nuclear power bunker added suspense to the plot and gave the two a more solid reason to fight side by side.

The most amazing thing is the emotional line between him and Pang Zun. From the initial hostility and dislike of each other, to the entanglement and implicit concern later, every interaction is full of tension. Selene went to Thunder Pavilion for the first time. Her intention was just to complete the system task, but she accidentally noticed the old wounds hidden under Pang Zun's power and said, "You are sick." He directly provoked the violent Lord Thunder and went berserk, but then he couldn't help but help him suppress the pollution and sort out the energy field again and again; Pang Zun hated Selene from the beginning, then felt guilty after being cured by him, and then took the initiative to go to the Moonlight Hall to worry that he would get into trouble by cooperating with Mandora, and even blurted out "I will help you chop Mandora." This transformation from "wanting to kill you" to "wanting to protect you" is really amazing!

Who would have thought that Ye Luoli's derivative novel could write such an emotional two-male romance! The character of Selene really struck a chord with me - on the surface she is a "pseudo-villain" with a mean mouth and regards money as life, but in fact she is gentle at heart and specializes in all kinds of brain-dead plots. This contrast is simply amazing! Entering the binding system of Ye Luoli's world, he was clearly asked to be a villain and cause destruction, but he insisted on "carrying out tasks creatively", doing all the bad things on the surface, and secretly correcting the outrageous plots of quarreling over quarrels and misunderstandings. Watching Ye Luoli's protagonists were silenced by him, and watching Mandola's conspiracy being easily disrupted by him again and again, it was really exciting!

Ten thousand times more beautiful than Ye Luoli's original work! There are no brainless misunderstandings, the protagonist is not internally conflicted, and watching Selene deal with the weird plot is really relaxing.

Well, it's probably a bit stronger than a saint-level fairy. Especially delicious I go to. Little electric mouse, the long-haired white-haired beauty stabbed me to death. Well, especially if you go to Mandola, why don't you take me? I came here to feel sorry for the puppy. Oh my gosh, it's so annoying. A little too little, too little.

Hmm... How should I put it... The traces of Al's brush strokes are more obvious, and it's a bit repetitive and uncomfortable to look at, but the content is still okay.

I will never get tired of these two settings: poisonous mouth and explosive hair.

The creditor and debtor settings of Electric Mouse and Luna are perfect! Pang Zun will never be able to escape the debt of 400,000 yuan in this life, hahahaha

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"It is natural to pay back debts." Delicious.