Immortal Hokage: How Many Years Have You Been Playing in the Ninja World?
长生火影:你才玩忍界多少年?
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Explore more →Naruto Has No Masterpieces (Except Dave, Artist, Sister Juan's, and Divine Land)
The Hokage Has No More Masterpieces to Argue With.
A New Fanfic That Really Brings Out the Content of Naruto and Has Excellent Writing Style ~
Is there any new Naruto fanfic on Tomato that has novel, strange, surprising content, smooth writing and connotative content? If the number of words is less than 30w, please avoid it~Please give me some advice~
Childhood Anime! ! Fanfiction! ! Please! !
For example, childhood animations such as Magical Soldiers and Bears
Do Not Enter the Great Emperor of Shuhuang If It Has Less Than 3000 Hours.
Naruto, the Heroine Is Best Tsunade, the Content Is Better
High Quality Fanfic
High-quality anime fan fiction, preferably more than 500,000 words
Is There No More Masterpieces in Naruto's Current Life?
Animation Fans Can Do Anything, They Have to Be Smart
Don't write nonsense
Naruto's Single Heroine Hinata Is Invincible in the Later Stage.
Written on the topic.
At Present, There Is No Masterpiece in Naruto Acting. If You Are Not Convinced, Come and Argue!
Play as Naruto in Another World
It's True That Naruto Is Getting Worse with Each Passing Year, so We Can Only Use the Previous Books to Compare.
I want to read a book similar to "Naruto: Beginning with the Twin Kamui".
Burn to the Extreme! ! ! a Book That Even Boruto Cannot Download
Looking for High-Quality Naruto Stories
I'm Tired of Saying "No Heroine"
Is There Any Hokage Who Is at His Peak at the Beginning?
Do You Have Any Books About Bengtie, Genshen, Porridge, Zzz? There Has Been a Shortage of Books Recently.
Want to watch something like "Star Iron: Attack the Black Tower, or be conquered by her!" Content. Only Haihe can save this land! ! ! Praise Haihe! ! ! Join the crowd! ! ! Let Daqun lead this land into the future! ! ! ۥۚۚۥۥ۟۟۟ۡ
Looking for Naruto, Someone with a Score of Nine or Above 😘
Demon Slayer, I've Read Too Many Books About Da Muzan, Have You Ever Turned into a Ghost and Become a Villain?
Want to watch something similar to "Demon Slayer: Becoming a Demon, I'm Redemptioned!" Book. I have read too many books about being a decent person and fighting against Muzan, and I want to see someone turn into a ghost and become a villain to fight against the Demon Slayer Squad.
Samsara Eye Is Invincible at the Beginning
The Lone Ranger Is Invincible, No Heroine, No Holy Mother, Decisive in Killing Without Pretense
Invincible, no heroine, no holy mother, decisive in killing without pretense
No Heroine! ! ! Don't Be Ambiguous with Girls, Don't Be Sister-Controlled, Sister-Controlled, Etc.
Naruto, Naruto Is Invincible at the Beginning, Not the Holy Mother.
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It's really good, and the character changes of the protagonist are also very well portrayed, from the young and frivolous at the beginning to the wisdom of having lived for hundreds of years. Moreover, this book always has one or two lines that shocked me when I thought it was a purely divine novel. It's not bad [laughter]
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Seniority is also constantly evolving into an older one. The older he gets, the stronger he becomes. He controls the ninja world. He is the black hand of Mt. Myoboku, the adoptive father of the tailed beasts, and the teacher of the old man of the Six Paths. He is the man who makes Kaguya feel guilty all her life. It is you, seniority.
It is unique among all Naruto stories and is worth reading. The protagonist initially promised to allow a fair fight between Indra and Asura, and then continued to interfere in the fight between their thousand-year reincarnations, which did not look good.
It is more delicate and is a relatively good novel. It is already ranked in the second tier on Tomato. If it is further optimized later, it can reach the first tier. The exciting content of each chapter is not much different. The first is more lively and funny, and the second is more calm. If you are not a book reader, you can read it. The shit-stirring stick started to explode when he entered the Sannin period. Since it was okay at the beginning, I gave him an average one first. It was too shitty.
Let me start by saying that the book is good and the subject matter is okay. I just want to complain about it. The character change of the protagonist is rather blunt. I know that the protagonist has been stabbed in the back and lived for a long time, but you clearly said that you want to fight against the Otsutsuki clan, so why don't you unite the ninja world to concentrate on development? It is something that the protagonist has the power to do easily, but there are various reasons not to do it, and some plots are very strangely written. The ninja world is in ruins, and the people are in dire straits. I have written about this several times, and Kyuubi has come to remonstrate with me, hoping that the protagonist can put things in order. But the protagonist refuses to go, even if he agrees, and keeps delaying it on the grounds of the thousand-year duel between Asura and Indra. Later, the alliance of eight tribes captured the tailed beasts in order to unify the ninja world and stop the wars in the ninja world. (Isn't this what the protagonist should do?) The capture error coupled with the fact that Erwei wanted to die and wanted his own death to promote the protagonist, so when Erwei died, the protagonist began to grieve and broke through the Sixth Level. ? This plot is very inexplicable and strange. One person has to be sacrificed in exchange for the protagonist's improvement, and then the protagonist is asked to pretend to be 13. What a cliche plot. The author probably wanted to write about a young man who slowly loses his true nature after experiencing betrayal, wasted time and various things, and finally wakes up after experiencing something unforgettable. Although it is cliché, it is classic. But the author didn't write it at all, or he only wrote the surface. Despite all the negative reviews, this book actually has some merits. The protagonist is behind the scenes in the middle and later stages, and his reputation is known to be very high in the ninja world. There are also some small daily writings that are pretty good, right? I am still looking forward to this book, and I hope that the author will write better and better, and more and more people will read it.
Not bad, not bad, very fat, and the amount of content that can be described this time is very large, starting from 6 to 17, I can even make some homemade ones in the previous chapters, don't worry about not having enough chapters or anything like that😋😋😋
It's really good, but the pace is really slow. It's suitable for reading books, but I'm worried that the book will die if I keep reading it. The ratings are very low and the flow rate is bleak. I beg the author not to stop updating [OK] [face covering] [face covering]
I think this book is very interesting. The protagonist is constantly pursuing the Six Paths. Moreover, the theme of this novel is very novel and is about immortality. However, I hope this book does not have a female protagonist. I prefer the kind of mastermind who is the person behind the scenes. It feels better to read it this way. Overall, this book is good and I highly recommend reading it. Finally, I hope there will be no female protagonist. The author will work hard to update the book. It is best to update 100 times a day.
It was very interesting, I finished reading it in one go. Woohoo, too little, not enough to watch. . Witnessing the protagonist's transformation from young and frivolous to plain and ordinary, commonly known as seniority, I was really moved by the friendship between the protagonist and the White Monkey King. I really feel that it is a pity that the White Monkey King died of old age. One after another, the protagonist's friends die before the protagonist. I feel like the main character is quite lonely. This book is one of the most beautiful I have ever seen. The writing is great and the plot is compact. A small part of the original plot has been modified [including Hei Zetsu being kidnapped by the protagonist to work]. The protagonist is made to be invincible and unfathomable. However, the protagonists of this type will not change the fate of the original work (actually, the author burned all his brain cells to think of it), and quit if he wants to see rivers of blood flowing.
It's very interesting. I hope the author can persevere and don't give up halfway. Whether it's the character's personality or the action, it's all in line with my liking. The plot is coherent and the timeline is smooth. And the subject matter is very novel, but the process is also difficult The author must work harder to get more support. I also hope that the update will be faster. It's not enough to read [Like] [Read carefully]
A very good book, with novel writing techniques and fundamentally different from other fan fiction. The characterization is good. Let me talk about the pros and cons. This book is very humorous, and it is not a brainless novel. The protagonist's early development is like seeing through the world in the middle of the longevity novel. The author deliberately suppressed the combat power and did not let it collapse too much. At present, if you are tired of reading mindless and cool novels, you can take a look. There is a system, but this system is used by the author to give the protagonist time to participate. The disadvantage is that there are relatively few fighting scenes as of Chapter 79, and the protagonist's combat power is high. This article is also very special among online novels, because the protagonist himself is too strong. The criticism is that the protagonist doesn't have a strong obsession with too many things, which may make it less enjoyable after almost 100 chapters. Current predicted outcome: (Prerequisite: the protagonist becomes Six Paths) The first ending: the protagonist kills all Otsutsuki or finds a way to avoid Otsutsuki, and has a way to resurrect everyone. The second ending: Well, I can't tell clearly, but it must be similar to the ending of the Chang Sheng novel. The third ending: He finds Kongmon and goes home, but the ninja world is under his control. (This ending has been written in time travel stories, but the protagonist did not show the will of the Thieving Demon Lord) The fourth ending: This is also a common trope in online novels. The protagonist seems to be a dream but has the ability to be in the ninja world.
It's particularly interesting and the content is exciting. It's a pity that the second reincarnations of Indra and Asura are not together. And the plot is a bit clumsy
It's well written, and the protagonist's half-human, half-immortal mentality is spot on. Many people are so used to it that they want to accept Kaguya directly, but they get nervous when they see Kaguya and Tsunade. In fact, every protagonist cares about the same people. Kaguya and other protagonists will definitely be able to eat it after accompanying Tsunade I. The result is in line with the original work, where the stupid and arrogant person asks the protagonist for an explanation. Then the protagonist will definitely not be able to agree when he sees that Kaguya's nature has not changed. Each character's personality is consistent with the original work, and the plot is well written. ? I don't know what the world is anymore? Kaguya writes smoothly and somehow falls in love with the system? Have you opened the second program for me? Why did it suddenly feel so rushed? Wan Zhao laid the groundwork and was so hasty?
Very creative book. The protagonist fades out of the ninja world and fishes alone for eternity. It would be great if the protagonist could defeat super movie-level figures from every era and save their remains. When the time comes, it will be very exciting to directly resurrect Otsutsuki, or reincarnate these people for a decisive battle. The ending didn't work. The power he created disappeared directly. The heroine Tsunade didn't bring her back to the earth. She only sent her son to the earth and killed Kaguya, who liked her.
I don't know what to say, can you write less about the reincarnation of Indra and Asura, and can you hurry up to Madara and Hashirama? It's not that the writing is not good, but I don't want to see crazy Uchiha like the Uchiha Fox in this life. They can be neurotic or sensitive. It can also be emotionally rich, but it is best to appear in a brotherly relationship, and it must be moderate. Now I only think that Uchiha Kitsune is crazy. The relationship between him and Uzuki (the reincarnation of Asura in this life) has no Madarabashira at all. Ina's feeling is not that interesting. However, I feel that apart from the reference to the anime setting, the main character design being annoying and the Uchiha being too consistent with my stereotype, the writing is pretty good, not above or below the level. There aren't any big poison spots (I don't think I speak for others, maybe it's because I have a relatively high poison resistance), but there are quite a few small poison spots. These are my personal feelings and do not represent anyone else's and are for reference only. Don't be a space police officer!
The ninja world version of Yi Xiaochuan, I don't need to tell you what kind of Yi Xiaochuan is. Huge poison
The narrative is smooth and worth reading The protagonist has more selfish desires, and his calmness means that he excludes everyone except himself from his heart, and only puts himself in his heart. It's not that he doesn't care, it's that the area he cares about is relatively small and he only weighs the pros and cons. The story as a whole is innovative, the plot does not fall into the stereotypes, and the author uses many jokes, making it lively and interesting to read.
The introduction looks cheerful, but overall it is still a relatively sad immortality story. The delicate writing style aggravates the sense of sadness. The protagonist's transformation from youth to sedimentation is lamentable, and you can intuitively feel the growth and loss. I really like what the White Ape King said, to the effect that "an old friend always retains a part of his past self, which allows me to recall my original appearance and your high-spiritedness." There is a weight of time. If an immortal is not accompanied by an equally immortal companion, will he be crushed by this ever-increasing weight one day? There is no conspiracy theory about the Immortal of Six Paths, and the writing and description are excellent. Because the time span is long and there are no events, the plot is relatively bland, and the loneliness of Changshengwen always lingers, and I can't adapt to it after all. But this does not prevent this book from being a good work. If you accept it or are interested, you can read it.
It's very interesting. The author's writing is very detailed, the protagonist is also very vivid, and the characterization is also good👍. I hope the author can continue and maintain the writing style and not forcefully add some poisonous points in order to promote the development of the plot. I also hope that the protagonist will become more and more vivid in the future. I hope that I can see the change of the protagonist's personality in the time dimension. But everything is done at the author's own pace, and there is no need to deliberately cater to the readers and write in their own style.
The charm of the game, the delicate operation, the ultimate deception, the mystery of the details, the violent infliction of damage, the exquisite basic attacks, the pressure of the brother, Nagato's ultimate intention, Xiong Er's honey, the secret of the ancestral grave, the traces of the parents, the girlfriend's best friend, the privacy of the hotel.
A veteran of the ninja world who has been in the ninja world for thousands of years I can't bear it. Except for Tsunade's part, everything else is pretty good. Let's continue with the 5 stars.
Full of emotion, vivid characters, just published, low rating, but very interesting
It is a very good book, the writing is very delicate, and the characters in it are vivid and three-dimensional. It is highly recommended. If you just want to read interesting articles and read for your own enjoyment, you don't need to read it. The author must persevere in writing [Blow a kiss][Flow a kiss][Flow a kiss][Flow a kiss][Flow a kiss][Flow a kiss]
This book is really good to read, especially the description of Lu Bu fighting Sun Wukong for hundreds of rounds for Diao Chan, but Xue Baochai is really too strong. If Nuo Shou hadn't scraped the outer ring one by one and added Noxus' guillotine, this wave of M4 six times strafing would have killed him. I prefer what Zhuge Liang said to the 108 monkeys in Huaguoshan, "Young man is proud, don't show off in front of your brother Liang", which shows Zhuge Liang's indignation at the monkeys who knocked him to death with three sticks. All in all, this book has an interesting plot
Lao Deng! More updates soon! (Crazy) Let me tell you! (Sincerely speaking) If you don't update, some readers will post a picture of another author who updates 68 chapters or tens of thousands of words a day, or they will compare the production team's donkeys with you, etc. (Frowning) So for your safety (serious words), you must update 100 chapters a day to avoid being ridiculed by other authors! I won't be ridiculed by readers! Only then can you have your own pride! Only then can you mock other authors! (Broken sound) [anger] [anger] [anger] [anger] [anger] [anger] [anger] [anger] [anger] [anger] [anger] [anger] [anger] [anger] [anger] [anger]
It's okay. A large part of the plot of Naruto is correct, but some of the plots of you, the author, are wrong. For example, the Ten Fist Sword artifact is actually Itachi's own Susanoo weapon, and the Shinigami is actually made by the Six Paths Sage. The magic of the Six Paths Sage is not described. Toya mentioned it in Boruto. Overall, it's okay. It's better than 90% of the Naruto TRs in the world.
It's quite interesting. The protagonist, Manji, takes the future Sage as his disciple, the Sage of Six Paths, the White Snake Sage... Kaguya stabs Manji in the back, and then accepts him. He recalls that one of the sons of the night was his apprentice, and later killed Kaguya, and Wanshi became the leader of Mt. Myoboku, and Gamamaru was his apprentice. Later, the nine ghost beasts were all in Mt. Myoboku, and I don't know what happened after that. In the longevity novel, the protagonist does not become invincible all of a sudden. He has a strong ability to learn immortal arts, and then combines the four immortal arts to become almost invincible. It is stipulated that if you don't take advantage of opportunities, you will not reach the Sixth Level. I don't know about it later.
This cannot be sprayed. Her body lines are very graceful and her posture is perfectly managed, giving people a sense of elegance. Her face is deeply contoured and her facial features are distinct, especially her deep eyes, which attract people involuntarily. She always has her hair well combed and looks smart and energetic. But when she smiles, her whole person becomes warm. Her smile is so charming and makes you feel so comfortable. She has a very strong character and she has unyielding perseverance and determination. No matter what difficulties she encounters, she will persevere and work hard until she succeeds. She is very smart and good at thinking and analyzing problems. She is always able to find the simplest solutions to complex situations and make the right decisions quickly. She has a strong personality and always attracts people's attention. She has a gracious, humble, and honest quality that makes people feel comfortable and reassured. Although she is very good, she is not arrogant. On the contrary, she always maintains a humble attitude and continues to learn and improve. She is a very special person in appearance and character. She has a perfect figure, graceful lines, deep and distinct facial features, and a charming smile. She is determined, smart, and charismatic, yet at the same time humble, honest, and not arrogant. These descriptions gave me a better understanding of her image and personality, and also gave me a deeper understanding and respect for her, so I really like this
I have been following this book for several months. Overall, it is okay. I just hope that the plot can enter Shippuden quickly. There are some bad points, but they are not harmful. I can give a score of 8 points.