Qingyun, the Concubine of the Red Mansion

Another kind of fiction, retaining the stereotyped image of the character in Red Mansion. At present, it seems that the main character Jia Huan's fantasy of being in charge of Rong Ning's second house is a bit of a drama, but otherwise it is acceptable. It is really feasible for Mrs. Wang to make things difficult for her by lying on the ice to beg for carp to damage her reputation [laughing and crying] The protagonist, a time-traveler, is really unreliable. Even Jia Jing knows his identity.

The writing is very good. I don't know why the rating is so low. There is only one problem. The writing of Jia's mother is too ignorant. The old lady has lived so young and knows what is going on in her family. It's not easy to get Jia Huan. She will only support him and not make it ugly. But it is written like this, which makes it lighter and very refreshing.

This is the best book I have read on Red Mansions. There is an article about Jia Huan's rebirth next door. It has more than a thousand chapters. I didn't read this one and thought that one was the ceiling in foreign persimmons. But after reading this one, I can only take second place. I feel like I didn't come here to be a big grudge! I read a few messages, and they expressed their dismay after reading my comments. They felt that Jia Huan should save Jia's house from being ransacked, and that Jia Yuanchun should be pampered forever. I don't understand that what people in a modern civilized society enjoy is the principle of equal dignity and the principle of natural rights for everyone: the right to life, the right to freedom and the right to pursue happiness. Why did he save the nobles who protected and exploited people in feudal society?

I have read Chapter 113 so far. The writing structure is clear, the plot has ups and downs, and the characters are completely portrayed. As long as the author maintains this writing idea in the future, it can be called a good article of Red Mansion [Like] After reading the latest chapter, I feel that the protagonist will have a harem later. Although it is very common in ancient settings, I still hope that the protagonist can be with Daiyu for the rest of his life.

I basically can't stand many Red Mansions novels. This novel is good. It describes the physical and mental pleasure of the inner house. It does not engage in things that are entangled in the inner house of a woman's home. Be decisive when it is time to be decisive. Focus on your career and don't get entangled. Your character is vigorous and resolute, and you are decisive in killing. I hope you will always be able to do so. In order to keep it looking good, I think two or three confidantes are more suitable. They feel good with Daiyu. The current chapter already has Xiao Jixiang, Caixia, and Zijuan. I feel that Xiangling will become the aunt in the end. There is already this foreshadowing. I think there is no need to do so much with the aunt. Everything else is currently available After more than 300 chapters, the King of Jin conspired to rebel. It is no longer interesting. There will be no more updates in the future.

This novel will definitely become popular, the plot is so exciting There are a few comments, but the writing is good. The author's Jia Huan is a young man who is as cold as jade and is astonishingly talented. He is Kozaburo who lies on the ice for his mother. He is eloquent and talented. When he is weak and helpless, he will temporarily succumb. When he is strong, he has self-reliance, dares to fight, is not afraid of power, and lives his own world! My destiny is vividly displayed by my involuntary domineering attitude

This is the second novel adapted from Dream of Red Mansions in which Jia Huan takes part in the scientific examination as the protagonist. Now that I have read more than fifty chapters, the male protagonist does not have all kinds of fantasy time traveler skills. The description of the male protagonist and other characters is very realistic. The story is step-by-step, and the male protagonist works step by step, using his modern knowledge to get out of trouble and change his destiny.

It's rare to see someone with real emotions like this. It's not bad. I especially like the few lines in the conversation with the net monk. Where did you copy some of the words? Are you a professional writer? As a newbie, some vocabulary is really good.

It's really good. The writing gets better and better as the writing progresses, the more picturesque it becomes. I feel like I have my own character and the characters come alive. The various links are compact and the time development is very logical. It is really good and it is a meaningful book.

Not bad, the logic is clear, the plot is reasonable, everything is there, the protagonist's character is not rigid, not extreme, not ostentatious, in short, it is just right, there is no poisonous point, if you can continue to maintain it, you can look forward to the future

He has a brain and knows what he should do, be cowardly when he should be cowardly, and be tough when he should be tough. There is no plot that forces a happy reunion, and there is no need to coax this and that in the garden all the time. Basically, you only want to be good to people who are good to you or useful to you, rather than the kind of thing that no matter how you treat me or humiliate me, I will still rush to please people. The protagonist has good times and bad times, mostly good times. When he is happy, he feels very happy. When he is suppressed, he tries his best to think of countermeasures. I like the character of the character very much. As for the setting of female characters, it's not like the brainless harem stallion style where you just accept a woman. Except for Daiyu who is the heroine (the character design is pretty good), the other characters are basically restored. Miharu and a few maids basically don't have much interaction with other female characters, which is good. It's rare for Jia Zheng to be tough. There is no plot behind King Xuan. The plot is good, the writing is good, and the poisonous points are not obvious (probably because he was revealed to be an extraterrestrial person, but Jia Jing thinks he has awakened the wisdom of his previous life or recognizes him as a member of the Jia family, and then there is no plot after the monk and Taoist priest. Only these three people know about it, and it has no impact on the overall plot)

Good, very good, great good [Like] It's a pity that it's in Tomato. With this rhythm and subject matter, it's a bit difficult to come up with the data. Maybe the author should eat less hot pot and buy more. Good works deserve to be seen. Forget it, it's a niche product. Others don't look at it, but I look at it. We niche brothers win again [please update] I saw a wise comment saying that the character portrayal was not as good as the original work, and I scoffed at it at first, but then I realized, alas, Zhongchai's portrayals are almost non-spiritual, everyone has the same facial makeup, and some of the characters' personalities are far different from the original work. Unknowingly, it is compared with the original work [face covering] and it is almost meaningless to compare with other excellent fan fiction. The advantages of this book are its rhythm, smooth writing, dense and refreshing moments, and sometimes a bit funny. Its shortcomings are insufficient characterization, depth of plot, and insufficient details. My personal shortcoming is that since it is a refreshing novel, why not be more bold. However, among the Red Mansion fanfics I have read, this one must be in the top five. The author is talented but lacks experience [Like]

It's a good read, and the writing is enjoyable. The author is of high quality, and there are no obscene descriptions. It's purely based on the plot. He is particularly good at leaving hooks, and each chapter is involuntarily attractive to read. It was so enjoyable to read it in one breath! The only problem is that it is still being serialized, I hope it will be faster.

It's beautiful. I've seen it in the Red Mansion and it's considered top-notch. Please update it well.

Looks good, looks good, looks good! I accidentally read this book early yesterday morning. As a follower of Red Mansions, I was immediately attracted by the stories in this book. I stayed up all night until now, and I am stunned. It is simply the best Red Mansions time travel novel written by foreign persimmons.

The almost transparent concubine character in the original work was brought to life. He knew the fate of everyone in the Jia family, but he did not choose to run away alone. Instead, he stayed and played in the cracks of the rules of concubine and concubine, using imperial examinations, business management, and court intrigues to gradually earn his way to success. It not only fulfilled the regret of many readers of The Red Mansion who wanted to change the tragedy, but also wrote the warmth and warmth of the feudal family in a very real way [heartfelt] [heartfelt]

See Chapter 73. Dream of Red Mansions was only a rough reading for exams [laughing and crying]. It was written in a context that readers are already familiar with, making it easier to relate to it. So far, it seems to be pretty good for mindless viewing. Come on, author!

This book is considered very good among the Red Mansions novels I have read. It's not mindless, it has foreshadowing and shaping, and I still want to watch it after watching it. Many people say that this book is a turtle, saying that it was always suppressed in the early stage, but in fact, the situation of Jia Huan in the early stage of the book or the original work is actually very real and very realistic. I hope everyone will read it dialectically, this book is indeed quite good.

The writing is super good, and when I read the original novel, I felt sympathy for Caixia and Yingchun. I hope it can give them a good ending.

The article is generally good, I can give it an 8 points. Specifically, the character design is very good, and the digging and undertaking are well done. This has defeated more than 80% of the authors. As for why it cannot score 9 points, my personal opinion is that after reading the latest chapter, the plot is a bit draggy. Many of the chapters that should be faster are too slow to make readers feel uncomfortable, and the chapters that should not be fast are occasionally fast-paced, which makes the article less readable.

The writing is so good, the three views are correct, there is no strange discomfort, at least the three views are a correct storyline. The plot is also engaging and the design is interesting. A rare and good-looking novel about Jia Huan's rebirth.

This book is definitely fine chaff from Red Mansion, thank you to the author for your hard work [Like][Like][Like] Absolutely absolutely absolutely great.

The rating is low. The writing is sophisticated and I suspect it is the boss's vest. The logic is smooth and the pictures are connected naturally. You can read it in one go.

It's very good. I don't know if it's because there are few people who have commented on it or something else. The writing of this sub-plot is more than this. I'm looking forward to the next story and hope it can be completed. Thank you to the author for reading such a wonderful story.

It's beautiful, the plot is reasonable, it's really a masterpiece

It is a masterpiece, the writing is very solid, the plot has ups and downs, the logic is smooth, and the layout is large. The battles between the various characters in the court and the inner house are very exciting. The emotional scene with Daiyu does not take the lead. It is already tied. I look forward to the follow-up.

It can be written well, the characters are delicately drawn, and it is considered good among the new books in the Red Mansions series.

Cool articles among cool articles, cool articles with brains are rare, so they must be praised with five stars [laughing][laughing][laughing][laughing]

It's a good work. The reason for the low score is probably because it's not that exciting. The hostile forces are quite strong.

It's not bad. From what I've seen, I think the character is stable and the IQ is online.