They have wondrous, all-purpose powers, yet use them neither to develop production nor to ensure fair distribution.
There are enough resources for everyone to live in luxury, yet most people still have no decent clothes to wear.
Some live behind vermilion gates, where rotting wine and meat are passed down as “family tradition”;
while others, outside the cold windows, have their spines broken and are told it’s “simply their fate.”
Don’t ask why Heaven is unjust. Just look at how people build walls.
Flowers bloom within the walls and wither beyond them; music and song within, bloodshed without.
From the Celestial Dragons of One Piece to the noble lords of Naruto;
from the decaying Jin and Song dynasties of The Legend of the Condor Heroes to the nauseating capitalists of One-Punch Man;
from Demon Slayer, Black Bullet, KonoSuba, and Overlord,
to Dark Souls and Elden Ring...
Lu Che can only think that these worlds are sick. Fortunately, he now has the power to change everything.
Original title: Transmigrating Across Worlds: Liberating the Heavens
Brothers, look at me, look at me. Multiple female protagonists, zero poison resistance; first look at the enemy and ourselves, and then distinguish between men and women; kill them all if they should, and save them if they can; In addition, there are guaranteed to be two updates every day, one chapter each at 12 noon and 8 p. M., Each chapter has at least 2,000 words. If you have any thoughts, tell me, whether positive or negative, as long as you have something to say, I will definitely reply. Brothers, let me explain the issues reported so far. There are not many supporting characters, the scenes are not big, and it is too one-sided: this is not only the problem of my temporary lack of objective character creation ability, but also the considerations that everyone mentioned about the slow debut with the plot. There are too many inner dramas and narrations: My problem is that I write too many essays and have never written a serious online article. After I change it, I will learn to put reasoning into the plot. Why the protagonist wants to save the world, no matter what, what's the benefit: There are Tang San, Xiao Yan, and Fang Yuan as protagonists in online novels. Different types of protagonists are just a matter of choice, but it does not prevent books with them as protagonists from being good books. So if you think my writing is not good, fine, I will change it; if you think why the protagonist type is like this, I can only say that it is because it was designed like this. If you don't like it, you can read other novels with protagonist types.
It's pretty good [I learned it], but there are too many big principles and inner thoughts, which makes people tired and annoyed when reading. The novel should still take the story and plot as the theme. Don't write so many theories, theories, and inner thoughts. Just mention it at the beginning. Write more specific story plot content, and use the specific actions of the protagonist to explain your own ideas. I look forward to the author writing a more exciting follow-up
The overall concept is good, it is comfortable to read, and there are no major negative points. Overall, it is highly recommended. However, the current descriptions of liberating the world are somewhat vague. They are basically individual heroism, in which one person overthrows the ruling class and changes the world according to his own wishes from top to bottom. However, due to the short length, there is basically no description of the liberation process in each world. Furthermore, the combat power has been greatly expanded. The protagonist's current combat power is basically invincible in a world that is not so supermodel. It is recommended that you find a way to reasonably suppress the combat power, or choose some difficult worlds to write in detail, and simple world speedrunning Currently, worlds like Pirates and Naruto have not been completed yet, and they will definitely be described in the future. However, the world of Ghoul is now considered complete. This world is basically a speedrun. I hope that the changes in the lives of the original characters can be described in the future. Furthermore, I hope that the protagonist can develop like-minded comrades and cultivate his own strength or team. At present, Naruto World is the best, but the coup was successful. How the protagonist relies on business to develop his own power is basically the background. Jin Yong's protagonist also treats Quanzhen as a revolutionary base from the beginning. The rest of the main description is that the protagonist travels around the world and screams when he sees injustice on the road. I still prefer to see the protagonist's advanced thoughts collide with the thoughts of the ancients, and convince the ancients. This article uses a particularly tricky method to be mistaken for the reincarnation of Wang Chongyang, deifying himself and making others obey unconditionally. It always feels a little bit meaningless.
Surprisingly, it's not bad. The previous narrative is a bit too fragmented. I often switch to telling big truths before finishing a story, and then gradually get better. Especially the world selection is good. It can be regarded as a qualified simultaneous time-traveling novel. It can be seen that the author has made great progress. It is necessary to pay attention to the collapse of combat power that is most likely to occur in simultaneous time-traveling. The author should have a good idea of the superimposed abilities, otherwise it will be easy to use only a few skills in all worlds.
First of all, the first point is not an AI article. That's right, I don't know since when did AI writing become a threshold. Second, the author writes very well, with both memes and poems, as well as his own thoughts. You can see the changes to the story within the context of the original plot.
Yes, the three views are correct. I don't know when the first option when I read a book was the three views. Is it because I am really old? Although it is a bit immature, it is already one of the good books in Tomato. At least there is nothing that will make people complain as soon as they read it.
Babies are not born because they know the value of life. Soldiers do not charge because they know the war will be won. A flower cannot see its brilliance before it blooms, and a tree cannot see its own height before it takes root. The meaning of life is hard to find, but why live for meaning? The sky is blue and the grass is green. I want to save them. If you want to be a hero, that's enough.
After all, writing this part is relatively politically sensitive, and some Riddlers are normal, but in my opinion, 5.7 Is still too low. I think the minimum of 6 points is about the same. 5.7 Is indeed too low. In fact, I can almost understand what the author has experienced. But speaking from an individual perspective, there is no way. There is only one thing I can do, and that is to maintain the status quo and survive. There is no more.
You have to work harder🤦🤦It's like Hua Di is asking a fly. Question: Have you received the account? Answer: Still talking about the opening remarks. .
Xian Miao, keep the rhythm and don't mess up 🤔