There is obviously omnipotent and extraordinary power, but it is neither used to develop production nor to ensure distribution.
Although the resources are enough to provide everyone with adequate food and clothing, the vast majority of people are still barely clothed.
It is clear that there are people in a wealthy family, and the rancidity of wine and meat turns into "family tradition inheritance";
There are still people outside the cold window with broken spines saying "this is how it is meant to be".
Don't ask why the sky is unfair, let's look at the walls built in the world.
The flowers bloom inside the wall and fade outside, and there is music and music inside the wall and blood outside the wall.
From the Celestial Dragon Clan of One Piece to the daimyo nobles of Naruto;
From the decadent Jin and Song dynasties of Shooting Condor to the nauseating capital of One Punch Man;
From Kimetsu no Yaiba, Black Bullet, Soharu, Bone King,
Then to Dark Souls, Elden's Circle...
Lu Che only felt that the world was sick. Fortunately, he now had the power to change everything.
Originally titled "Simultaneous Travel: Liberating the Heavens"
Reader comments
Brothers, look at me, look at me.
Multiple female protagonists, zero poison resistance; first look at the enemy and ourselves, and then distinguish between men and women; kill them all if they should, and save them if they can;
In addition, there are guaranteed to be two updates every day, one chapter each at 12 noon and 8 p. M., Each chapter has at least 2,000 words.
If you have any thoughts, tell me, whether positive or negative, as long as you have something to say, I will definitely reply.
Brothers, let me explain the issues reported so far.
There are not many supporting characters, the scenes are not big, and it is too one-sided: this is not only the problem of my temporary lack of objective character creation ability, but also the considerations that everyone mentioned about the slow debut with the plot.
There are too many inner dramas and narrations: My problem is that I write too many essays and have never written a serious online article. After I change it, I will learn to put reasoning into the plot.
Why the protagonist wants to save the world, no matter what, what are the benefits: There are Tang San, Xiao Yan, and Fang Yuan as the protagonists of online novels. Different types of protagonists are just a matter of choice, but it does not prevent the books with them as protagonists from being good books. So if you think my writing is not good, fine, I will change it; if you think why the protagonist type is like this, I can only say, because it was designed like this. If you don't like it, you can read other novels with protagonist types.
It's pretty good [I learned it], but there are too many big principles and inner thoughts, which makes people tired and annoyed when reading. The novel should still take the story and plot as the theme. Don't write so many theories, theories, and inner thoughts. Just mention it at the beginning. Write more specific story plot content, and use the specific actions of the protagonist to explain your own ideas. I look forward to the author writing a more exciting follow-up
The overall concept is good, it is comfortable to read, and there are no major negative points. Overall, it is highly recommended.
However, the current descriptions of liberating the world are somewhat vague. They are basically individual heroism, in which one person overthrows the ruling class and changes the world according to his own wishes from top to bottom. However, due to the short length, there is basically no description of the liberation process in each world.
Furthermore, the combat power has been greatly expanded. The protagonist's current combat power is basically invincible in a world that is not so supermodel. It is recommended that you find a way to reasonably suppress the combat power, or choose some difficult worlds to write in detail, and simple world speedrunning
Currently, worlds like Pirates and Naruto have not been completed yet, and they will definitely be described in the future. However, the world of Ghoul is now considered complete. This world is basically a speedrun. I hope that the changes in the lives of the original characters can be described in the future.
Furthermore, I hope that the protagonist can develop like-minded comrades and cultivate his own strength or team. At present, Naruto World is the best, but the coup was successful. How the protagonist relies on business to develop his own power is basically the background. Jin Yong's protagonist also treats Quanzhen as a revolutionary base from the beginning. The rest of the main description is that the protagonist travels around the world and screams when he sees injustice on the road. I still prefer to see the protagonist's advanced thoughts collide with the thoughts of the ancients, and convince the ancients. This article uses a particularly tricky method to be mistaken for the reincarnation of Wang Chongyang, deifying himself and making others obey unconditionally. It always feels a little bit meaningless.
Surprisingly, it's not bad. The previous narrative is a bit too fragmented. I often switch to telling big truths before finishing a story, and then gradually get better. Especially the world selection is good. It can be regarded as a qualified simultaneous time-traveling novel. It can be seen that the author has made great progress. It is necessary to pay attention to the collapse of combat power that is most likely to occur in simultaneous time-traveling. The author should have a good idea of the superimposed abilities, otherwise it will be easy to use only a few skills in all worlds.
First of all, the first point is not an AI article. That's right, I don't know since when did AI writing become a threshold.
Second, the author writes very well, with both memes and poems, as well as his own thoughts. You can see the changes to the story within the context of the original plot.
Babies are not born because they know the value of life.
Soldiers do not charge because they know the war will be won.
A flower cannot see its brilliance before it blooms, and a tree cannot see its own height before it takes root.
The meaning of life is hard to find, but why live for meaning?
The sky is blue and the grass is green. I want to save them.
If you want to be a hero, that's enough.
Yes, the three views are correct. I don't know when the first option when I read a book was the three views. Is it because I am really old? Although it is a bit immature, it is already one of the good books in Tomato. At least there is nothing that will make people complain as soon as they read it.
After all, writing this part is relatively politically sensitive, and some Riddlers are normal, but in my opinion, 5.7 Is still too low. I think the minimum of 6 points is about the same. 5.7 Is indeed too low. In fact, I can almost understand what the author has experienced. But speaking from an individual perspective, there is no way. There is only one thing I can do, and that is to maintain the status quo and survive. There is no more.
You have to work harder [cover face] [cover face] It's like Hua Di is asking a fly.
Question: Have you received the account?
Answer: Still talking about the opening remarks. .
Xian Miao, keep the rhythm and don't mess up [Thinking]
For me personally, it feels pretty good. However, looking at the ratings does not seem to be in line with the public's appetite. I hope the author can go further in the next book, right?
Come on, come on, come on
The writing is quite good, but when it comes to the latter part, I always talk about some ancient poems and so on. I don't understand. I am a rough person and don't have that kind of ancient literary background [laughing][laughing][laughing][laughing]
Sometimes, absolute power is really good.
I hope I can continue to maintain the style. The Dharma Ring section is really a bit lacking.
"My name is Lu Che, and I am a person who makes people become human beings."👍👍👍
The logic is clear and beautiful.
Good book, very interesting
Overall good, keep up the good work!
Still worth seeing
I am very satisfied with this book
Because I have never been in a relationship or played Nowhere, I don't understand the emotional descriptions in it, but the other parts look really cool.
Honor comes from the people and goes to the people
It feels good so far, but I just want to be reminded when switching worlds. . .
Very good book, tomatoes are hard to find
Beautiful, love watching it! Keep up the good work, author! !
It still feels pretty good, but I don't know why the rating is so low.
Brothers, look at me, look at me. Multiple female protagonists, zero poison resistance; first look at the enemy and ourselves, and then distinguish between men and women; kill them all if they should, and save them if they can; In addition, there are guaranteed to be two updates every day, one chapter each at 12 noon and 8 p. M., Each chapter has at least 2,000 words. If you have any thoughts, tell me, whether positive or negative, as long as you have something to say, I will definitely reply. Brothers, let me explain the issues reported so far. There are not many supporting characters, the scenes are not big, and it is too one-sided: this is not only the problem of my temporary lack of objective character creation ability, but also the considerations that everyone mentioned about the slow debut with the plot. There are too many inner dramas and narrations: My problem is that I write too many essays and have never written a serious online article. After I change it, I will learn to put reasoning into the plot. Why the protagonist wants to save the world, no matter what, what are the benefits: There are Tang San, Xiao Yan, and Fang Yuan as the protagonists of online novels. Different types of protagonists are just a matter of choice, but it does not prevent the books with them as protagonists from being good books. So if you think my writing is not good, fine, I will change it; if you think why the protagonist type is like this, I can only say, because it was designed like this. If you don't like it, you can read other novels with protagonist types.
It's pretty good [I learned it], but there are too many big principles and inner thoughts, which makes people tired and annoyed when reading. The novel should still take the story and plot as the theme. Don't write so many theories, theories, and inner thoughts. Just mention it at the beginning. Write more specific story plot content, and use the specific actions of the protagonist to explain your own ideas. I look forward to the author writing a more exciting follow-up
The overall concept is good, it is comfortable to read, and there are no major negative points. Overall, it is highly recommended. However, the current descriptions of liberating the world are somewhat vague. They are basically individual heroism, in which one person overthrows the ruling class and changes the world according to his own wishes from top to bottom. However, due to the short length, there is basically no description of the liberation process in each world. Furthermore, the combat power has been greatly expanded. The protagonist's current combat power is basically invincible in a world that is not so supermodel. It is recommended that you find a way to reasonably suppress the combat power, or choose some difficult worlds to write in detail, and simple world speedrunning Currently, worlds like Pirates and Naruto have not been completed yet, and they will definitely be described in the future. However, the world of Ghoul is now considered complete. This world is basically a speedrun. I hope that the changes in the lives of the original characters can be described in the future. Furthermore, I hope that the protagonist can develop like-minded comrades and cultivate his own strength or team. At present, Naruto World is the best, but the coup was successful. How the protagonist relies on business to develop his own power is basically the background. Jin Yong's protagonist also treats Quanzhen as a revolutionary base from the beginning. The rest of the main description is that the protagonist travels around the world and screams when he sees injustice on the road. I still prefer to see the protagonist's advanced thoughts collide with the thoughts of the ancients, and convince the ancients. This article uses a particularly tricky method to be mistaken for the reincarnation of Wang Chongyang, deifying himself and making others obey unconditionally. It always feels a little bit meaningless.
Surprisingly, it's not bad. The previous narrative is a bit too fragmented. I often switch to telling big truths before finishing a story, and then gradually get better. Especially the world selection is good. It can be regarded as a qualified simultaneous time-traveling novel. It can be seen that the author has made great progress. It is necessary to pay attention to the collapse of combat power that is most likely to occur in simultaneous time-traveling. The author should have a good idea of the superimposed abilities, otherwise it will be easy to use only a few skills in all worlds.
First of all, the first point is not an AI article. That's right, I don't know since when did AI writing become a threshold. Second, the author writes very well, with both memes and poems, as well as his own thoughts. You can see the changes to the story within the context of the original plot.
Babies are not born because they know the value of life. Soldiers do not charge because they know the war will be won. A flower cannot see its brilliance before it blooms, and a tree cannot see its own height before it takes root. The meaning of life is hard to find, but why live for meaning? The sky is blue and the grass is green. I want to save them. If you want to be a hero, that's enough.
Yes, the three views are correct. I don't know when the first option when I read a book was the three views. Is it because I am really old? Although it is a bit immature, it is already one of the good books in Tomato. At least there is nothing that will make people complain as soon as they read it.
After all, writing this part is relatively politically sensitive, and some Riddlers are normal, but in my opinion, 5.7 Is still too low. I think the minimum of 6 points is about the same. 5.7 Is indeed too low. In fact, I can almost understand what the author has experienced. But speaking from an individual perspective, there is no way. There is only one thing I can do, and that is to maintain the status quo and survive. There is no more.
You have to work harder [cover face] [cover face] It's like Hua Di is asking a fly. Question: Have you received the account? Answer: Still talking about the opening remarks. .
Xian Miao, keep the rhythm and don't mess up [Thinking]
For me personally, it feels pretty good. However, looking at the ratings does not seem to be in line with the public's appetite. I hope the author can go further in the next book, right?
Come on, come on, come on
The writing is quite good, but when it comes to the latter part, I always talk about some ancient poems and so on. I don't understand. I am a rough person and don't have that kind of ancient literary background [laughing][laughing][laughing][laughing]
Sometimes, absolute power is really good.
I hope I can continue to maintain the style. The Dharma Ring section is really a bit lacking.
"My name is Lu Che, and I am a person who makes people become human beings."👍👍👍
The logic is clear and beautiful.
Good book, very interesting
Overall good, keep up the good work!
Still worth seeing
I am very satisfied with this book
Because I have never been in a relationship or played Nowhere, I don't understand the emotional descriptions in it, but the other parts look really cool.
Honor comes from the people and goes to the people
It feels good so far, but I just want to be reminded when switching worlds. . .
Very good book, tomatoes are hard to find
Beautiful, love watching it! Keep up the good work, author! !
It still feels pretty good, but I don't know why the rating is so low.