Help! Why Did the Spiritual Body Kiss Me?

It's okay, but it's not that Shuangwen is a bit aggrieved. It stopped at chapter 30. There wasn't much about this book that attracted me. I can understand that the main character is mentally exhausted and doesn't want to be exposed, but being suspected of explaining and pretending not to understand made me angry. Maybe I'm not suitable for watching this. Let's wait and see again, looking forward to the vest dropping. .

The scenes of spiritual and physical intimacy written by the author in big letters are very delicious. I really like Qiming and Night Fury! ! But there are too many repetitions, especially "just right", "with... In the eyes", "with... In the voice", "maintaining... But never... Occasionally... Occasionally showing just the right..." These words are repeated many times in Chapters 9, 10, 11, 14, 18, 21, 30, 31, and 36, and why is it that basically every time the protagonist speaks, "I really don't know... Maybe `...'?" What is the purpose of highlighting a few words with ellipses? Although I know that the protagonist needs to keep his vest, it feels a bit strange(?) And very frustrating to speak like this every time he is suspected. (The above is my personal opinion. I hope the author can reduce the number of repeated words when writing the article. I have read Chapter 37 so far.) However, the author's writing style is still very good! ! Thank you to the author for producing food (ˊ˘ˋ*)♡ Also, I wrote too much about surveillance (•́ω•̀ ٥), which made me angry (maybe it's my own problem)

The author has added an update. It's so beautiful. I like the cautiousness of the male protagonist, who doesn't rush to please others. My favorite is Qiming, such a gentle spiritual unicorn. I also like his master Gu Chengye. I'm looking forward to the author's next plot. Don't stop updating and abandon the article.

It's not bad, but the protagonist is a bit frustrated and doesn't know when he will regain his strength as a boss and take control of his life.

I think this book looks very nice and the writing is good. I admit that I laughed when I saw Xiaojia constantly changing rooms. I prefer Qiming and Xuanji. I hope Xiaojia can recover her mental power soon. The dry mental picture is so distressing. A god-level guide should look like a god, but hiding it now is more valuable. Yes, I am very satisfied with the character design of the protagonist. I have considered it very clearly. I feel sad when I see Xiaojia as the savior in the previous life. I am always thinking about others. Maybe this is the charm of Xiaojia. I am attracted to him. Finally, I sincerely hope that the author will be inspired. It is best to update 100 chapters in one day to scare me to death [Send heart]

I was scared to tears by my literary skills

It's okay, I just feel so suffocated

Author, have you ever considered changing the title of this book to "Rebirth of Me in Another World 996" about me saving the whole world and still being a cow and horse in another world?

It's very beautiful. Is it no cp?

Okay, the rhythm is pretty good

It's a bit tiring to watch, but it's not bad.

The author's writing style is very good and he writes well.

The writing is very good, but I feel that the emotional line is too little described, all of them are about the spiritual body liking the protagonist.

Like it, super invincible giant likes it!

Looks good so far

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking, good-looking

Big cheers for the author

It's very beautiful, and the writing is very good. (★≧▽^))★☆

This novel is very well written. Can you update a few more chapters every day?

There is no frivolous content, it is not a cool article, and it is slow to warm up. But it's more thoughtful and the writing is okay. There aren't many articles about tomatoes anymore.