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Traveling through the world of collapsing iron, Bai Qiuyang was bound to a rich life by the system at the beginning.
The white-haired beauty opposite sneered and waved her sword: "Another fertile evil creature!"
Seeing that he was about to be chopped down, Bai Qiuyang suddenly threw a master ball with a 100% hit rate.
Bite! Successfully conquered the legendary elf: Mirror Flow (demonic body state)]
[Current intimacy: -100 (hate locked)]
I held my head and crouched in defense: "Can the system allow returns?!"
System: "Dear, after-sales service has been closed~"
The next day's Xianzhou headline: "Shocked!" The unknown guest actually used a strange sphere to kidnap the previous sword head"
"I just want to have an in-depth exchange of feelings with my wife, but why are they so difficult to deal with one by one?!"
Warm reminder from the system: Host, survival comes first, strategy... Just let it happen.
Reader comments
I like this theme. I remember there was a book called Palu. It was about catching black swans at the beginning. I also liked that book, but it's a pity that the book didn't stand up to Shen Hejian. Author, stay alive.
That's it (no corner is given to wood)
Suggesting that the protagonist train high-level immortals like Meng Ling is definitely not because I am jealous.
It feels pretty good. Compared with other Bengtie fan novels, it is more readable and there is no feeling of abandonment or impatience. There may be some problems in some details, such as the level of combat power or the performance of Ling Shi does not match his character, but generally speaking, it is easy to arouse readers' interest in reading. It is a good work in fan fiction. I look forward to subsequent updates.
I hope to complete the combat power system and improve the character image. If possible, I hope the author can add an aspect of growth to the protagonist's personality, improve the protagonist's personality, and improve the protagonist's combat power. Otherwise, it will look awkward and there will be a feeling that the protagonist is of no use.
It's okay, but there are some minor problems in the first few chapters. The injuries suffered by the Immortal Boat Man are not considered minor injuries.
The plot is very good and the characters are well developed
Really good, like it
Not bad, it tastes like that
Five stars for encouragement
Good looking, the Seer version is broken
Although I haven't read much yet, I think it's a good book based on my years of reading. [Blow a kiss]
Five stars, even though the author is dead
I only have one question. Esta's level is actually higher than that of Kage-ryu, and Kage-ryu is still a commander.
I like this theme. I remember there was a book called Palu. It was about catching black swans at the beginning. I also liked that book, but it's a pity that the book didn't stand up to Shen Hejian. Author, stay alive.
That's it (no corner is given to wood) Suggesting that the protagonist train high-level immortals like Meng Ling is definitely not because I am jealous.
It feels pretty good. Compared with other Bengtie fan novels, it is more readable and there is no feeling of abandonment or impatience. There may be some problems in some details, such as the level of combat power or the performance of Ling Shi does not match his character, but generally speaking, it is easy to arouse readers' interest in reading. It is a good work in fan fiction. I look forward to subsequent updates. I hope to complete the combat power system and improve the character image. If possible, I hope the author can add an aspect of growth to the protagonist's personality, improve the protagonist's personality, and improve the protagonist's combat power. Otherwise, it will look awkward and there will be a feeling that the protagonist is of no use.
It's okay, but there are some minor problems in the first few chapters. The injuries suffered by the Immortal Boat Man are not considered minor injuries.
The plot is very good and the characters are well developed
Really good, like it
Not bad, it tastes like that
Five stars for encouragement
Good looking, the Seer version is broken
Although I haven't read much yet, I think it's a good book based on my years of reading. [Blow a kiss]
Five stars, even though the author is dead
I only have one question. Esta's level is actually higher than that of Kage-ryu, and Kage-ryu is still a commander.