Craftsmanship

The author's writing style is very stable, yes, stable. Just like the protagonist forging iron and refining his body, he went step by step and read the whole book. For me, who has been reading for 20 years, there is almost nothing objectionable. The writing is very solid and stable.

The male protagonist is mature and stable, has a stable personality and does not lose his temper, treats people sincerely, has brains, majors in the physical body, five elements and spiritual roots. He should have a special physique or bloodline, and his physical training and recovery ability are better than others. The weapon is an epee, and the main refining tool is fast to learn and absorb. The external gold finger is a ring. Regarding the weapon refining avenue, it is similar to the system, with a progress bar. The first 70 chapters are from the novice village to the battle plot. The supporting characters are written with flesh and blood and have many swords. Watching the male protagonist rise from the bottom to being a respected weapon refiner, I just felt that when I first entered the battlefield, I was melancholy for a while. I needed the supporting characters to promote the plot and almost died before I became serious. In Chapter 70, the story gradually gets better after crossing the mountain and reaching the world of immortality. It has the flavor of a mortal cultivating immortality, not a genius. Summary 4⭐, there are some minor flaws in the front but it does not affect the overall story. The novel is still great and it is worth following. Good luck to the author. [Like][Like]

It's very good to read, not in a hurry, not in a hurry like some books, like some wild dogs chasing after you. Top-grade fairy grass, but if some brothers have read too many fast-food invincible articles, they may be a little impetuous after reading this, but! Brothers, it's really good to calm down and watch [Like]

It's a good book. There are flaws in the first 70 chapters, but the writing is on point. It gets better and better as it goes on. It has a bit of a flavor of watching the rise of mortals. The character of the protagonist is well established and focuses on love and righteousness. It's pretty good. The supporting characters also use contradictions to highlight the character's character. They're well portrayed. It's not like some books where I can't remember the supporting characters. The more I look forward to the rise of the protagonist, it is a good book, but it is short, but it is worth reading. This book is dull with a little passion, and the passion is also a little pathos. Overall, it is a good book. I hope that the heroine can be decided as soon as possible, preferably with a single heroine. If there are more than one heroine, the flavor of the book will be lost. Without a heroine, the book will feel like there is a gap in the book. The male protagonist is a person who attaches great importance to love and justice, and there is definitely no shortage of girls who like him, but he is neither passionate nor sentimental. I hope the author can handle it well.

I read about 400 chapters in two days and couldn't bear to read it. The author's writing is really good. This is the best book on the theme of weapon refining that I have ever read. The protagonist is very stable and has a clear conscience in doing things. There are many things that I like, but I am stupid and I think this rating is low. I highly recommend this book. It is really good and well written. I hope the author will be faster. Come on.

The author's writing style is very delicate, and his emotions are well portrayed. It can be seen that he has a profound writing skills. I have listened to 10 chapters so far. Secondly, let me talk about my personal opinion. I may have read too many protagonists who are flexible and adaptable. I don't know whether the protagonist's aura in this book is too strong or too fierce. Also, his grandfather asked him to take good care of the blacksmith shop. Didn't he know what he was like when he was squeezed by the man next door? He had to leave the mess to the protagonist, and in the end he almost couldn't even eat. 600 Taels is really a lot, and the young master's family was beaten and it was revealed just like this... Although there are restrictions, if the immortal's family is beaten, you can definitely use this request to win the workshop! It may be because of the contradiction created below. Other than that, everything else is pretty good.

The author's writing skills are good, and several battles are vividly written. The protagonist is a lucky boy who meets good people everywhere and follows the right path. He has never experienced setbacks or humiliation, and all the hardships are turned into good fortune without stopping. His emotional life was uneventful, and along the way he met many brothers and women who had a crush on him, and they left him as soon as they broke up. Perhaps for this reason, the story still lacks suspense that makes people empathize and pay strong attention to the fate of the protagonist at this point, which indirectly reduces the appeal of the work.

Very well written. One of the few good books I've read in recent years. I haven't read them in fast forward. There are very few novels nowadays that can make people calm down and read a story. It's refreshing and refreshing. I still like to read this kind of book.

It looks good, the rhythm is good, the character is good, the details are good, the friendship is good, the characters' thoughts are good, so far, everything is good, but according to the current progress, the follow-up length of this book will be very long, and it will be more difficult to control the quality and logic of long-term romance novels later on. If the author can maintain the quality of the first two chapters, this book will have a guaranteed 9.1 The author should really change his introduction. For a good traditional fairy tale, the introduction is the same as a mindless and refreshing article. The introduction is really bad. Isn't this just trying to trick people who like reading enjoyable articles into killing them? Go and change the introduction. The introduction still says Wu Feng weighs 300 pounds. The protagonist is now a thousand pounds strong. It will be said in the future. Change it now. This kind of introduction is cool and the content of the book is easy to be criticized by people who like to read mindless cool articles. They will think that your pace is too slow and your writing is very ink. It is unnecessary. Add a few tags to the introduction, such as slow reading, three views, mortals cultivating immortals, etc., To filter out people who like to read cool articles. People who read cool articles like to chop, chop, kill, and do whatever they can, without considering humanities at all. The quality of your book is good, and there is no shortage of readers who like you. There is no need to cater to their rhythm [laughing]

The work is really well written and very detailed. I can be considered an old bookworm who has read for nearly 1,000 hours. If the quality of this novel can be maintained, it will definitely be in the upper reaches of tomato novels [Blowing Kiss]. Maybe some settings are not so popular with the public, but the rating must not be so low [I almost cried]. I took a look at the rating section and found out that someone maliciously lowered the star rating. The rating was lowered within 30 minutes of watching the movie. It was really speechless [face covering]. I hope the author will not be influenced by them and must keep writing. Time will prove everything. Come on author, I believe in your potential. [Sending Hearts]

It is one of the few novels on Tomato that I can read seriously. I have read it several times before and thought I didn't read the cover. But after opening it by chance, I basically read the latest chapter at once. The writing is relatively delicate and describes the trust between men. The protagonist is a taciturn but responsible person with great love. He has given up his personal interests several times just for the sake of the people and compatriots. He can give up the opportunity to achieve success in the mortal world to keep his promise to the old man. He can also read it in the mortal world. After everything is stable, I will give up my stable and happy life to fulfill my comrade's promise to fight side by side with me. I like it very much. Good luck to the author.

Very good, strong blacksmith style, the character of the protagonist is also like iron, except for the small problem that sometimes the left and right hands are wrongly written, there are no problems. This is a real novel focusing on blacksmithing.

Don't skip reading, starting from the first chapter, you can see that the author's writing skills are growing. The early sensationalism is a bit deliberate, but as the plot unfolds later, it becomes natural and freehand. A principled protagonist is like his anvil - rough, hard, but with a hint of warmth.

It's really good-looking. As someone who also practices martial arts and exercises, it's easy to get into the role of the protagonist. But there are many things about the protagonist that I don't have. This book is not just a novel for me, it can also be regarded as half a guideline, haha.

I have only read a dozen chapters, and the first part is a true portrayal of capital's suppression of traditional handicrafts in reality, forcing traditional handicraft practitioners to a dead end, and eventually changing careers or disappearing one by one. It is very well written.

The writing is very good, and the plot design and description are quite attractive. I like the characters' personalities and values. I searched hundreds of books on Tomato and put them on my bookshelf, but most of them lost interest after reading a few chapters. This book made me moved and refreshing. I gave it full marks because I feel that the rating of this book should not be so low, so I would like to give it a higher rating. But the title... I almost shot this article to death because of the title. We just want to know, was the name of this book really given by the author of this book? Impossible! Absolutely impossible!

I finally found the treasure. The delicate psychological descriptions, professional action descriptions, and just the right environment descriptions so far. The writing is excellent. There are no flashy words. I can only read it with the same weight and solidity as the title. It is very different from other books in Tomato. I read all the other interesting articles at a glance. This book reads like stepping on the ground. This book does not read like a Tomato book. I hope it will not be unfinished and the current style can be continued.

It's well written, with a few minor flaws, but you can tell that this is the author's hard work, and he really worked hard to write it. I admire people like the author, even if his writing is not that great, but he puts his heart into it and it is really good.

To be honest, I haven't seen such pure immortality for a long time. It is different from the current mainstream imagination cultivation, although some plots are a bit cliché, such as Goldfinger, Grandpa, and the hidden life experience of the protagonist. But the characters created in this book are really flesh and blood in my eyes, and it makes me feel like I have really returned to the passion and fascination with the world of immortality that I had when I read "Red Heart Patrol". I was actually not interested in this book at first, because of his rating and his reading, but the author's introduction really attracted me, so I read on. So far, I have read the latest chapter, which also allowed me to regain the purity of reading novels when I was a child. Although the author's plot and writing style still reveal some complexity and immaturity, I still want to say thank you to the author, and also to the author's Qin Tiexin

It's very interesting. The writing and story have a richness and richness accumulated over time.

I have read a lot of similar books, and I can say that I didn't skip a single word in this one. The blacksmithing, detailed characters, and chapter connections are perfect. I hope the author can work hard and write better chapters [Like][Like][Like]

Super beautiful, come on, you are the best [Sending Hearts][Sending Hearts][Sending Hearts] The author Da Da has a very good writing style, the characters are very delicate, the supporting characters also have many highlight moments, and the story line is very complete and smooth.

It's so good to watch. It's really rare to find this kind of writing (or body-building) that is not mindless and cool but quickly upgrades on Tomato. I also like the character of the male protagonist. I feel happy every time I see him grow. I just like this kind of slow-paced story of growing up little by little.

The writing style is high-quality and the main idea is smooth. It is worth reading.

As a 16-year-old bookworm, this author is extremely rare and can write quite well.

This book is no longer an assembly-line novel, the content is nutritious and not empty. Those who are used to reading short stories may not be used to such delicate novels. The support is very nice, deep and detailed, very real and well thought out.

It's slow to develop, but very good-looking. It's more durable than those works that are often sold instantly.

I finally saw a normal Immortal Cultivation Sect. The competition is fought within the rules. The elders do not bully the small ones, nor do they always come to compete for the chance to be the protagonist. You can see your sect teammates in team battles. Those who sell the protagonist without meeting should be called the Immortal Cultivation Sect.

The slow pace of this book is exactly its advantage. The growth of the protagonist is very well portrayed, and the words are just like the person who wrote them. I can see the author's intentions in his words.

Solid writing skills, not cliché, it really made me find gold in my shit.