Passerby Heroine: the Arrogant Golden Retriever's Ghost Boyfriend

Many people may not like this book because of the way the protagonist and Yinglili treat Anlun. But from my perspective, I am a ghost. I bind Yinglili inexplicably. There must be some purpose. So what can I do? The only way is to let Yingli think slowly and let her learn to deal with the problem [face covering] It is impossible to let me, a ghost, tell her to say anything. Separate from An Lun immediately, otherwise I will keep harassing you [awkward laugh] Instead of doing this, it is better to let her grow up, and she can deal with people like An Lun, and she can be Ying Lili's "Chu Ying" [OK]

I caught up with the big team on February 12, 2026. Overall, the pace is good. At present, there are some things that are not perfect, that is, the setting of the protagonist is a bit unusually calm and gentle. According to the situation when the protagonist bound Ying Lili at the beginning, as a normal person, he turned into a ghost in the blink of an eye and bound other people, but there was no reaction at all and he was directly brought into the role of the spirit behind him. Another point is that other people in the book review section have also mentioned the protagonist's position when An Yilunya steals the fruits of other people's labor openly. However, based on the author's description after this, it can be understood. It is not bad to let Erili completely let go of An Yilunya and break the last green plum filter for the sake of Erili's childhood knot. It's a bit confusing to say what comes to mind, but for now it's pretty good, author, please write more and enjoy reading [laughing]

The writing is very good. There are not many stories about Yinglili with a single female protagonist in Tomato. I was a little annoyed at first that there was a plot about Yinglili's achievements being stolen, but if I think about it carefully, the logic of the plot makes sense. It should be the story of character growth and love later on. I hope the author will update more

Reading the comment section before reading can indeed save you from a lot of pitfalls, but it is indeed easy to be led astray. However, I have to sigh again. This devilish online environment has made many netizens hypersensitive. As for Midoriya's problem in the negative comments, you can actually read it yourself before deciding whether to continue reading. There are only a few words in this novel. The question they said The title is about twenty chapters, and you can read it in ten minutes. Anyway, from my personal feeling, the description in that paragraph is just an addendum to the emotional development of the protagonist and the heroine. It is not as serious as the bad reviews say. Nowadays, many netizens who have been poisoned by inferior online articles tend to describe the author's small tricks to make the article more interesting as poisonous points.

I feel that the writing is okay, equivalent to seeing three normal people with intelligence and passers-by in the world. Although they look at Aki Ronya with emotions, they have intelligence and know what they are doing. The male protagonist just stays next to the female protagonist and nothing else. You can't just say that the male protagonist is possessive of the female protagonist when you get next to the female protagonist. Moreover, what the author describes in the article is to fulfill Eiriri's wish, etc. As for the heroine's relationship with Aki, I feel that the author wrote it very well, without OOC. Those who have read it can probably understand what Eiri's relationship with Aki is like. The heroine is like this now, returning to normal, with the male protagonist guiding her. I would like to make some suggestions. I suggest you describe when the male protagonist came to the female protagonist's side. Did he become a ghost when he woke up or stayed there for a while? You can also describe some of the changes in the male protagonist's mentality, such as why the male protagonist fell in love with the female protagonist, or his inner feelings before. After all, everyone has a certain sense of immersion in the novels they read. You don't have to win the heroine when you enter the world of passers-by [laughs]. Of course, I don't mean to teach the author how to write a book. I am just a personal suggestion. The author based it on his own outline. I hope the author will work hard to make more chapters.

It looks good. There is no special reason. This concise but delicate writing style is completely written by Kato Megumi himself. I can feel the gentleness in the writing style that is not greasy. It is really suitable for writing this kind of love harem. Of course, it is limited to one world, and the comprehensive manga may not be able to hold it. I'm really looking forward to how it will develop with other people in the future. Will I lose my memory and be with other people, or... Can other people see it? I feel an indescribable sense of relaxation, and I feel like I will be healed by reading his articles. It is different from other comprehensive comics, but... It doesn't feel so... Complicated! Or chaos! It's very simple, like the bland feeling of the passerby heroine Kato Megumi, but I like it very much

If you want to read a light novel, rather than what the author wants to write, where the protagonist does what he does directly, and the supporting characters applaud, then this book will definitely be good to read. However, there are so many Tomato History books nowadays, and most people have been brainwashed. When they see a male supporting character, they will say Green Turtle. In fact, the author's control over companionship is very good. I think I can abuse it a little later. When I finally become a complete adult, I find that I can get farther and farther away from the heroine. After materializing to a certain extent, I will completely virtualize until I completely disappear (actually it is a transition from virtuality to reality). If I write more about the heroine's inner experience, the ups and downs of this book will be better.

The writing is very good. From a ghost, Yinglili slowly changes, from the defeated dog plot to liking the male protagonist, and gradually enters the plot. However, there are also many original events in Youlun. It is just Yinglili's character that changes. Xia Laofei discovers something that is very curious. There is no main plot of Shengrenhui for the time being. If you don't mind, don't enter. Come on, author! [Understood] I have been talking about the problem of Yinglili's painting skills since then. It doesn't work for dozens of chapters. Is she trying to draw something that will be handed down from generation to generation? I don't like it.

It's beautiful, it's easy to get sucked in, and then find yourself angry after reading the latest chapter.

It's good. It's a normal relationship. At first I thought it was sweet to have a sword, but it's better to have two swords.

The setting of the male protagonist as a ghost is quite interesting. The disadvantage is that some of the plot advancements, including the male protagonist's character, are a bit toxic. The highlight is that the interaction between the male and female protagonists is very interesting. The special background of the male protagonist being a ghost makes the content more interesting. The book has great potential. The previous content can be revised and polished. I hope that the plot in the back is not the kind that has always been very smooth. There can be some waves. For example, the relationship between the male and female protagonists must be steadily advancing? There can be some small waves. For example, the male protagonist corrects Yinglili and wants Yinglili to give birth to live for him. When there is a conflict (after all, Yinglili is a tsundere), the emotional warming after the two parties resolve the conflict is more attractive (I think this can be done in the front), and you can also add some knives (fake) at the back. This can be a breakthrough for Yinglili to express her feelings. From the above personal opinion, I wish the author will write better

Um. . . I'm very curious about the ending. The male protagonist can leave after solving the female protagonist's obsession, but the female protagonist still feels the male protagonist's touch. From the single female protagonist label, it can be seen that Yinglili is the female protagonist, so she will definitely like her in the subsequent plot. So in the end, the male protagonist should return to adulthood after resolving his obsession? Well, another possibility is to return to the original world after solving the obsession, add a bookshelf, and wait for the follow-up. Break and throw away

This is the author's first book. I didn't think too much about it at the beginning. The plot was just a hammer in the east and a stick in the west, so there was a lot of controversy in the plot at the beginning. When I was writing about the plot where An Yilun also stole Yingli's inspiration (starting around Chapter 22), I was thinking about the fact that Yinglin also had a childhood sweetheart relationship with An Yilun in the original work and the guilt she felt when she was a child. Therefore, in my imagination, I set up that An Yilun also made a mistake that was unacceptable to the creator to break this bond. But I didn't expect that many people would not be able to accept this setting, so I would like to apologize here and try to avoid this kind of plot in the subsequent plots. I would like to thank my readers who have supported me all the way. The author will continue to work hard to write and bring more stories to you.

The writing is very good. It is finally not the kind of mindless plot with multiple female protagonists that includes everything. I have always wanted to read the fanfic of Passerby, but the ones I found before were all with multiple female protagonists. Come on, author.

I have read Chapter 126 so far, which is the latest chapter. It is really unforgettable for me. When I saw the words "I want the whole world to see you", my heart rippled. This is mutual redemption. The sparks generated by the daily collision between Tsukasa and Eiri are an excellent spice. It is the daily companionship, Tsukasa's seemingly ordinary help to Eiri and Eiri. Li's determined change, no matter which one it is, touched me. I have read many fan novels, but this one gave me the feeling that the emotions are delicate and the relationship heats up at the right speed. It is not the so-called love at first sight, nor is it sudden love, it is companionship, and companionship is the longest confession of love. I really like this book. The author, please give me more, please? Don't end up with a knife, otherwise I will feel uncomfortable for a long time.

The plot is okay and quite interesting. The author handles Yinglili's past in a reasonable way and uses his own words to completely draw a line between Yinglili and the past while starting a new story with the protagonist. It really allows Yinglili to get out of the past little by little and make a new beginning, and the beginning of the protagonist, rather than using the power of the author to make a blanket change, saying that changing one person will change this.

Although it looks very good, and Yinglili is also very restored, I somehow feel the smell of the knife that will not disappear later on. Then, Yinglili becomes a great painter with a sad and realistic style of painting?

This book is really good, especially the description of Lu Bu's fight with Sun Wukong for Diao Chan. Hundreds of people gathered together in the battle, but Xue Baochai was indeed too strong. If Nuoshou hadn't used an outer ring + Noxian guillotine, this wave of M4 six-fold strafing would have killed him. "The score" shows Zhuge Liang's indignation at the monkey who knocked him to death with three sticks. But I am more concerned about what Zhuge Liang said to the 108 monkeys in Huaguo Mountain: "Young man is proud, don't show it in front of your brother Liang. In short, this book has an interesting plot, a clear system, and many foreshadowings." The fighting scenes are so immersive, and the character descriptions are spot on!

The emotions are very delicate, and the character description is very consistent with the characters. Eiri's arrogance is accompanied by confusion about her own emotions. Kitahara Tsukasa calmly and calmly integrates the gentlest, firmest and most reassuring understanding of social human nature into Eiri's thoughts and actions. Bring about the rush of feelings between each other.

Rather than saying it is the author's generosity, it is better to say that it is the butterfly effect brought about by the male protagonist, which reduced the female protagonist's favorability towards Renya before he grew up. As for slandering Renya, those of you who have read the original work should all know what he was like before the plan was written. Okay, An Yilun did find that part a bit annoying, but other parts are pretty good [Adoration]

This book looks pretty good to me, the pacing is well handled, and it is one of the best emotionally written fan fictions. At least in Tomato I have read it, which is above average. Of course, this is a personal evaluation, and you have to read and evaluate it yourself. As the classic saying goes, a thousand readers will have a thousand Hamlets.

The gentle and clean writing style is the biggest feature of this book. If you insist on nitpicking, some plots may seem protracted, but considering that you are an anime fan, you can understand it. It's a very good book, but the current rating is not worthy of it.

It makes people fall into the trap without realizing it. The emotional description is very delicate and the process gives people a very natural feeling. It is so beautiful [cry] [cry] [cry] [cry] but it is too little [cry] [cry] [cry] [cry]

Overall, it's okay. The interaction between the protagonist and Yinglili is okay. Compared with other comics, the highlight is the detailed description of Laoli's mentality change from a loser to a protagonist. This also causes Laoli to be stressed throughout the book, which makes it look more depressing. And I don't understand why Kasumigaoka can put pressure on Eiri. If I remember correctly, Eiri is a big influence in the industry, but Kasumigaoka's light novels were cut in half. Logically speaking, it should be Erin who diverts Kasumigaoka's attention.

There is no need to say anything more. [Pause face] Everything the negative review said is correct. The paragraph about misunderstanding my daughter is even more disgusting and long. [Pause face] There is no problem with the work. It is a matter of my personal acceptance and preference.

It's surprisingly good-looking. Although I haven't read the original work, it doesn't affect my reading.

Great, no need to say more

I wish there were more sugar and no knives

It's good, I feel so warm, I feel like I'm going to disappear

Not bad👍🏻, it's quite sweet to watch