One Piece, Develop Devil Fruits, the Protagonist's Abilities Should Not Be Too Complicated
Instead of awakening the Sharingan, Zanpakutō, etc., You can use Devil Fruit to develop abilities similar to other anime characters. The main thing is a pure
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The protagonist can eat fish and fruits, and take on the form of a green dragon, and can intercept Hushaqi, Tentsuki, Kalifa, Alpha, Karina, Baccarat, Nami, Nokigao, Nico Robin, Kerra, Boya Hancock, Gion, Dole, Hina, and Ain. , Daschi, Skylark, Peacock, Yamato, Black Maria, Shirahoshi, Baby-5, Dezaya, Perona, Monet, Bellobetti, Sugar Queen, Uta, Lucky, Salinand Canet, Domino, Maginot, Sadie, Stussy
It's acceptable, some places are awkward (less), but generally it's okay. O'Hara's destruction was purely a misunderstanding (someone is the Crimson King). The protagonist came from the Omniscient Leaf, and the author made a typo at the time. Then I didn't lick anyone, I just got along normally. The reason why I didn't eat the fruit was because of the Nidhogg Fruit, and now I have eaten Thunder (you can eat two to say yes). In the end, the article was quite enjoyable. If you want to see someone who is invincible in the world within a few chapters, you can go. Moreover, when the protagonist is in Chapter 15 of the Valley of the Gods, he has just entered the general level (proficient in three-color domineering, intermediate level of domination, and can probably use a few tricks to avoid the gods). It does not mean that his combat power has collapsed. I think it is quite reasonable. I have not used my full strength so far (the sword's karma is a red snake, and it is a good trick in the future) So I think I can give it four or five stars. I think it's a medium level. I'll improve my writing and some of the dialogues shouldn't be a bit awkward. I think I'd like to give it a mid-to-high level. Don't go into too much detail about other things. The author didn't elaborate on whether Tom can get on the boat or not. He just summed it up in one stroke, so there's no need to dig too deep into it. It's relatively easy to find a book these days that isn't too piratey or too embarrassing. Fan fiction that's not too piratey and not too embarrassing is all washed up in the waves. This one is pretty good. I hope it won't be discontinued. Finally, once again, keep working hard.
It looks great, why are the comments section criticizing it?
Talk A quiet person? I want to eat this too, but I think they should have some money, right? It doesn't rain here. Is it raining over there? I want to eat this too but I think they should have some money! I want to eat this too, but I wonder if it's one of yours!
The score is low, so I can't call it a classic, but it's a logical online/non-brainless text. I didn't get tired of reading it. It's a good work.
It's pretty good. What are you scolding?
Very good support
It's pretty, a bit funny