Zhan Shen: Give You the Dawn of All Stars!

Stupid author asks for praise ₍₍ ◝(●˙꒳˙●)◜⚘₎₎ A little bit of self-promotion. In this article, CP Bai'e × Lin Qiye, (Savior × Savior), our savior group features a strong and invincible character. Bai E is the true body, and he is the ultimate upgraded messenger of destruction and destruction. Love line sweet pet, life is hard enough, eat something sweet to be happy There are also some spoilers about the middle and later plot lines in the comments. Those who don't mind spoilers can read it by themselves [Love]

To be honest, I was very confused when I saw the two-star book review "It might as well be a single book" until I read it myself. The author's wife's writing style is very good, but she is not very good at writing emotional lines. The emotional lines are generally a bit abrupt and awkward. I have only read more than thirty chapters so far. I skipped all the intimate scenes between the two. In fact, sometimes the author cannot imagine that the two people are attacking and the readers need to vote. This proves that it is not suitable for the two people to attack and the other to suffer. If it really doesn't work, we can write a no-difference or mutual attack. It's not like I haven't seen some outrageous ones, for example, Gojo Satoru and Dazai, Lin Daiyu and Voldemort, Lin Daiyu and Gin, Superman and the real person, Jason and Kinich... I think my ability to accept them is pretty good. It may also be my personal reasons. No matter how you say it, this book is actually considered a superior work, but the emotional line is considered a failure. This is not a writing guide, just a personal evaluation. There are a thousand Hamlets in a thousand people's hearts, and their personal opinions are different. Come on, I hope your mood will not be affected by my comments. It does not mean any condescending writing guidance, it is just a personal evaluation.

It's hard to comment. I don't know why Bai E and Lin Qiye are related. Is it just because they are both saviors? If he can really be entangled in these loves, what is the anger of 30 million reincarnations? For Bai E, love is too far away from him, and when he carries the weight of the whole world, he has no time to care about anything else. But if he is really happy, then it doesn't matter. My opinion doesn't matter.

It's good to watch the combination of Savior

I'm following up and want to comment on it. In fact, I feel like we newbies were particularly aggressive at the beginning, but unfortunately we lost the vote later on, but it doesn't hinder the plot, and the writing is pretty good! There is no huge poisonous point. I kind of want to see if there will be a side story later, the kind of movie that shows Xiaobai's past. Hey, I want to watch this~ Don't bow to Him!

I hope Xiaobai is pampered, hehe

When I first read the introduction, I clicked in with a confused attitude, but it's really good, the author! It cleverly integrates the two worlds very well, and does not cause serious discomfort. Xiaobai's portrayal of the main world of God of War is not OOC at all. Generally speaking, it is a book with a promising future. I hope the author will not give up and keep writing!

It's good to watch. I'm really looking forward to them watching Xiaobai's memory [laughing]. The reaction will definitely be wonderful.

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking, good-looking

It scared me to death. I thought I was on the opposite side and almost quit. It turns out that the voting results haven't been released yet. Sister Bai Shou is so happy. Come on, teacher! 😋

So far, the content is novel, the plot is not procrastinating, and it has a decent comedy atmosphere. It is worth watching.

Come on, author! Super easy to knock

Nice! The plot is fluent and the young couple is very sweet. I just stick with Xiaobai.

It looks good, but I seem to be on the wrong side of things. Lin Qiye's writing is a bit delicate.

I clicked on this book by chance, and after reading it for a while, I was really attracted to it. Xiaobai and Qiye are very easy to fight with, but I feel like I am in the wrong position? Forget it, no matter how much it is, I hope the author can continue to update it!

What the teacher wrote is so interesting [love], I have been captured by the Samoyed novice ٩꒰⍢ ꒱۶

Dear author, can you please update a few more chapters when updating? These are simply not enough [shy]

The love line is so fast

Beautiful, love watching. Don't force me to beg you to come and see me. I will do anything as long as everyone comes to see you. Tasted again and again, it's really delicious [gift]

Didn't Qiye have a transformation magic after acting for Merlin? I feel like I can turn Qiye into a female version of myself in the future.

Looking forward to Xiaobai regaining his memory [Love]

The desperate straight man died with a bang. He was so desperate. Such a good book.

Good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking

They are my two favorite good babies! ! ! ! ! Sweet! ! ! ! ! [Blowing kiss]

Good-looking, good-looking, super good-looking

It looks great, please update me soon! !

Beautiful, so beautiful

Hey hey hey hey hey

Damn it smells really good But during this period of preparation for the exam, I didn't read much about the updates. Today I saw that they were taken off the shelves... The author's homepage said it was because they were highly similar... Don't do this kind of thing—— But the good news is that the author has published a new book which is a sequel to this one [Like][Like][Like]

Author, I really love you to death, I love you to death, I love you to death, you are so beautiful! ! ! ! !