Return of the Dragon Mourner

It's not bad, but it's not as heavy as that old thief who stinks at writing fan fiction, but overall since it's a rewrite, it's normal for the style to be different. I support the completion of this book [eating melon] [love] [love]

So far, he has really healed most of my pain about the Dragon Clan novel, especially the part about Eli Yi, when she fled grandly against the sun, I almost cried [almost cried]. I really hope that none of the six of them will die. Whether it is Old Tang, Xia Mi, Chu Zihang, or Eli Yi, they all live well! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! There is still hope that the subsequent plot can be more consistent with the original work, that is, there can be more scene descriptions, and Jiangnan's split-shot style of writing, these two are really the soul [Sending Hearts]

Overall it's pretty good, I ate a few Jiangnan [laughs]

Not bad, not bad. It can be seen that the writing is relatively new, but it does have that smell. I have read more than 70 books, and this one is a top-notch one. Hey, the fragrance is too fragrant, but it is a bit lacking.

Lu Mingfei found the perfect timeline, and this time it will save everyone. [Sinister smile]

Can you make a small comment? I feel that the pace is a bit too fast. According to the logic of rebirth, the progress of the plot should be a bit too fast. The bond between the partners has not been established in daily life, and they suddenly go to kill each other. It feels like I sat in a restaurant and didn't even sit down to read the menu. Suddenly the food was stuffed into my mouth and told me that it was time to pay [crying]

It's a very gentle plot. It's a dream come true. I like the light flavor of each character's life. It doesn't have to feel the same as the original work. This style is very good. I hope you can stick to it and finish it~ [Sending my heart][Sending my heart]

Not bad, it tastes like Jiangnan.

I thought it was the continuation of the Dragon Clan, but I didn't expect it to be the rebirth of the Dragon Clan. However, each character was written very realistically, except that the encounter between Xiami and Chu Zihang was different from the original version, but it was so lively and lively. It's very good, a very high-quality book.

Very good. The writing style is also similar to Jiangnan Old Thief. Come on, keep an eye on you.

It's clearly well written, but why doesn't anyone read it?

I am very confident in my evaluation ability. I think this book is the best. It has good writing and is not procrastinating. The plot has been changed but it is not OOC. It would be great if it was like the original book, without cp but with a little bit of emotion between young people. I hope not to change it.

The part about escaping with the little monster is the most vivid part in the book [Like] [Like] [Like]

Resurrection, my Eriyi [laughs]

Jiangnan, why are you writing second creation here😁😁

Very good! The writing style has a Jiangnan flavor

It's better than Jiangnan's writing

I have no words to comment because it is so well written.

Better than what Jiangnan wrote

Very beautiful, recommended

Laying a solid foundation for food security

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking

Really nice fanfic

It looks great. I love it. Very satisfied.

666 Corn kernels were found in the septic tank.

Nothing to say, this writing style is more like Jiangnan.

Very contagious, no pressure required

The writing style is very to my liking, a very good fanfic

It's really beautiful. I highly recommend it. The character creation and environment description are really great. If a physical book is available, I will definitely buy it.

The content is detailed, the characters are vividly restored, and it's not mindless.