I'm Illya in Fate

The writing is very good. It does not use the template of the fourth or fifth battle, but creates a unique point. The characters are not occ. It gives me the feeling of watching an extra chapter similar to the special point of the FGO subspecies 🤔 👍

Super kind! This kind of daily life is interspersed with dipping beans, and it feels like the main character time travels into Illya! Write more!

The plot is okay, but as for issues such as plausibility, well, it's okay for me not to consider it. However, I still like to read the early comments of a book. Most of them come from different audiences and are more rational. This is especially true for this book. After all, the content of the article is expressed very calmly, unlike later in the book, where most fans leave comments, making some inaccuracies of the work unable to be presented. I had no problem with this book.

I probably haven't read the original work, so I can only make do with it for now. Of course, I can drag the author over to be a guinea pig. After reading it for so long, I am curious about whether the main character has a better personality. Just a little too crumbly This book is quite good, you can read more, just treat it as a leisure article

Overall, I think it's between 4 and 5 stars. First of all, the author's 3 chapters a day is really awesome. It would be nice if there were more words. Now that I've seen the boss of the latest chapter of Magical Girl Illya 2, I don't know if the combat power will collapse. In the manga, Xiao Hei is awesome, Miyu is swallowed up, and almost everyone is defeated. Especially when Illya travels and her own existence is erased, I really can't accept it. Looking forward to getting my hands on it 😊

The author, the original plot of the singularity is well written, and the character settings are also solid. These are all advantages. But don't keep writing about Chaldea. It's too bland. You can also consider writing about other content. Write more cup matches, fourth and fifth matches with different players, and the red-black battle or FSF? A purely original cup match would be even better. In this way, the character conflicts are more intense and the plot is more interesting. It would be fun to play a cup match with Illya who has all 8 cards.

New content that I have never seen before. The description is detailed. You can imagine the picture just by reading the text. The article does not explain which story line the protagonist has traveled to, which is full of doubts.

It feels like a parallel world. Isn't the Little Holy Grail inside Miyu's body?

It's quite interesting, but the protagonist in the back has completely lost the memory of his previous life? (I met the protagonist group earlier and even recognized them by name. But when I went to Chaldea and saw the servants, I didn't even recognize them?)

Anyway, books on the moon type are generally pretty good, but there are really few about Illya. Good luck, author, you write well.