The Opening of the Yi Jin Jing, Pushing Forward into Another World

The story is well written, but it is too secular and lacks fairy flavor. I personally don't agree with the author's secular principles and logic, but it's not embarrassing. It's a good story and worth reading. I suggest the author simplify the settlement process of the plug-in. It is too complicated. Writing such a long paragraph is like an eight-part essay, which makes it a headache to read.

Let me talk about my senses. I was a little discouraged from reading the first chapter and the second chapter because I couldn't understand it and the writing by Goldfinger was a bit complicated. But the next few chapters retained me, and I read to the end. The writing is good, and it can be regarded as an invincible novel. The protagonist's experiences and origins are well written. The author should keep up the good work and don't let it suck. I believe the rating will go up. It's a good novel. Please write less about folk things in the future, otherwise it will really become a nanny article.

The best of the invincible novels. Some of the invincible protagonists follow the same routine after becoming invincible. The author of this book combines the invincibility of the protagonist with the construction of a feudal society and the realization of equality for all. He also avenges any grudges in the next chapter, which makes people read without skipping a chapter. Five-star praise

The author has a profound knowledge of writing. This book is a rare good article. The protagonist uses modern thinking to gradually unblock his feelings for his family members and kill decisively. The story is told smoothly and the plot is cleverly constructed. Five stars are given to him. I hope the author will be more diligent. .

It's a bit of a mess, but the characters are well drawn, and the family's demeanor and conduct are better than most novels. Personally think it deserves five stars

Real fairy grass, revenge on the spot, the author is very strong in writing, don't be fooled by those little black comments, the core of this book is the word "refreshing", and the pace is not sluggish at all If I didn't say anything, it would be hard to say what follows.

There is a poisonous point in Chapter 27 (Personally, I feel that I put my sister in the yard and went out to handle the case myself. I said that my sister is the most important, but in the end, I entrusted my safety to a few ordinary servants, under the premise that I have offended the new county magistrate) - (Personal argument: The background is in troubled times, the protagonist is a time traveler and has martial arts, and may not have a good impression of the locals, except for his sister, in a world of high martial arts, the protagonist knows his identity as the son of a noble family) The choice of the protagonist - I want to be an official (Xiao Li) Reason-I want to create a stable small county town for my sister Personally, I feel that the author's time traveler protagonist should not read novels. His real age may be a young college student who is well-nurtured by his family, at least he has never been out of society. Guess about the author: A part-time worker or freelancer who is not very happy in life and is interested in taking the public examination

This is one of the few excellent works in Tomato. Although it is a cool article, it is not mindless. The characters are well drawn. In my opinion, this is at least a 9.5-Point or above work. In my mind, there are few works with such a high score. It is worth a read. Of course, this is just my feeling.

Yoho, it's not bad, it's a good start 😏 Wang Yiyan met a young woman online, 30 years old, and we have been chatting very well for more than half a year. Today she asked to meet, I hesitated, I said you have a family, it didn't feel good, but she said it was okay and we were just ordinary friends, so I agreed and asked her for a photo. She looked pretty. She is not far from my city. We made an appointment to meet at a milk tea shop. I didn't choose to meet somewhere else for fear of meeting an acquaintance. I arrived first that day because she had to drive for several hours. When I was waiting, I looked at the photos and thought it was another "car rollover scene." Most mobile phones have a beauty function, but when she got out of that Mercedes-Benz, I recognized her at a glance. I'm much prettier than in the photo, and I'm my type. She also recognized me. She didn't know what to say. In order to break the awkwardness, she suggested hugging me. I said yes. She smelled very good. I jumped up and sat in the milk tea shop for a while. We went to eat, but she basically didn't eat much. The whole process was spent peeling shrimps and picking fish bones for me. After dinner, she walked out of the restaurant and held my hand. I didn't break away. She said she would take me home, and I said I would take a taxi back. When I got home, I found that she had put a note in her bag and said: Update ten chapters to unlock the subsequent plot.

Come, the author, read with me I solemnly swear: Start today and never change. I will not watch dramas, travel, or get sick. I will play no games, no hydrology. Strict self-discipline, cherishing time like gold, perseverance, hard work, advocating first-class, striving for brilliance, taking pleasure in coding, being tempered into steel, and worthy of readers, worthy of youth, and worthy of the future. As an author, I solemnly declare: I firmly believe that I am an excellent author. Coding is my bounden duty. I have unlimited potential and am not afraid of hardship! I can code words diligently. I am a keyboard in the dark and a guard on the Great Wall of Internet. I voluntarily dedicate my life to code words every day and every night.

It's good-looking, the protagonist's strength has not been suppressed, the reading quality is high, the plot logic is clear, and there are some clever ideas. People say that the first dozen or so chapters are not good. In fact, the reason is that the readers are angry and have read too many bad novels. The plot development of the protagonist, heroine, important supporting characters, etc. Must be logically clear. I feel that being an official will impose shackles. How unsatisfactory are these readers' lives? Before the world view has even been developed, you are eager to question the fact that the protagonist wants to teach Kung Fu... Are you quite selfish in your life? I prefer to see the protagonist help the people around him become stronger, because the protagonist Hengqiang, what he teaches the people around him is not version T1, and the progress is not as fast as the protagonist. What are you anxious about? ? ! ! There are good things in life, but people like you still have to criticize them for being unfair if they don't catch them🙄️

Ratings don't mean everything. This novel is really considered a very good one on Tomato. There is no disgusting plot and all the supporting characters have high IQs. They are not too cheesy. It is just that the content is a bit cliche, but the flaws are not hidden. I hope the author will update more. It is not enough.

It's pretty good to watch, and the main character is invincible from the beginning, which is pretty cool. However, one thing is that the main character thought he was transported through the soul, but the main character has no memory of the body. I always thought that the foreshadowing was buried deep, and the main character was born through the womb, but it turned out not to be the case. It doesn't matter under normal circumstances. The key point is that the author wrote the emotions of the family members towards the protagonist too delicately, and was very persistent about this child who had been lost for more than ten years. Later, when the previous experience was revealed, the protagonist was transported through the soul. I couldn't accept it, as if everything was fake.

This is the aristocratic family, and this is the imperial power. Not to mention the power and scheming, at least this generous spirit opened my eyes. Compared with the imperial power of the aristocratic families in other books, it is really a piece of gold.

I gritted my teeth and watched 1/10. Let me summarize the previous plot for you. 1. The system is loaded, the protagonist is invincible, and there is a female benefactor. 2. When a dandy comes, he likes to play with good girls until they die. 3. As expected, the dude and the protagonist confront each other. The protagonist kills the dude's servant, and the dude escapes unscathed. 4. The dandy head of the family arrives and discovers that the protagonist is the head's grandson. 5. The head of the family severely "punished" the playboy who had no regard for human life, forcing him to sit in front of the wall and think about his life for a year. 6. The head of the house is very kind to the protagonist and treats the protagonist's female benefactor. The protagonist... Um... Doesn't understand his attitude towards the head of the house. Maybe he just "won't play with him"? Then I couldn't watch it anymore. I guess the sequel is about the protagonist having a happy reunion with a family that doesn't care about human life. It's a "let's make dumplings together" kind of thing. Sorry, I ran out of energy.

Although it is newly opened, the writing is very good. What's so good about it? First of all, I have to mention the character of the protagonist. He kills decisively and doesn't get entangled. The plot is not sloppy, it's simple and neat. This is very good. There will be no vulgar places where you pretend to be a grandson and slap in the face or pretend to be cool. However, we must also point out the bad points. It is too far-fetched to tie the protagonist and the officer together. There is more than one way to avoid wandering. In addition, the author treats people as mentally retarded, and the characters' dialogues are also added with the author's annotations, making it feel like reading a novel with pinyin. Overall it's still very good. I like the setting of the female protagonist and the male protagonist. Keep up the good work, Comrade Xiao Wang, you have to work hard💪

The plot is not much different from the traditional cool novel, but the author's update speed is really awesome. [Like] It's still quite interesting. As long as it's not too bad at the end and plays smoothly, it's pretty good to pass the time.

The writing skills are profound, the logic is clear, the narration is natural, there is depth and warmth, the author has taken into account almost all aspects of one thing, the writing is clever and refreshing, fine grain, fine grain [like] [like]

AI article, but it can be seen that the author put a lot of effort into revising it, and the outline is also good. I hope it can be maintained in the future.

I have tried the poison myself. The writing is excellent, the logic is clear, and there are no brainless villains. It makes me feel that the people in it are alive, not NPCs on the protagonist's invincible road. It is non-toxic and can be used with confidence [laughs]

OK. At least it's not a stupid book. Relatively speaking, it has a certain logic, and overall it looks very smooth. There are too many books on Tomato that have no logic and are inconsistent. People who read them just to show off their complete lack of logic will be left speechless. This is a fine white text. I finished reading it without skipping chapters, which is rare.

Although there are some flaws, I have to admit that this is a very good novel that I have read these days. It is a big novel. It wants to show a social type rather than a novel. This is difficult to write.

Tomato is a rare good book. It's a pity that the score on this platform is low. What this platform wants is a system of killing enemies and exploding cultivation. This is a bit complicated, but after reading more than a dozen chapters, you will find that it is really well written, the pig's feet IQ is online, the plot is reasonable, and the story development has a continuous and continuous development. Except for the supporting characters, the writing is not very good. Of course, if the supporting characters are written better, then this is a magical book.,,,,

I haven't reviewed it for a long time. It's a rare good book worth putting on the bookshelf. The emotional lines in the text are clear and the fighting logic is smooth. I just don't understand why the rating is so low. I really like this style of novel. I recommend it.

It's super interesting, especially the plot. After reading it, I felt like this is an invincible novel, and it can be written like this. But the plot is so well written, even though the writing style is nothing to say, it still feels a bit too enjoyable.

Not much to say, Invincible's novel is an absolute masterpiece. It has a good sense of human relations and sophistication, and there are basically no clowns. Everyone in the wealthy family and the court give in when they should. They all know how to judge the situation and there is no brainless villain. The single female protagonist is purely in love. The protagonist uses his personal power to create a world where people live and work in peace and contentment with sound laws and regulations. This is a matter of benevolence and wisdom. Anyway, if I am invincible, I will do whatever I want. I can help if I want to, but I won't help if I don't want to.

I saw the latest chapter 234. It was very interesting and not toxic at all. It was a lot more fun than I imagined when I read the introduction. The protagonist is invincible and there is no compulsory hatred of country and family. The protagonist just wants to live a good life with A Yu. Everything else is done as he can and goes with the flow. It is a pleasure to watch!

It's really rare to see such high-quality writing in Tomato novels, such wonderful and invincible writing. The protagonists, villains, major families, and the imperial court, all with their minds on the line, all cunning and cunning, fighting for power and profit, are really exciting to watch. I couldn't put it down since the first chapter, and read the latest chapter in one breath. I hope the author will write better and better.

The writing is not bad. I originally thought it was a brainless novel, and the name is very similar to a brainless novel. But then I figured it out. If the title of the book is not good in Tomato, it will not even have a chance to get ahead. It can be seen that I don't know if the author has any understanding of history, but the logic in all aspects can be justified, and the writing style is not bad. It can be

Personally, I think the writing is very good, the writing style is well controlled, the heroine is single, and there is a slight group portrait. As for the plug-in part, the description is too detailed, so just skip it. Support it