Traveling Through the Zerg: Falling into the Star Thieves' Den

It's very different. I like this kind of protagonist who is not weak and flexible. Compared with the poor little white flower who just goes to the countryside and follows the Romans, the protagonist is more like an adult with a stable personality and mature concepts. If you are tired of reading classic but same Zerg stories, you can read this one, which will bring a bit of freshness.

I like Lin Xu's character very much, and the plot is also very attractive. Can the author's wife tell me if it's 1v1 or np or buying stocks? Personally, I think Zhao's character is more full-bodied and charming. He is also the only one who can see that Lin Xu's strength is not simple, and Lin Xu and other male insects unexpectedly It's really cool. Huo Ran's character design is also very good. Yilan's male-hating and aloof but fiercely confrontational Chinese character is written like this in eight out of ten Zerg books I've read. It seems too ordinary to me, but the current trend seems to be Lin Xu and Yilan 1v1, so can you give me some spoilers?

It can be seen that the author is writing seriously, rather than just writing a gimmick. I have read a lot of Zerg articles on Tomato, and most of them focus on describing the relationships and inner activities of the characters. The author mainly focuses on the perspective of the protagonist, and unfolds a real different world scene by scene, with various strange and beautiful scenery. It makes people want to explore and feel immersive. The characters are also very full. The author's writing has a very cinematic feel, and the imagery is so rich that I have already thought about how to shoot it 😂

In fact, it's okay, the content is okay, and it's very novel, but the plot development is really slow, extremely slow, but in some places it's slow enough, and several characters are quite fleshed out. In some places, it's just like trying to make up for the word count, which makes people anxious. Overall it's pretty good (but I just found out that there are two male protagonists, and the other male protagonist can't be Yilan... I thought it was an NPC or the male protagonist was circling between a few people, and then the beauty ran away, leaving a lot of scumbags, to be honest, I can't beat any of them, I just want to see the beauty in the back) ) But it doesn't matter whether you escape or not. There are two eldest brothers in the Empire and the Star Thieves, not to mention the second brother. One is a male that abuses a female, and the other is a female that abuses a male. One extreme jumps to the other. No matter where the male protagonist is, the main thing is to have strength and status. But this plot is so slow that I feel anxious [cover face][cover face][cover face]I feel like it could go on for dozens or even millions of words

To be honest, it seems quite frustrating at first, but it fits the setting. It seems that there is no female insect that can match the protagonist. I sincerely recommend that the protagonist be alone and beautiful, but if it doesn't work, accept it, because the female insects on the scene have no personal charm. On the contrary, the protagonist is well portrayed, and I really can't bear to let the protagonist become an official match with these female insects. A word of complaint, don't go 1v1 with Yilan. Seeing now, I feel that Yilan has no charm. He is very strong only on paper, and his character is not fresh. He is a beautiful and strong template. He is too perfect and looks like a dummy. He is not as good as his brother. Although he is not a good character, his brother is very hypocritical and real.

It's okay to walk high and high Tiger Head and Pork Belly, as soon as I started to get into the plot, it was too long-winded and the writing was not strong enough. It almost looked like it was written by two people.

I haven't finished watching it yet, but I think it's really good. This style is one of my favorites. Well, it's really good-looking. Maybe I like to watch the protagonist suffer on the road to get rid of his feelings. It feels more gritty and energetic, and more three-dimensional. But the author didn't say whether it was 1v1 or anything else. I hope the protagonist doesn't get together with anyone. Author, I beg you, please don't let the protagonist be with anyone, okay? Although this Yilan is indeed very good, after all, the protagonist yearns for freedom, and I don't see any feelings for Yilan from the protagonist. It's not impossible if they really want to be together, as long as you keep updating.

The protagonist is quite likable. So far, the protagonist has not had any romantic scenes with anyone. They are all single arrows. I feel that the author wants to write about Yilan, but I really can't compare him with the protagonist. Others are easier to compare with than Yilan. I feel that I would rather the protagonist returns to Earth or NPC alone in the end, rather than Yilan being with the protagonist. He interacts with the protagonist a lot, but there is no sense of cliché and cannot be compared. It is not as good as one or two scenes of others. I feel that the cp is already very obvious, and I can clearly feel the author's preference, whether it is a confession first or a close contact, but the author just doesn't say who he is with 1v1 or np. If he has already planned to write about being with Yilan, then he should not write about Zhao's interaction later. It makes the readers feel uncomfortable, and it feels like a slap in the face to a sweet date, leaving the readers scratching their hearts and lungs.

It's so good-looking\(//∇//)\, with different plots and ups and downs. Although the protagonist is struggling in the early stage, I also enjoyed watching it. Big cheers for the author. I must stick to it. It's so good-looking. I really like the character of the protagonist. ٩(♡㉨♡)۶

I enjoyed reading it. In fact, I am very good at guessing who will end up with the hero's cp in this kind of stock-buying article [face covering] I can only hope for a non-cp or open-ended ending. It's a very interesting Zerg story. I felt that the transition from the Star Thief line to the Empire line was very tight and natural. The part where the male protagonist killed Luo Li was also very exciting, and it also made me quietly fall in love with the Huo Ran line. The story of the empire and Xiaoye are also extremely delicious. Xiaoye is a loyal dog. However, after Yilan comes, it is probably out of the question. Xiaozhao also has a sense of destiny with the male protagonist. It should be said that he is an upgraded protagonist who is born to work hard. Mengyu is so cute🥺The name is very cute, and the experience is also very lovable. I think the blond beauty must have a relationship with the male protagonist. Looking at the back of the catalog, it should be a fake death. Actually, I don't hope that this map change method will be a bit frustrating... After changing the map, don't let Yi Lan follow you anymore [face covering] This can only be regarded as a preliminary lover at most, and it will not be good if it continues to develop. The protagonist just changes the map along the way to spawn monsters, and makes concessions to the big beauties before reaching the pinnacle of life! !

The writing is very good. If you like this kind of semi-plot, good luck to the author. I feel that some people who say that the content is complicated may be because their brain capacity is limited and they can only accept a very low amount of information and vernacular. Those plot twists and character interactions cannot handle a slightly larger amount of information...

Overall it's quite interesting, except why the protagonist keeps getting kidnapped. I was tired from watching it, and I often got kidnapped without knowing why. Maybe it was because there were too many plots that were the same and I didn't watch them carefully, but it was too lazy to keep arranging kidnappings. There are also emotional scenes that are worth complaining about why the protagonist still can't tell that everyone likes him after so long. He can know in his heart but not show it, but the written feeling is that he doesn't know in his heart and has never wanted to be sentimental, but it is obvious. This is not just a straight man who is a fool. Overall, it is quite interesting. Just update it soon!

The author is very successful in shaping the protagonist Lin Xu, who is kind but not a saint, calm but not cold, sober, charming and heartthrob. It was completely written to my liking, and the plot is very logical so far. The creation of the heartthrob is not abrupt. It is not imposed by the author on the character, but it comes naturally. Readers are fascinated by the protagonist while reading the text outside the book [Blow a kiss][Flow a kiss][Flow a kiss] This author is a great person.

The male protagonist's character is really good, he feels no pain at all, and he indulges in emotions such as sadness (for example, the pain of the original family can only be read as a kind of irony, but it is definitely not as addicted to the past), which I admire very much; the overall plot is quite depressing, making it a bit uncomfortable to watch, and the appeal is good. There is no exciting plot, and it has always been relatively low so far (almost 100 chapters). ; But I feel that the combination of these two items makes it a bit strange to read. In fact, the male protagonist is already very alive, but I still feel that he lacks a sense of being alive, that is, he does not feel that he has particularly strong emotions. Of course, the male protagonist's emotions cannot be considered weak, but when you read him, you will feel a bit bland (well, there are no extreme emotions), but the male protagonist is this kind of character, and he puts life first. If you like to see this kind of character design, you can come here

It's very interesting to read. Each character has his own personality. It's not a monotonous article. The plot is neither watery nor protracted. Every article makes people want to read it eagerly. I am not a lover of flirting, but the protagonist is so charming. I really hope that every good-looking female insect can have some relationship with the protagonist. He is decisive and calm, a person with strong ability and no words, who must avenge his revenge and has an online IQ. I really hope the author can update twenty chapters a day [Shy]

It's quite good-looking, and the protagonist is quite charming. The shortcoming is that the plot is a bit long-winded, but it's still worth reading. It's a relatively novel Zerg novel. Also, I personally hope that there will be no CP in the end and the protagonist will return to Earth. I always feel that if it were a 1v1, the other half would be Yilan. But I personally feel that his character design is relatively ordinary, and it doesn't really help the protagonist so far.

The plot is good, with constant conflicts and climaxes. The protagonist is capable, mentally decisive, and charming, but he is not a fan of all insects. The current trend should be 1v1 with Yilan. Although the Zerg's 1v1 is a bit wasted, the plot can make up for this.

The protagonist is very unique. I'm glad to see that an author is willing to put effort into writing a flesh-and-blood person. The protagonist calmly and rationally deals with the star thieves, but I haven't guessed who his mistress is yet. Xiao Lin'er is so good at pulling strings, super charming [Adoration]

Finally, there is a Zerg that is not the same old routine. Every character is three-dimensional and delicious. You can taste it. Our Xiaolin is very charming and a heartthrob.

It looks pretty good so far, but I don't know who the other male lead is. I hope it's a sign😭😭😭😭 but I always feel like it's that Yilan

It's a good-looking, unique Zerg novel, not the same kind. The protagonist is brave and resourceful, kind but not a virgin. His skills are not bad, but I don't know who the CP is (could it be Yilan? If so, I feel like Yilan is going to die when the Empire and the Star Thieves fight later, which may be abusive), but no matter what the plot or CP, don't abuse the protagonist, 1v1, np, no CP, please come on [Blow a kiss] [Please update]

I feel like I have carefully written every insect design. The writing is not bad, and the plot is smooth, but some sentences are not smooth. The protagonist's IQ is online, he is a handsome male insect in vain, Huo Ran is also a little pitiful, Xiongxiong is considerate and soft づ╭❤~

It's a very good article, at least the writing style is good. It feels like reading a paper novel from many years ago. There are also many settings that can be developed in the plot, which is quite interesting. However, there are also shortcomings (holy crap, I wrote too much). Regarding the character creation, I feel that some of the characters are not well created, especially about Yilan. The subsequent plot about Yilan made me angry like an active volcano. I can accept that some things are deliberately arranged to push the plot, but if you let him keep talking and just think about it, isn't it just annoying? It's because of his personality. Trauma and painful experiences have made him sensitive, but people (worms) have mouths. To a person whom he trusts, likes, and is kind, he should always open his mouth and ask! No! Misunderstandings continue to pile up! The protagonist is also mute! If it continues to be like this later, it won't just be annoying. Also, the progress of the plot is a bit delayed. After jumping so many chapters, the plot can still be connected, and what the protagonist really wants becomes blurred as the plot progresses. I hope these shortcomings can be improved in the future. After all, I am still very interested in the general setting of this book. I can only say that I hope the author can write better and better.

Tied, super good-looking, Lin Xu is so handsome, he always relies on himself in every critical moment, he is very smart and decisive, and sometimes a bit funny, and I also like Zhao and Yilan, I look forward to their subsequent stories

The sea, you are all water, I hope there are more than 1v. After all, this is the Zerg, most of them are like this [you taste it carefully] [stare]

The ups and downs of the plot are not sloppy and the plot is compact, which makes people want to read more and become addicted. I hope the author's future plots will become more and more exciting (>^ω^<)

Have you read a lot of Zerg articles? Unexpectedly, this novel with a slightly lower rating gave me a different feeling. How can I put it? I feel that the protagonist of this book is more in line with the brain circuits of normal people. It is more relatable and the things he does are quite consistent with his personality. Other novels feel a bit like falling in love for the sake of falling in love. I feel that the writing is very good, and I will continue to follow up with updates. Great support, author!

It's very good-looking, the protagonist's intelligence and strength are online, and the supporting characters in the plot are not stereotyped characters. Both female and male bugs have their own personalities. Yilan is strong and has a tragic background but is unexpectedly simple. Zhao is not restricted whether he is a star thief or returns to his family, and is more like a green forest thief. The plot is mainly about emotional development and supplemented by emotional development, and it is recommended for logic online.

Oh my god, it's so delicious. Those who like to read about Zerg but don't want to read industrial saccharine can go ahead. The protagonist has a good time with every insect. The author's writing style is also good. I really recommend it. I directly followed the article all night, but I haven't finished it yet. I beg the author to give more [Adoration] [Adoration] [Adoration] [Blowing Kiss] [Flowing Kiss] [Flowing Kiss] [Flowing Kiss]

Oh my god, the divine book! Nice! Up to now, the author has seriously messed up the plot