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A New Fanfic That Really Brings Out the Content of Naruto and Has Excellent Writing Style ~
Is there any new Naruto fanfic on Tomato that has novel, strange, surprising content, smooth writing and connotative content? If the number of words is less than 30w, please avoid it~Please give me some advice~
I Want to Read Books About Taoism, Magic, Catching Ghosts, Cultivating Immortals, Etc.
The protagonist needs to know a few things at the beginning, and then gradually becomes stronger later on, from a boy's perspective
Is There No More Masterpieces in Naruto's Current Life?
Promote the Fine Traditions of Flower Growers in Other Worlds
Crazy food and troop garrisoning, obscene growth, this is the memory engraved in DNA (manual funny)
It's True That Naruto Is Getting Worse with Each Passing Year, so We Can Only Use the Previous Books to Compare.
I want to read a book similar to "Naruto: Beginning with the Twin Kamui".
Under One Person, There Is Not a Good Book in This Tomato
There must be a lot of people. As long as it belongs to one person, it will be posted or it will be posted without any hair.
Looking for High-Quality Naruto Fanfic, Thank You.
Personally, I like Tsunade and Hinata.
Fans, Respect the Original World View and Do Not Add New Combat Power Settings to Strengthen the Protagonist.
Is There Any Novel in Which the Main Character Is in a High-Spirited State of Mind and Is Not Violent?
I want to read a book similar to "The Immortal Cultivator vs. Super Power". After reading novels, animations and movies for so long, the basic protagonists are all from good to evil, with high abilities but no matching state of mind. Is there a protagonist who goes from evil to good and has a high state of mind?
Naruto Returns from Various Places
I want to watch content similar to Naruto: Commissar Naruto Returns from Warhammer.
Naruto, Don't Feel Aggrieved, Cool Article
I want to watch content similar to "Su Nuo, I'm sorry, I couldn't let Uchiha-sama die". Is there a kind of novel that puts you first and doesn't act as a babysitter for others? It's a Naruto fanfic that makes people feel comfortable.























































Ratings are published before chapter 40, and high scores are basically reserved. It's a very interesting novel. At first, I thought the title was the same as those of other online articles. It was about a Naruto who knew the Thunder Method and the Golden Light Curse. After reading it, I realized that this was not the case. This was a Naruto who was a cultivator and had truly practiced as a Taoist priest. Moreover, this book blended one person and Naruto very well, with clear priorities and at the same time giving enough role to one person.
It's an interesting angle, and I personally feel that a lot of thought was put into it. Other Naruto fanfics also have a similar approach to dismantling and smoothing out problems from the system, but they still need "power" to get the bottom of it (at least until I see the current progress, this book does not give Naruto power, but to expand his thinking), and this one is "thought". The Dragon Slaying Technique is not used crudely, but the emphasis is on "guidance", which I personally find quite rare, although the shaping of some characters is a bit off. Out of selfishness, I appreciate the practice of using our culture and ideas to infiltrate and infiltrate Japanese IP. It is not a brutal force to crush, but a general trend to prove the power of our cultural ideas. At present, most domestic IPs use Japanese IPs to "appreciate" their value (such as stuffing Thunder Fruit into a person, Wooden Release Giant Buddha Gundam, etc.). This is not to criticize. It is good to see such a reverse "cultural invasion". Best wishes.
It is a rare book written with care on Rotten Tomatoes. There is no conflict in the logic between the two sides, and there is no sense of separation. The Hokage's belongs to the Hokage, and what belongs to one person belongs to the other. The two sides were connected through Naruto, and adapted and changed through the silent writing power of Runwu. Very good, can look forward to it.
I originally thought it was another cool novel with no brainers, but after reading it I found it to be very good. The Tianshi Mansion in the book interprets the words "master" and "senior brother", which means teaching power and teachings. It is not a simple "background", staging a "Thirty Years in Hedong and Thirty Years in Hexi". With the plot, the images of the characters gradually become fuller. Here you can see Naruto and the others slowly growing up. Looking forward to the follow-up
One word, God! No one has OOC, and from one person's world view, he has kicked out many people's lunches reasonably. It is not the kind of deliberate kicking, but a natural development (it even patched the character of Naruto's collapse, which is so cool). Regardless of the plot, many of Tomato's novels have a common problem: the writing is very plain, the writing style is dull, and the characters are stereotyped. Many times the core point of the character doing a certain thing is simply untenable, or it can be seen that it is not the character who wants to do it, but the author wants to do it. This shouldn't happen. Little Naruto grows naturally, which is very beautiful. Let me tell you something that is a bit of a spoiler. When I kicked Shisui's bento away, I didn't expect it at all! ! The plot is well connected! Because of Naruto, the third generation took the initiative to extend a conciliatory hand to the Uchiha. The Uchiha also wanted to change the status quo. The affected Sasuke would want to ask his classmates to go out together. With Naruto's guidance, the strengthened new generation could detect and sense the battle not far away, and be able to hold off the battle for a short period of time. It also allowed Shisui, who was pessimistic and wanted to die, to take the initiative to defend himself again. How cool! Nice! Every development is in the river! !
The author's writing is really great. I don't agree with the long comment above. Originally, this book does not show how to solve problems through so-called combat power, but through inner cultivation, through understanding the past and the present, and through mutual understanding to resolve barriers. All in all, I hope the author will continue to do so, it is really contagious. Thank you for bringing a different novel ⊹꙳ ˶˙ᵕ˙˶ ⊹꙳ PS. I would like to praise the author again, I feel warm after reading it ੭ ˙ᗜ˙ ੭
This is a very interesting Naruto article, not impetuous, not the usual quick-service article. After reading it, I read the updated content directly. The people and things in the world under one person gave Naruto the vision and method of doing things in another world. The changes in the ninja world seemed to have another solution. I look forward to the mutual influence between the two worlds due to the existence of Naruto. The author will write it down well. It is really great [Like][Like][Like]
It's a very good book. It's not a mindless exercise. Some things really need to be practiced slowly by oneself. But there is also a flaw. Uchiha's attitude towards ordinary Sharingan is that once lost, it must be retrieved or destroyed. The ending of Shisui's Kaleidoscope is too sloppy, which is not in line with Uchiha's temper. After all, the previous holders of Mangekyo Sharingan were Uchiha Madara and Uchiha Izuna.
It's a good book. I can read it. The number of words is a little short. It's a gold rush in Rotten Persimmon.
It looks good. It doesn't rely on ability to deal with Uchiha but relies on IQ.
It's interesting to see Naruto's observation point of view from another system's perspective. It's well-written. After reading Chapter 7, I feel that I really need to give it a thumbs up. It's awesome. The characters are fleshed out, profound enough, and the angle is novel. It's worth watching.
It's the best movie I've ever seen in Tomato. There are no conspiracy theories. The world of ninja and the world of one person are both written very well. I just hope that Naruto can come and save him during the Thirty-Six Thieves. For example, he can chase Zhang Huaiyi for Tanaka to find out the truth. There are too many regrets about the Tang Sect and it's not enough to watch.
It's very interesting. Naruto traveled through time and was depressed. After that, I started to study various things. I changed my personality directly and cultivated my character. It was very interesting. It doesn't mean I changed my personality. It can only be said that I became calmer and more interesting. It is also useful for me. Sometimes I can actually learn something and I also have a lot of insights into history. It is very useful for me as a high school student to study history. I also like history very much.
The angle is novel, the psychological description is profound, and the description of Taoism is profound. Well, you have to pay attention to logical thinking. Naruto is a Japanese speaker and only a Chinese speaker. It is just a novel and it cannot be too serious.
Although I haven't finished reading it yet, I can already tell that this is a good article. The writing is good, and the characters are well drawn. Although there are some minor flaws, they are not overwhelming. The content is substantial, and it is different from the Internet articles that are basically filled with water. It looks very comfortable. Outrageous, the protagonist saved a bunch of people and was still injured. In the end, they turned around and forced the protagonist, a child, to drink... They also knew not to let their younger children drink, but in the end they forced the protagonist, who was younger than their children, to drink... It's so outrageous... Is this a thank you? Is this respecting people? ? ? This is using good words to force others to do what they want! This is a naked act of repaying kindness with hatred and malice! Persuading people to drink alcohol is a bad custom, and it even involves convincing an injured child, which is the worst of the worst... The most outrageous of all... It's simply embarrassing.
A book about true spiritual practice. There is a lot to learn from the book. The story setting is also very good, respecting the original work of Naruto. A different Naruto.
The first few chapters feel quite amazing, especially the characters and designs they describe are very comfortable and more transparent than other fanfics written specifically for one person. (๑•̀ㅂ•́)و✧ I hope the author will continue to work hard. I can't help but stare at the mud [smile] [laugh]
The content is good, the angle is very novel, and it is different from other Naruto stories. It interprets the plot of Naruto from a rarely seen perspective. I didn't realize it at first, but I always had a weird feeling when reading fan fiction. Later, I realized that the author was writing Naruto according to the conventions of historical fiction. There are also innovations in the power system, but it is not the focus of the description. What is emphasized is the collision of the cultural systems of the two worlds. Overall Rating: It's quite interesting, but once the freshness wears off, it feels a bit boring. It seems that AI has been added, and there are too many descriptions of water, which aggravates this feeling.
There are some traces of AI that can be seen, but it does not affect the creativity and narrative of the story, so this inconspicuous part can be ignored. The author's adaptation of Tao and Naruto's worldview is worth reading. I won't spoil it on this point. You can just read it for this reason. It is not a purely mindless and refreshing type of article. The characters have different growth curves and different personalities under different experiences. This is very detailed and the author has considered it properly. It's too little and not enough to read (updated to 34 chapters as of the time of review). I feel that if I keep going at this pace, the book may be finished around 600-800 chapters.
It's very interesting. It's different from other novels that forcibly add strength to the protagonist, but instead open up the mind. The author evaluates the past Hokages from various aspects and incorporates his own understanding. For example, Danzo, the author's understanding is different from others. In my current opinion, Danzo may abandon those evil ideas, return to the F4 group, and understand the feelings of the third Hokage. The author's idea is very novel. Unlike other novels, which only position one character as bad, nor directly position one character as good, as others have said, people have two sides.
It's so beautiful, it's not a superficial linkage, but thoughtful. The plot is gradual and has many changes. Shisui took the initiative to give an eye to build interior scenes, Fugaku became a consultant to the Hokage, and Uchiha reconnected with Konoha society. The portrayal of Danzo is not flat. The third generation is a contradictory person in the author's writing, but he is willing to fight in his old age, which is worthy of the name of Hokage. OK.
Naruto and the third generation in the author's works have a very obvious growth trajectory. It can be clearly seen that their understanding of Konoha's political ecology has improved little by little. More importantly, the author has an understanding of Taoist philosophy. He is not simply applying things from comics. When I saw the comments section, I knew that the aesthetic ability of readers in Tomato has been greatly improved (˘▽˘)っ🍅
The writing is very good, and the characterization is quite rich, but there is suspicion of AI. The sentence "But Naruto knows, he is listening" that appears many times in the article has appeared many times. It is not because it appears many times to doubt AI, but because I have seen similar behavior in other articles. The same sentence appears many times in the following articles. I don't know how it came about. Anyone who knows can explain it to me.
It's really good to read. Other fanfics, including the original work, have some limitations in some stages. The protagonist doesn't feel like a human being, just a collection of tags. But this Naruto book doesn't feel like a character or an object, it just feels like a person growing, walking, falling, and getting up. It's nice and interesting.
After reading for more than ten minutes, I can be sure that the author wrote the book seriously, not in a routine or format, which is very valuable in Tomato. Most authors always use one sentence or another, always use exclamation points, always express their true feelings, and the tone is exactly the same. They are worthy of support.
I've struck gold, each article is more than 4,000 words, and has a strong sense of logic, making it easy for people to get involved. Author, you must keep writing. I knelt down and kowtowed to you. Happy New Year.
The writing is very good, the soul is written, and it is very connotative. Some negative reviews are bad, bringing in the background of Under One Person, maybe they are thinking about how to pretend to be X, but when reading this book, don't consider the background of Under One Person, just read the "principles". As you read it, you may also ask yourself some questions in your heart. Maybe we can also be inspired by it and learn something
Very well written For the one-person part, many one-person fan fiction nowadays is very fancy and pays special attention to numerical values, but the author writes it differently. The part about Naruto, Naruto's growth, the transformation of the three generations, and the development of Konoha are all very good.
It's so well written, thoughtful and in-depth. The writing is good and the thinking is deep. It's not a simple golden finger that makes you stronger. The world of one person gave Naruto simple and basic Qi training methods, but it was more of a guidance on the way of thinking. What a talented author!
The writing is quite good, and the characterization is also good; but I have never seen Under One Person, and the writing method shuttles two worlds like this; I always feel that it is weird that Naruto is no longer Hokage; but objectively speaking, this book cannot be rated above 8 points