Li Shuyi X Mao Xiaofang
Li Shuyi began dreaming when she was eighteen.
In the dream, a woman's voice always said, "In our next life, I'll find you sooner, then cling to you for the rest of our lives. I never want us to be apart again."
Then a man's voice would reply, "All right. I'll wait for you."
The dream haunted Li Shuyi for five whole years. She found her grandfather, Li Xuanhe, who interpreted the dream for her and used divination to determine a direction.
Li Shuyi set out with her subordinates, heading in the direction her grandfather had indicated. Along the way, they found a young boy unconscious by the roadside, so they took him with them.
They continued until they stopped in Gantian Town to replenish their supplies.
While eating at a restaurant in Gantian Town, she heard a man's voice. It sounded a lot like the man's voice in her dream, so she turned to look at him.
At a single glance, a voice told her: It's him. It really is him.
Miss Li and Master Mao reunite with their destined love.
Fan fiction: Daoist, Your Wife Is Scheming Again, Part Two.
This installment can be read on its own.
I don't know if you can read this passage. There are several questions in this book. I will raise them for you. If you are interested, you can change them. I don't know your specific situation, just my personal opinion. 1. After the opening dialogue, use a separator to separate the dialogue from when the heroine wakes up. 2. The heroine's self-narration after waking up is not a self-narration from her own perspective. It is basically a narrative narrative by the narrator. You have two choices, the best is to recall this past event through third-person recall. Then a lot of connectives need to be used to enhance the narrative effect of the characters' own memories. Second, if you don't understand, directly intervene with the narrator, without her recalling it, make a large-scale declarative narrative, weaken her pronouns, and judge her or make metaphors for her. Probably the posture of a storyteller. 3. I suggest you change the title of this book. If your target audience is zombie fans, then the romance is wrong. If you're into romance, change the zombie fanfic. With your current word count, you have a chance to gain traffic through sorting. I looked at your character design, and there are no major problems overall. You changed the first few chapters to let readers take the role, and changed the title of the book from a zombie fanfic to a more romantic and suspenseful name. 4. The most important thing about the questions I mentioned is the title of the book, and the others are also important, because you start with a declarative narrative, and if you don't have a strong narrator's voice, it will be very flat. 5. If you are interested, you can ask me. I will tell you everything I know. However, it is only over one million words long. If you practice it well, you can get a lot of readers. I think