After Falling to the Altar, He Joined Hands with His Sworn Enemy to Fight His Way Back to the Top

Very beautiful The character creation of Qizai is really good. As expected, the favored man of heaven will stay at the altar, and he has a venomous mouth, which makes him feel at ease. Shen Duo is very attentive to Qizai, with a cold face and a soft heart. Come on, it's really beautiful. I really like Yebuju, it's very lively and cute! ! !

"He was once a legend in the LPL, the pinnacle that countless people looked up to. He has experienced glory and troughs. Now, he has chosen to start over and join the WYB team as a support player with a new identity. Welcome back, Qizai. Let's talk about the advantages and disadvantages of this article. Let's talk about the disadvantages first. In the early stage, there will be a small number of female words used by men. If you are lei, you can quit. Of course, it will not be used very frequently. If you are slightly lei, it is still acceptable. The early description in the article will make people mistakenly think that it will be pure sadism. But later I took a closer look and found that it was not the case. If you avoid this setting after Lei's trauma, you can quit quickly, because he was actually a little resistant in the early stage. Of course, he soon stopped being depressed and rejoined e-sports. If there is Lei mentioned above, you can withdraw. As for this book, I think it is okay. Again, keep the book circle a good environment. Let's talk about the advantages again. The emotional lines in this article are very sweet, and the plot is not procrastinating. Everyone has their own vivid characteristics, which can capture the characteristics of the characters very well. In terms of emotional lines, they do not use too many straightforward descriptions, but more about their interactions. I think this is very good. The author often uses environment descriptions, and the author should be original. People also have certain legal awareness and e-sports knowledge. I think this book as a whole should be able to be released at 9 o'clock on the Tomato channel. The evaluation ends here. If you find something surprising, you can leave it first. If it is not surprising but you are looking forward to it, then you can read it. As I said, maintain a good environment in the book circle. Finally, Qizai, welcome back. I wish you who read this book and read these words will praise Shishou [blowing kiss] Oh, by the way, I still have to say that Dada does prefer environmental descriptions, but he does write very well in terms of emotional writing. Overall, I think the writing style should be passable. Maybe the only thing that makes me feel a little weird is that sometimes it may be more offensive. Well, I don't know if it's my misunderstanding. If so, I would like to sincerely apologize to you. Finally, I wish you all have read this review and read my book, and I wish you a happy future [Blow a kiss]

It's really, really good-looking, a story about rivals, redemption, and most importantly, a story about two men in e-sports. Doesn't anyone understand the feeling of not wanting you to degenerate and give up on yourself just because you've seen your most dazzling appearance? It's really, really good-looking! ! ! It used to be tit-for-tat, but now it becomes redemption, starting a sweet love [laughs] In e-sports stories, I think this setting only looks good with two men. Other romances or two women don't have that feeling. Anyway, it's really awesome, a fairy tale! ! ! ! ! This tomato is also a good one for me [Admiration] In the later stage, it is sweet and sweet, and the sweetness is off the charts! Let me wiggle around on the bed cosplaying with maggots, with an aunty smile on my face, I don't know why I do it, I understand the happiness of eating candy [shy] Anyway, it's just a sentence that captures the good things of the period 99 [love] I came back three times and it's still delicious😋

I'm a mother. This book is very, very good. The plot is not draggy at all, and the emotions are smooth and not stiff. It's just a bit too short and not enough to read. I hope the author can surprise me by suddenly releasing a hundred chapters.

This book is really good-looking! I'm not very interested in PVP e-sports books, but I just wanted to keep reading this book. I felt particularly sorry for Qizai. The author's character creation and understanding of the game are very good! Looking forward to Qizai and Shen Duo joining hands in the world championship!

I feel good about myself, and my rival literature is still good. Shen Duo is like a ray of light in a life that is getting darker every night, and it breaks the traditional combination of jungler and mid laner as the main CP. The jungler is not the usual cold type. Song Yuming is very much like a live treasure in WYB.

Very beautiful! [Blowing a kiss] This is the first time I read a serialized article with such a small number of words. It's so beautiful and there's no rating yet! I will definitely keep up the good work! I don't read a lot of e-sports articles, but I really like this kind of character design! I hope Qizai will do well [crying] and take revenge on those who harmed him [crying] Qizai and Shen are so happy🥰, 99 [blowing kiss]

The whole book is pretty good, and the early stage is OK. I felt a little uncomfortable when I was slapped in the face later. The main CP is quite sweet, and the emotional line is okay. I was a little anxious to push the main line, and it lacked some daily life, but it does not affect it. The young couple is easy to fight. The description of the competition and other parts is quite professional. It can be seen that the author is very careful. There are also some things I want to complain about. The CP characters are a bit the same, and some of the plots are even similar to other e-sports articles. I don't watch a lot of e-sports, but these characters are a bit cliche. The main CP is not obvious, and I don't have the patience to read the secondary CP. I hope the author can have a unique style in the future and write better stories. This book is a cookie, and there is nothing particularly sad about it. Maybe the only thing is the protagonist's early experience. The pace is quite fast, and it's very enjoyable to read in one sitting. I finished it in about a day. Let me praise it again. The characters are quite good, and the portrayal is very distinctive. After reading it, I have a deep impression on everyone in it. It is still worth reading.

Very nice (it's a bit messy because I've been stuck lately) The writing is good and the descriptions are relatively realistic. It can be seen that the author has corresponding understanding. The quality of the plot is good and inspirational. The core of Qizai is so strong that his whole image has been directly established. In the face of adversity, he persists in life, not giving up his former pride but hiding his edge. When he returns to the game, he will work hard even though he will be criticized because of injuries and because of the confusion he encountered in the past. Shen Duo and Qizai have a mutual admiration relationship, and their relationship is also going on. As for e-sports writing, passionate young people struggle with regrets, and failure to win championships continues one after another, and the firepower is passed down from generation to generation. This is also the charm of e-sports writing.

I will follow the author. The writing is really good. It's the book that tortured us readers and Qizai😫. I just read it today and it's a very good book in a blink of an eye. You know the author of the love line, I hope there won't be too many🔪, more🍬! Let our readers have enough to eat [give heart]

It's very beautiful, the body feels warm when you look at it

I enjoyed watching it for a year, but I will regret it for the rest of my life if I don't watch it! Dad's! ! This makes me so happy (I am gradually no longer a human being...) The sweetness at the back is off the charts! ! It's so cool, especially when you say harsh words and get tortured by a young couple! ! ! Oops, I can't do it anymore. I started chasing this book from the time it was updated to chapter 6/70. My dad, you all don't know how much fun I felt when I was catching up on it. I haven't stopped updating it yet. I have already recommended it to my circle of friends no less than four times! ! ! Friends! Families! Sisters! Go and see it! ! ! Oh, by the way, this comment was made by me. I thought I had already commented when I made the comment, hehe.

After reading the comments, I felt that the author's writing was very good. I was not very interested in e-sports articles before, but after reading this article, I suddenly got it! Although I don't play games, I feel that the matches and tactical discussions described in it are very professional! And the emotional description of the protagonist is also very good!

Oh my god! I give a sweet date a slap in the face, and occasionally a little abuse. I feel very sorry for the protagonist, the innocent driver and the driver's relatives. It is also a redemption story. The overall sweetness is very good. There will also be friendship abuse and family abuse in the article... But they are not a large proportion and are acceptable. All in all, it's very good-looking, but it's a bit regretful that I didn't see the main character, He Xun (it seems to be called He Xun), have a mid-jungle collaboration. I really want to see them. Being on the same side again, well, that's it. Finally, I hope everyone will support the author's book

2025.5.3, Completed. I'm so sorry. I really haven't written any long reviews. This is my first time. I may not be very good at it. Please forgive me. There was a shortage of books at that time, so I picked it up casually. I thought it would be enough to take a look or two, but somehow this book seemed to have magic power. I suddenly wanted to read it, and then I satisfied myself that I have followed it until now. Congratulations to the teacher for finishing the first book! "Your future is thousands of miles away, but what remains unchanged is your lifelong lover." This is the first sentence I wrote when I read this novel, and it is also the first sentence of Fire (maybe not counted). I think this is also my last sentence to him. After all, I am not used to watching extras, so everyone needs one less electronic pickle [blowing kiss]. (Just kidding, a bit narcissistic)

Ji tied, very good-looking, Brother Duo takes good care of Qizai, they were very sweet before, the only thing is that I feel sorry for Qizai [crying] [crying] Big boost, author✊I will catch up to the end [Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss]

A good-looking redemption story, really good-looking. If it doesn't look good, I can only... Kneel down and beg you to read it! I discovered this novel during a two-day book shortage! Full of gold content! ❤️❤️✨✨ ˚ ♡.ﾟ♡.． ♡゜ ﾟ♡゜ ♡ ♡*ﾟ♡ ♡. ♡ ♡. . ♡゜ ♡; ﾟ♡゜ /)_/)N (˶ᵒ̴̶̷̤ꈊ˂̶̤̀˵) ✧ /u ﾉ しーJ

I have read Chapter 60 so far. As a person who only dares to read cookies, I don't think there is anything cruel about it. You guys can feel free to rush into it. The plot content is also attractive enough, and the writing style is also online. But I have a very strange point that sometimes there are repeated sentences in the paragraphs. For example, "The movements seem to have been done countless times skillfully" and "Are you putting on clothes or taking off clothes?" Maybe the author is used to using these sentences. I personally suggest that the author can improve them a lot. The repeated occurrence of sentences affects the reading sense. Aside from this, everything else is good. When I went to the hospital overnight for a check-up, the professional terminology used by the doctor gave me a very high-end feeling. Haha, please give me a boost, author! [Sending Hearts]

It's so pretty🥺Men are menstruating🙄Women are crazy when they see it💪This is the nemesis of depression😎It's the alarm clock for vegetative people😭It's so cute that tears flow from the corners of the mouth and flood into the Qiantang River😱So handsome😘Yes God is my rose, it illuminates my dark life and makes my world meaningful😊I run, I jump, I dance the tango on the balcony of the 20th floor😮It makes me realize that God does exist, I am so cute that I cry From now on, the world will no longer be short of water. The nemesis of depression 😋 is the alarm clock for vegetative people 😨 So cute that tears flow out of the corners of the mouth and flood into the Qiantang River 😈 So beautiful 🥰 God is my rose, it lights up my dark life and makes my world meaningful 😙 I run, I jump, I dance the tango on the balcony of the 20th floor 😎 It makes me realize that God does exist, I am so good that my tears will not stop, and from now on, the world will no longer be short of water.

A brief review: Two words, beautiful! The characters are all very three-dimensional, especially Ye Buqi, who is so vivid and vivid on the page! I really like this kind of beautiful, strong and miserable character. . Broken on the outside but still resilient on the inside. The author wrote so well about youthful spirit that when I read it later, I was moved not only by the people in the book but also by us in front of the screen. This is my first time reading an e-sports article, and I have never played PVP-type games, so I still can't understand it. But personally, it doesn't have much impact, as long as you know who is strong and who is weak, and who wins. The plot is smooth and coherent, and the plot is very fast. It can be read in one day.

Promise me not to miss such a high-quality book, okay? ! ! The protagonist's character is very three-dimensional, and the dull and bright characters are really written, I like it so much; the plot is even better, Xiaoye is sickly but very sunny, and I feel like nothing can defeat him. After reading it, I feel warm in my heart, Xiao Shen is also very straightforward, and will never feel abused because of misunderstandings. The whole team is also warm, and the atmosphere is super great; each character has his own unique side, which is really good-looking, and it is not a loss to invest in. Teacher, hurry up and update it. It has been tied in two days. Now is the time to read the follow-up. I hope Teacher will update a hundred chapters in one day.

So well written! ! ! The characters have distinct personalities, the plot is daily and heartwarming, and you will never get tired of watching it. The young couple is sweet. Give Qizai a candy from Captain Shen. Qizai and Captain Shen will always be together! ! ! Next is analysis If you like daily life, you can join. Anyway, I now see that apart from the distressing situation of Qizai at the beginning, I don't think there is any problem in other aspects. It is very warm, the teammates are very heart-warming, beautiful love, beautiful friendship, and a beautiful future. There is no plot that you will fall in love with at first sight, but it is a steady stream of water. The plot mainly revolves around e-sports. To be honest, I feel sorry for He Sheng. His teammates are gradually leaving and the team is gradually not what it used to be. But I still hope that he can shine in other teams. His future does not stop there. After all, he is the champion mid laner of a former champion team, and his strength is obvious to all. I rarely write long reviews. The only thing that makes me write long reviews is either a great book or a bad movie. The author will continue to update! ! ! ! The old slave will always follow you! ! ! Wow wow wow, big brother, come on and update it, it's super good-looking. If you have any book friends who want to get involved, you can leave a message below. I will reply when I see it. This writing style, as long as it doesn't overturn in the follow-up, it will be a masterpiece of 9.0 Or higher.

It's a very good book. In this book, the two of them were not too entangled and confessed. It was also very sweet😜. Ye Buqi is really well written. I like this feeling of being a happy enemy. If you have a book like this, can you recommend it to me? I have read the full text. Because he once shined like a spark and is willing to rekindle it in the netherworld, he has a future. This is my evaluation of Qizai after reading it (?). What moved me was not only optimism and strength, but also the courage to stand up again in the face of adversity. In the article, what is more prominent than the redemption of others is the redemption of oneself. What is more important than feelings is the growth of young people. They will eventually flourish in the arena they love so much. There are no big flaws in the whole story, but some of the non-protagonist holes in some details feel like they haven't been filled in yet. The ending of the sub-CP is an open ending, but I'm still curious about who is the one.

Yes, the characters have distinct personalities and the language is quite humorous. I kept laughing during several passages. But this eSports book is not to my liking, and I can't tell what's not right about it. Big cheers for the author [blowing kiss]

I like it^^ Xiao Qi is so cute, the more he shows off his youthful vigor and playfulness, the more annoying and distressing it becomes. . . When you are only 22, you will live with the disease and its sequelae for the rest of your life. I won't let you go behind the scenes. . .

It's so, so beautiful [I almost cried]. The emotions are described very delicately. The progress of the young couple is neither too slow nor too fast. The slow pace is perfect for me... And the atmosphere of the group portrait is also very good! The interaction with the deputy CP is so cute...

This novel is super, super good! ! ! Shen Duo's enthusiasm and complete admiration have always been completely given to Ye Buqi. Baby Xiaoqi is a strong and good baby [crying] [crying] I can't write anymore. I want to cry when I think of Qizai's past. Baby Xiaoqi, you are really good. You have persisted alone for so long [I'm almost crying] [I'm almost crying] Da Cun is also a good person who raised our seventh child very well. He also allowed Xiao Qi to stand on the podium again and lifted the Qinglong trophy, which made Xiao Qi cheer up again. Da Cun is great [I'm almost crying] Reunited after a long separation, Shen Duo's words "come home with me" appear to be strong, but they are also guaranteeing Xiao Qi's future. Xiao Qi has lived for so many years and has never been steadily needed by anyone, so Shen Duo was uneasy when he brought Xiao Qi home, and said that Shen Duo was here to taunt him, but Shen Dacun was not here to love him. Xiaoqi changed back to her previous appearance...

The main reason why this article attracts me is that it is very true, the barrage is very true, the speeches of some brainless black fans are very true, and some of the followers are also very true. Secondly, this article did not abuse for the sake of abuse, but said hurtful words in a nonchalant tone. The couple's tug-of-war in the early stages was really fun, and the hospital sequence after the horse-falling scene was really fun. I shed a few tears where there are tears, and chuckle out loud when there are funny parts. What a great article. I haven't felt bored at all after reading it.

My dears, my dears, this is beautiful, this is so beautiful [Blow kiss] [Blow kiss] [Blow kiss] [Blow kiss] [Blow kiss] [Blow kiss] [Blow kiss] [Blow kiss] [Blow kiss] [Blow kiss] [Blow kiss] [Blow kiss] You have to believe me, the things in this are really pretty, really pretty, really pretty.

I have just finished reading it with more than 20 chapters left. After taking so long to read it, I still want to say that the overall feeling is pretty good, but the emotional line between the two protagonists is a bit too rushed. As for the emotional line, I feel that the following points make me feel uncomfortable: I can't feel the heavy emotional line between them. And I felt that the chapter where they confessed and agreed was really a bit baffling. It feels like there wasn't much foreshadowing in the early stages, and there was an unexpected emotional line. So I felt that the subsequent confession and acceptance scenes were strange. There should be less interaction between the two, so I feel that the relationship between them is not very strong. I feel that the author wanted to create a deep relationship, but it was not very successful and had some counter-effects. In terms of plot, I feel that the overall plot is great, and this kind of character setting is rare. I also feel that I like this kind of character setting very much. But I don't know how to describe the plot. There is always a feeling of being too rushed. It feels like I am trying very hard to pave the way for the plot, but the plot line goes by too fast. It doesn't feel like it goes into the plot at all. Overall, I feel that this article is still worth reading, because the other plots are excellent to a certain extent. But if you are looking for perfection, this article is not suitable for you to read. But I still recommend it to be worth watching, because the character design is really novel, and the plot is relatively good. The feeling is a bit comfortable, but it's barely manageable. Mainly the characters are really cool. The above is just my personal opinion.