Dress up as the Male Protagonist Bai Yueguang and Seize the Opportunity to Kill the Male Protagonist.

Good luck! ! ! [Like] [Like] There are so few people watching, and the rhythm is well grasped. The heroine has her own opportunities, and the male protagonist's opportunities are also snatched up. It's so cool. There is no boring drama like being targeted by heaven. On the contrary, the consciousness of the world is still helping the heroine, right? I'm looking forward to the male protagonist's hidden identity next and whether the female protagonist also has a hidden identity [laughing] [laughing] I'm really looking forward to it

It's pretty good. The writing style is quite good. The author has buried a lot of foreshadowing. It should be a long novel, covering the lower world, the upper world (the fairy world) and the divine world. Now that I have just seen the upper realm, I feel that there are more male characters in the lower realm, and there are obviously more female characters in the upper realm. The plot is also very good. I won't write several chapters for one thing. Generally, you can see the ending in one or two chapters. The pace is okay. It's pretty good in the Xiu Xian articles I've seen. Then let me say something that may be a little confusing. The author is a female girl and a male boy. Both men and women use shonen for their shounen energy. Personally, I would like to see if the male character could be written as a boy if the female is a girl. It would feel more symmetrical. Then jealousy was used in the beginning. Now we are not advocating to replace jealousy with jealousy, but later the author started to use jealousy. Finally, there is the master and the master. The articles about cultivating immortals that I read seem to all use the term "master", but I think that the master leads the way in the beginning, and the practice is personal, and then becomes a master for a day and a father for the rest of his life, and there is a corresponding relationship between master and apprentice, so I personally prefer to use the word "master". Then I searched the full text, and most of them used the name Shifu, and only a few times used the name Shifu. I really like this [send heart] [send heart] [send heart]. However, the ratio of women to men in the Nether is pretty good, and overall everything is pretty good, so you can watch it with confidence. I believe the rating will go up, but the current one is so low, please cheers for the author [send heartfelt][send heartfelt][send heartfelt]. Also, the author is very gentle and will adopt all his opinions. If you like [send heart] [send heart] [send heart] [love] [love], I will always support the author [love] [love]

It's pretty good. The author's writing style is pretty good and there are a lot of foreshadowings. The author said that this is a long novel. I just saw the chapter where the heroine goes to the upper realm. The plot is also very interesting and the pace is okay. It didn't take several chapters to get to the end. Or the author didn't write out some details, such as "What happened to the red moon in the lower realm?" Etc. Maybe I missed it. Also, sometimes the heroine's IQ doesn't keep up, which makes her a little irritated. The upper world has some "products" brought into modern times. There was a chapter where half of the chapter was filled with barrage and I didn't want to read it, but then I thought about reading it for so long [laughs awkwardly]. The author could write more new characters or opportunities. After watching for so long, it was either the "friends" the heroine knew in her previous life or the "opportunity" [something] from the heroine's previous life. Also, why does the heroine contract with so many spirit beasts but not let them come out to help the heroine? I know that the heroine doesn't want others to know that they are divine beasts, but every time the heroine fights alone, leaving the spirit beasts in the space to eat, eat and sleep. Except for the time when the heroine became the way of heaven, she has not been seen a few times. I hope the author can let more spiritual beasts come out to help in the future, otherwise I feel that the heroine is raising a bunch of people🐷. Yeah, looking forward to the follow-up [Bird Food Masterpiece]

It's nice to watch, there's no nonsense throughout (only Dabi is a little bit), and there are no brainless villains (there are villains, but they are very smart villains) except for Ye. Of course, the heroine and the people she knows around her are also very smart and brainy. It's worth watching.

It's a very interesting story about a heroine without a CP. It's fast-paced and not procrastinating. It's good-looking. The heroine is not a virgin. It's good-looking. If you like it, you can join it.

The heroine has many opportunities and is very strong. She never suffered a loss from the beginning to the end. The writing is also good, there is no emotional line, and she is a big heroine. She has some trustworthy friends, but she is a lone wolf who likes to act alone. Very interesting, good luck to the author! Super pretty! Highly recommended!

A grand story background that unfolds bit by bit

Link after link, it's really exciting, but it's just not enough! ! [Crying] I think you can take a look! Beautiful~ (I typed the wrong qaq

It's good to watch, the plot is good, the heroine is good, and the pace is fast! The more I watch, the better it gets, the pace is fast, not draggy, and the heroine is super strong! Highly recommended!

Very nice! The female protagonist cultivates immortality and does not engage in emotions. She uses her strength to speak her mind and is motivated. There are many opportunities! ! ! The characters are three-dimensional, so I hope you don't give up on writing! ! Very high quality article Author, please don't abandon the article! ! ! How can I live in Tomato without you @ punch @

The author writes very well

This book is absolutely amazing, I read it in one sitting and couldn't stop!

Good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking

So far the overall feeling is pretty good. The female lead is also quite fast in cultivation. There is some tangle with the original male lead but very few. It's good for the heroine to focus on her own cultivation experience.

Super, super, super, super, super, very good-looking. The language is compact and the plot is wonderful. It's so good-looking.

I just started listening to it, and it's pretty good so far, like a traditional fairy tale

It's good to watch, the whole process is high-energy but not frustrating, and the plot has constant twists and turns. The more you watch it, the more you get addicted and can't stop! ! !

Why is the rating so low? It's obviously very beautiful.

It's very beautiful, I don't understand why the score is so low

The plot of this novel is ups and downs and exciting, the characters are vivid and vivid on the page, and the writing is beautiful and contagious. It makes people immersed in it when reading. It is a rare masterpiece.

A better detail is that the villain is male. Although Ye is also a villain, he never thought of using underhanded tactics to deal with the female protagonist.

I think it's pretty good-looking. The more I watch it, the more I want to watch it.

It's pretty good. I can still accept the occasional flaws. Cheers, and I wish you better and better. [Sending heartfelt wishes]

The more I write, the better. It's not bad, but the progress is a bit slow. The update progress has been matched. The author will update as soon as possible.

Come on! Very beautiful, I like it very much

It's really good to watch (Sorry, I really like to watch it, but I really don't have any ink in my stomach)

It's very interesting, the heroine is very strong, there's no female rivalry, there's no malicious vilification, and the plot has ups and downs, it's very interesting! If you like watching strong women without CP, you can join! Super, super, super, super beautiful! Highly recommended!

A good book, worth reading,