Animation Production: the Teacher at the Beginning Took Me to Shoot Bengtie

The overall look and feel is really good. At present, it seems that there are the following problems. 1. The plot description of Star Iron is not detailed enough. Of course it improved in the later pictures. 2. I think the author can give a deeper and more detailed description of why the audience is moved by the animation plot, why they are shocked by the world view, and so on (this is a personal opinion) However, I also see the advantages. The realistic plot is well written. I can't say it is very good, but it is useful enough. You can also see the little ingenuity in the background of the characters around the protagonist. At the same time, the author's writing style has another advantage, that is, it goes through the plot quickly. If enough updates are ensured, this is a very exciting point. At present, it seems that people who keep books may feel more comfortable. But those who continue to follow the update will feel bored because of the too thin plot. Hope the author can improve it. It's getting worse and worse

Other parts are okay, except that the animation content in the early stage is slightly different from the original work, which makes it look a bit awkward.

Some details were not written, such as the Star God's glance was not written, nor was the explanation of the world view.

Because it was changed to anime, compared to the game, there are many points that cannot be supplemented to make the spleen and stomach or use a proper reason to write out the description of the genius portrait passing by the space station in the game and part of the copy in the train think tank. Personally, it may be better.

This book is quite enjoyable to read. It describes the daily interactions between Han Ming and his students. When writing the plot, he also describes the expressions of the characters, which is very detailed. But the plot is still not detailed enough, such as the world view, etc., And the audience's reaction to the world view can be written in just a few words. I believe the rating of this book will increase [Send heartfelt thanks]

So why did the author update? Because they want to continue the breath of the story But it's impossible So, what do you think? Because of them, they must be updated When the perfect attendance deadline hangs high like the sword of Damocles Only authors who break the news can escape the fate of oblivion That's right In order to prevent the story from sinking into the sea of oblivion I dismantled ribs to make pen holders Forge moonlight into punctuation Compose heartbeats into chapter rhythms But if you want to witness a new chapter you... You You must endure me till the end of time These are after crossing the history of Internet literature The logic of the author Come on, everything I carry Nothing to do with choice Nothing to do with life or death At this moment, everyone's urging converges into the only ambition Brahma and beasts Add to this body Karma Demon enters the abyss Break the key step forward This is Breaking UpdateInscription

Yes, but what I want to see is, for example, when Belloberg Hook first arrives in the Upper Zone, and Sambo's breaking of the fourth wall, I didn't see any of these [smirk] Some paragraphs would become boring if they were changed [facepalm] Like Eric, which shows the belief that people can be good, but if it is changed here, it would lose its essence. Also, when Xier introduced the orphanage, it was used to show her simple world view, and there are many other places that would be boring if they were changed.

Woohoo, author, I have been seriously ill for a long time. I have been suffering from demon body, anentropy, moonmania, memetic virus all year round, and I am also swallowed by nothingness. Your work is my only hope until now. Please keep updating.

Hey hey? Suddenly found that the rating is not high? Oh yes, that's why I missed writing several important and exciting videos before. But I personally am willing to give it a higher score. After all, revising the original work and writing it later is acceptable is a bonus point. By the way, if the author is afraid, you can apply a patch now and let them reset the plot at the beginning of the expansion.

I like this type, nice looking₍ᐢ..ᐢ₎ ༘♡

Overall, it's pretty good-looking, um, but that's it. Can you hurry up and bring up the next plot? Ompharos, think about it, they were so tickled by the knife [send heart] [note]

Is the number too small? Those UP hosts with tens of thousands of fans will almost always have hundreds of thousands of views for every video they post.

It's okay, but can the author write less or not write plots about readers' frustration? Because people who don't follow CP will feel weird... ... Author, why don't you write a chapter and just review the previous content... [Awkward laugh]

Okay, it looks good. You can post some character pv short films or something [like]

The author is great, I think I can write the character PV when writing Ompharos, which will greatly harvest the tears of the audience [smile][smile][smile]

Please author, please put Pella's and Luca's together. . .

Author, will the content include Journey to a Thousand Stars?

Will there be an if line written after the collapse of the iron?

I personally think this is the best one among all the movies I have watched👍

The plot is compact and not procrastinating. There is no situation like other books where you can't write down the main plot for a long time [Like]

So far, it doesn't seem to have any bad points. It seems to have a low rating, but it actually looks good.

It's delicious, and most of the plot is well-paced. It can be seen that the writing still needs polishing, so give it five stars.

It's very interesting to watch, and the ratio between the plot and the real-life reaction in the later stage is perfect!

If you write one chapter of 6,000 words, how can the author of another chapter of 2,000 words survive?

Can add some details

So pretty, so pretty

Teacher, it looks great, come on, come on😘😘😘

Very nice. Love it. Very nice.

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking! ! !

This book is very good, children