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The overall story is really good, but I didn't see when the protagonists got together. It was so sudden that it easily made me feel a sense of disparity. I really wanted to see the process of them getting together. From what I've seen so far, the emotional lines are not that prominent (just my personal opinion). I hope the teacher can make the emotional lines between Zhiyuan and Chenyi more obvious next time. Finally, teacher, can you update twice a day? One update is really not enough⑉꒦ິ^꒦ິ⑉꧞. In addition, I wish the teacher good health and that the novel he writes is indeed quite good (personal opinion), keep up the good work. [Love][love][love]

Very well written, I really like group portrait articles! !

It looks great. I love watching it. I beg the author for more updates [Blow kiss][Flow kiss][Flow kiss]

In the early stage, we didn't see the prototype of dual male protagonists. It is recommended to add some cp/interaction and conversation between the two protagonists. Add a little sweet plot

I want to know who is the protagonist's cp?

Not bad. The subject matter is relatively new and interesting.

It's great, I love reading it, please give it a thumbs up, author!

It looks good. It's tied in one day. Let's score first. I beg the author that the main character group must do well.

It's a good read. The book's ideas are clear and the emotional lines are stable. The characters each have their own personalities and plots.