[Derived from Ruyi] [Rebirth] [Remove Yi syndrome] [All members awaken] [HE]
Due to an accident, Chen Wanyin traveled to the body of the concubine with the same name as her in Ruyi's Royal Love in the Palace. Starting from hiding in the mansion, she worked step by step with the script in hand, and gradually eliminated Yi's syndrome for everyone in the harem.
However, as fate gradually corrected the chaos, she discovered the truth about her so-called "travel".
Since it's not as simple as time travel, she naturally can't just be satisfied with letting this crazy world return to the right track. For those sisters who tried their best to give her this opportunity, Wanyin also wants to change their fate for them!
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1. There are a small number of private settings, which are only to supplement the gaps in the original plot and will not have a major impact on the character's personality or plot direction.
2. A slap in the face is as big as unblocking the breasts! But we will not forcibly reduce the intelligence of Da Ru, Hai Lan and others. In fact, they are not very smart to begin with. If they are reduced again, the protagonist will not have the sense of accomplishment of torturing scumbag men and scumbags~~
3. The heroine's role as Hongli will not change, but it is not a mindless infatuation. This line will not take up space, just to improve the world view.
4. The heroine and Wei Yanwan have a lot of friendship lines. Sisters who don't like Yanwan, please avoid it.
5. The character of Jin Zhong will be retained, and there will also be a story line between him and Yan Wan, but the author does not want Yan Wan to suffer so much, so the emotional direction will be different from the original drama. Please avoid lightning if you cannot accept it.
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Thank you for reading this. If there are any plot settings in the article that make you feel uncomfortable, you can leave a message or abandon the trap. Please don't get angry or harm yourself because of it~~
Sending you health blessings from Concubine Wan, the 92-year-old longevity king of Qianlong's harem in the Qing Dynasty!
Reader comments
It's good-looking, and the overall logic is smooth. The protagonist is a true virgin (a compliment), which truly warms the harem. Everyone is slowly getting rid of hysteria. Generally speaking, there are no bad parts, and the supplementary settings are also harmonious.
The only puzzling point is that the heroine inexplicably believes that the world will collapse if Ruyi dies. However, looking at the full text, there is no place where God's will occurs. Even if it is not involved in the plot, it will not be a big deal. I don't see much use for this setting, so it is better to remove it.
When I first saw the heroine's conclusion that I didn't know how to come to, I thought this book was a step-by-step plot. If the heroine changes her fate a little bit, God's will will happen and she will come back inexplicably. But in fact, the heroine has really changed a lot of tragedies, and Ruyi rarely makes people disgusted.
This book is actually very well written, but not many people have read it. I think there may be something wrong with the introduction, such as the one where the heroine's official consort is Qianlong. So far, I don't feel that there is any relationship between the heroine and Qianlong. The heroine and Qianlong are quite respectful to each other. I feel that the author means that the heroine will not fall in love with other men, and she and Qianlong are more like his right-hand man.
The point of this criticism is that it is easy for people to mistakenly think that the heroine and Qianlong in Ruyi's Royal Love in the Palace are co-stars, which is very discouraging. Now that Qianlong is slowly getting rid of hysteria, he is more interested in the mistress in The Legend of Zhen Huan, and he has more trust in the heroine. He feels that he will be less suspicious of the heroine in the future. After all, many of the things the heroine did were beneficial to Qianlong, and it is easy for people to feel that the heroine is aggrieved if she is always doubtful.
I would like to add that the most interesting part of this novel is that except for Yi Bi and Fucha Zhuying, all the people are rescued, including Hailan Xingxin and the others, and Jinyuyan does not attribute all her cruelty to herself. She sees Yu's wolf ambition, and Jinyuyan realizes this and breaks away from her love mind. The heroine is really like Like the sun, it warms the people around me. Regarding the deaths of Yi Bi and Fu Cha Zhuying, I understand that this is the setting of the script. Fu Cha Zhuying died before the plot began, and the original work did not have a description of her character. Maybe the author was not sure how to insert such a character in the early stage, and simply banned it due to the influence of God. Yi Bin is also in the background of the original work, and the birth of her child is beneficial to Ruyi, and only a blood debt can send Ruyi to the cold palace, unfolding the story of Qianlong's escape from hysteria, and at the same time, this incident can be used to expose the goldfish eye, so that she will no longer cause trouble and harm the harem. I saw someone in the comment area saying that this book was completely based on the original work, maybe because of the death of Fucha Zhuying, but after reading it later, I realized that this is not the case at all. The author may have written this out of the desire to shut down a character who did not know how to deal with it as soon as possible, but for this destined background character, there could actually be less description of her getting along with the protagonist. Too many descriptions of her but she was still offline in the end can easily lead to misunderstandings. The tone of the whole story is that God's will is constantly working, and the heroine's efforts to change are all in vain.
Because it is not a cool novel, there may be a little less people reading it. After all, the people who can read it are probably people who are so angry with the original work that they want to relieve their anger. There are fewer people watching this kind of slow-paced original work. However, I calmed down and read it slowly, and I felt that the author's ideas and entry point were very strange. Maybe it's because the protagonist is Chen Wanyin. There is a faint sense of daily life, and the heroine is really a great saint (a compliment). She almost tries her best to save everyone within her own ability. Even Concubine Jia is willing to remind her to wake up and pull Hailan back from the beginning. The Holy Mother is not annoying, she is very gentle and wise, and she is not merciless in her methods. She can use her strength to fight. She feels like Concubine Duan in The Legend of Zhen Huan. Everyone in the harem also has their own selfish motives. For example, Lang Hua really wants to kill Ruyi, hahahaha, and Chen Wanyin really can't stop the queen without any tricks. Let's continue reading first, it's a book worth reading.
It's very good, the writing is very comfortable to watch, not embarrassing, and the plot progress is just right. Not that crazy kind of thing. As big as the bad and stupid ones are logical, not the kind of crazy people who are brainless and illogical. The heroine is not a prophet in the first place, she is just an ordinary person who knows the plot of time travel. Many methods and strategies are already very good, and she does not follow the original plot completely. It did not make me feel perfunctory and uncomfortable, and the author's handling is not rigid. And I really like the description of the interaction between the characters. The words and deeds of the characters are written very well to my liking.
Very well written! Except for Ruyi and concubine Ruyi, they made well-meaning arrangements for every concubine. Hailan was also very good, and did not force Jinwei to have feelings. Jinzhong only single-mindedly acted with restraint and caution, and did not violate the rules at all. Yanwan didn't know at all that the original servants like Li Yurongpei had also woken up, and real concubines appeared to put things right. , And this meaning also paved the way for the real successor to cut off his hair. It did not make the emperor too disgusting, but it did not beautify it. It still highlighted the moodiness and intimidation of the feudal emperor. The author is also very sophisticated in writing and incorporates many ancient knowledge points. It is a very good Ruyi companion and is worth reading.
The pacing and character creation of this book are good, and the original plot is not OOC at all. The author has a strong cultural background, the writing is also very smooth, and the plot is solid. I have just read a few chapters and I feel that if I continue, it will get a 9 points. It is at least one of the top three new fan works in Da Ru Chuan in the past six months. It is a pity that few people have read it.
After watching it for a few days, I felt it was a bit slow at first, but after entering the palace, I obviously felt that the pace of the plot accelerated. I was so obsessed with watching it that I just watched it when I had time! Anyway, looking forward to the follow-up! !
It's very interesting. I reviewed and updated it in two days. It's not a mindless article, but the writing style is very solid. The new protagonist is well created, has his own three-dimensional image, can think seriously, and will not dominate the supporting characters. The supporting characters in the original drama are also well written, with their own growth and story lines. The overall summary is appropriate, and the unimportant content that is repeated in the original work is brushed aside. The changes caused by the butterfly effect are described with emphasis. The efforts and struggles of the characters are also well written.
It's very nice, and the logic is very clear. The core of the Legend of Da Ru is Da Ru. The three things of Da Ru are the Three Golds and Durian Seeds. They can kidnap each other. If Da Ru didn't click on the Golden Finger of Heaven, there would be no feeling of fighting monsters. The heroine is really annoyed with Zha Long. She won't play anymore in the rest of the show. She just wants to get off work and fish. The historical line occupying position is not a new way to solve the problem. I am looking forward to the harem ladies starting a group.
The number of words is still small at the moment, but the relatively rare heroine Chen Wanyin has also added a lot of plots in the dormitory~ I feel it is worth keeping.
Chen Wanyin is very clever, 666
Fans who like this kind of long-term flow, thank you so much
The writing is smooth, the plot is reasonable, and Da Ru's madness is also shown well. I like it.
Ok ok ok
I want the author to get to the finale when I open my eyes tomorrow [I'm about to cry]
It's nice to read. The author's writing is very logical and the writing style is not childish.
Why are so few people watching?
Love to read🥺, the logic is smooth, the writing style is concise, and it is quite enjoyable to read😋🥰🥰
The characters are all vivid and vividly written. The protagonist Wanyin is well-rounded and quite charming [shy]
The writing is fluent and the plot logic is smooth. It is slow but the content is very solid and has great potential!
There is a sense of daily life quietly flowing in the twisted plot, which is very interesting.
It's good-looking, and the overall logic is smooth. The protagonist is a true virgin (a compliment), which truly warms the harem. Everyone is slowly getting rid of hysteria. Generally speaking, there are no bad parts, and the supplementary settings are also harmonious. The only puzzling point is that the heroine inexplicably believes that the world will collapse if Ruyi dies. However, looking at the full text, there is no place where God's will occurs. Even if it is not involved in the plot, it will not be a big deal. I don't see much use for this setting, so it is better to remove it. When I first saw the heroine's conclusion that I didn't know how to come to, I thought this book was a step-by-step plot. If the heroine changes her fate a little bit, God's will will happen and she will come back inexplicably. But in fact, the heroine has really changed a lot of tragedies, and Ruyi rarely makes people disgusted. This book is actually very well written, but not many people have read it. I think there may be something wrong with the introduction, such as the one where the heroine's official consort is Qianlong. So far, I don't feel that there is any relationship between the heroine and Qianlong. The heroine and Qianlong are quite respectful to each other. I feel that the author means that the heroine will not fall in love with other men, and she and Qianlong are more like his right-hand man. The point of this criticism is that it is easy for people to mistakenly think that the heroine and Qianlong in Ruyi's Royal Love in the Palace are co-stars, which is very discouraging. Now that Qianlong is slowly getting rid of hysteria, he is more interested in the mistress in The Legend of Zhen Huan, and he has more trust in the heroine. He feels that he will be less suspicious of the heroine in the future. After all, many of the things the heroine did were beneficial to Qianlong, and it is easy for people to feel that the heroine is aggrieved if she is always doubtful. I would like to add that the most interesting part of this novel is that except for Yi Bi and Fucha Zhuying, all the people are rescued, including Hailan Xingxin and the others, and Jinyuyan does not attribute all her cruelty to herself. She sees Yu's wolf ambition, and Jinyuyan realizes this and breaks away from her love mind. The heroine is really like Like the sun, it warms the people around me. Regarding the deaths of Yi Bi and Fu Cha Zhuying, I understand that this is the setting of the script. Fu Cha Zhuying died before the plot began, and the original work did not have a description of her character. Maybe the author was not sure how to insert such a character in the early stage, and simply banned it due to the influence of God. Yi Bin is also in the background of the original work, and the birth of her child is beneficial to Ruyi, and only a blood debt can send Ruyi to the cold palace, unfolding the story of Qianlong's escape from hysteria, and at the same time, this incident can be used to expose the goldfish eye, so that she will no longer cause trouble and harm the harem. I saw someone in the comment area saying that this book was completely based on the original work, maybe because of the death of Fucha Zhuying, but after reading it later, I realized that this is not the case at all. The author may have written this out of the desire to shut down a character who did not know how to deal with it as soon as possible, but for this destined background character, there could actually be less description of her getting along with the protagonist. Too many descriptions of her but she was still offline in the end can easily lead to misunderstandings. The tone of the whole story is that God's will is constantly working, and the heroine's efforts to change are all in vain.
Because it is not a cool novel, there may be a little less people reading it. After all, the people who can read it are probably people who are so angry with the original work that they want to relieve their anger. There are fewer people watching this kind of slow-paced original work. However, I calmed down and read it slowly, and I felt that the author's ideas and entry point were very strange. Maybe it's because the protagonist is Chen Wanyin. There is a faint sense of daily life, and the heroine is really a great saint (a compliment). She almost tries her best to save everyone within her own ability. Even Concubine Jia is willing to remind her to wake up and pull Hailan back from the beginning. The Holy Mother is not annoying, she is very gentle and wise, and she is not merciless in her methods. She can use her strength to fight. She feels like Concubine Duan in The Legend of Zhen Huan. Everyone in the harem also has their own selfish motives. For example, Lang Hua really wants to kill Ruyi, hahahaha, and Chen Wanyin really can't stop the queen without any tricks. Let's continue reading first, it's a book worth reading.
It's very good, the writing is very comfortable to watch, not embarrassing, and the plot progress is just right. Not that crazy kind of thing. As big as the bad and stupid ones are logical, not the kind of crazy people who are brainless and illogical. The heroine is not a prophet in the first place, she is just an ordinary person who knows the plot of time travel. Many methods and strategies are already very good, and she does not follow the original plot completely. It did not make me feel perfunctory and uncomfortable, and the author's handling is not rigid. And I really like the description of the interaction between the characters. The words and deeds of the characters are written very well to my liking.
Very well written! Except for Ruyi and concubine Ruyi, they made well-meaning arrangements for every concubine. Hailan was also very good, and did not force Jinwei to have feelings. Jinzhong only single-mindedly acted with restraint and caution, and did not violate the rules at all. Yanwan didn't know at all that the original servants like Li Yurongpei had also woken up, and real concubines appeared to put things right. , And this meaning also paved the way for the real successor to cut off his hair. It did not make the emperor too disgusting, but it did not beautify it. It still highlighted the moodiness and intimidation of the feudal emperor. The author is also very sophisticated in writing and incorporates many ancient knowledge points. It is a very good Ruyi companion and is worth reading.
The pacing and character creation of this book are good, and the original plot is not OOC at all. The author has a strong cultural background, the writing is also very smooth, and the plot is solid. I have just read a few chapters and I feel that if I continue, it will get a 9 points. It is at least one of the top three new fan works in Da Ru Chuan in the past six months. It is a pity that few people have read it.
After watching it for a few days, I felt it was a bit slow at first, but after entering the palace, I obviously felt that the pace of the plot accelerated. I was so obsessed with watching it that I just watched it when I had time! Anyway, looking forward to the follow-up! !
It's very interesting. I reviewed and updated it in two days. It's not a mindless article, but the writing style is very solid. The new protagonist is well created, has his own three-dimensional image, can think seriously, and will not dominate the supporting characters. The supporting characters in the original drama are also well written, with their own growth and story lines. The overall summary is appropriate, and the unimportant content that is repeated in the original work is brushed aside. The changes caused by the butterfly effect are described with emphasis. The efforts and struggles of the characters are also well written.
It's very nice, and the logic is very clear. The core of the Legend of Da Ru is Da Ru. The three things of Da Ru are the Three Golds and Durian Seeds. They can kidnap each other. If Da Ru didn't click on the Golden Finger of Heaven, there would be no feeling of fighting monsters. The heroine is really annoyed with Zha Long. She won't play anymore in the rest of the show. She just wants to get off work and fish. The historical line occupying position is not a new way to solve the problem. I am looking forward to the harem ladies starting a group.
The number of words is still small at the moment, but the relatively rare heroine Chen Wanyin has also added a lot of plots in the dormitory~ I feel it is worth keeping.
Chen Wanyin is very clever, 666
Fans who like this kind of long-term flow, thank you so much
The writing is smooth, the plot is reasonable, and Da Ru's madness is also shown well. I like it.
Ok ok ok
I want the author to get to the finale when I open my eyes tomorrow [I'm about to cry]
It's nice to read. The author's writing is very logical and the writing style is not childish. Why are so few people watching?
Love to read🥺, the logic is smooth, the writing style is concise, and it is quite enjoyable to read😋🥰🥰
The characters are all vivid and vividly written. The protagonist Wanyin is well-rounded and quite charming [shy]
The writing is fluent and the plot logic is smooth. It is slow but the content is very solid and has great potential!
There is a sense of daily life quietly flowing in the twisted plot, which is very interesting.