Naruto: Naruto Without Asura

So damn pretty! ! Catch up with the big army in one go! This is the most delicate and fine-grained Naruto novel😭😭😭So far, the emotions are handled delicately and reasonably, the battles are fun, the training logic is clearly explained, and there is a lot of the author's ingenuity in it rather than just following the crowd. And it's very, very interesting. It was learned by the protagonist himself and not forced by the system. Because he is a local, the integration is perfect, rather than the sense of fragmentation that comes with the protagonist of a time-travel novel. Every character is completely in character, and there is no "strangeness" at all. The writing is fluent without being sluggish, and the details are detailed without any nonsense. No matter how good other Naruto stories are, you can always see large sections of hydrology, but this one is really smooth and reasonable. From the current point of view, the sequel of the plot will not follow the original story line. So far, they are all original stories of the author. Please update me soon ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh

There is nothing more attractive to me than you. Migong Manga itself has a reader base, and I can create a new narrative based on it. The Seven Deadly Sins, Kaneki Ken, Aizen, the mixture of these elemental high-burning unit dramas is inherently attractive. Not to mention the love line Ino Sakura Hinata, There is also the high-burning revenge line Danzo Killing is still a bit fast The narrative outside of this is full of philosophical speculation. After all, Naruto's hatred has always been a point that needs to be portrayed. "Naruto, the calm genius with murderous intent" liberated from Asura chakra The author's writing skills are very good. I felt so happy when I read it. I haven't eaten such delicious food in eight hundred years. It's been a long time since I've had a good meal.

Naruto is finally no longer a brainless optimist. After losing Asura Chakra, Naruto has become more calm and rational, and his emotional line is just right. I hope the author will continue to work hard and don't give up! [Sending Hearts]

If other Naruto novels are five-star, then this one, I only saw the sixth chapter. I couldn't help but rate the book just after reading the sixth chapter. I want to say, it is worth ten stars. Don't worry about whether I am bragging or not. I think so after reading the first six chapters. It's so awesome. I have read all kinds of Naruto novels, including funny, dark, passionate, Machiavellian, and sexual transformations. All together are not as good as the most "real" Naruto. I have limited education and cannot express my true feelings in my heart, but I think the Naruto who has experienced the first six chapters should be like this. He is not crazy, not crazy, not empty, not sad, not painful, not depressed, but it is all there. It is hard to explain the unexplained feelings. This book perfectly hits "what I want to see" [grievance]

Great, this is what I felt after reading it. The protagonist is no longer brainless or naive, and the content that may have been delayed by Naruto has been neatly resolved (just skipping the three-generation reign period, no need to write a dark theory, and for example, directly killing Danzo, a character who could not die in other Naruto novels after dozens or hundreds of chapters). Harem (three), pure but not sticky? No large-scale Shura field? (The plot of the Shura field is just one picture). The world view leads from a single Hokage to the world of the heavens (who will regularly have life-and-death duels with strong men from other worlds), and then introduces an existence that spans the heavens (nursery and gardener). Together with the protagonist becoming calm after losing Asura Chakra, it feels a bit like a reincarnation paradise. This author's writing is really good. There is no random OOC. The only shortcoming is that it is short. Every time I read it, I lose my taste [face covering]

A relatively delicate novel, but lacking in explosive points In fact, a large part of the sense of coolness comes from the background of the original work Second creation is still too niche. If the author can grasp the rhythm of the novel and have his own ideas, then writing his own novel will become more popular... The progress of the protagonist's psychology and ability But it's easy to fall into the trap of "literary youth" because most authors can't distinguish between subtlety and literary youth, and it's easy to be overly meticulous and fall into this trap. What I currently focus on is the style of writing and the character of the protagonist.

So far, the reading experience is not bad, both in terms of the smoothness of the plot and the writing style. I would like to give five stars to give the author some encouragement and hope that he can write better and more exciting plots. I can only say that the author is awesome. I have to say that the author's psychological activities and emotional entanglements with the protagonist and supporting characters can be said to be very brilliant. Although judging from the latest chapters, there are already signs of Shura Field, but I still believe that the author should be able to grasp it. But correspondingly, based on my personal reading experience, the author should be better at writing literary dramas than fighting dramas. In terms of the tension and rhythm of action scenes, I think the author's level should be able to be further improved (of course, this does not refer to the author's previous performance in fighting dramas). It is not well organized, whether it is the smoothness of the characters' movements or the logical processing of moves, it is already very good. However, I personally feel that the potential of this book is still very great. If this book wants to achieve better results, it must change the processing level of this part of the content from excellent to excellent+). But the shortcomings do not hide the good points. The delicate character creation alone is enough to make people watch deeply. (Personal opinion, friendly communication, don't like to spray, manual dog head to save life)

It's great. I watched it from 12pm to 4am. It's even. The writing is full of flesh and blood, and the delicate description of the characters makes me unable to put it down. Author, you have written so well. Promise me that this book must be finished. I will keep reading. Can I give you a free gift (¯▽¯)ゞ

The writing style is very good, the rhythm is also very good, and it is very comfortable to watch. Especially the emotional description of the female characters is excellent, which is not something that ordinary Naruto fan authors can master. The protagonist is not dead, and his strength is steadily improving. Unlike some fans who are instantly invincible and have no suspense anymore. I look forward to the follow-up plot.

Hao Chi, without the Asura chakra, it will be completely different after becoming a normal person. The Kyuubi does not interfere with the chakra, and the speed of refining can be calculated according to the card. The inherited Minato talent becomes a genius, and the superimposed whirlpool physique makes Naruto in this book feel like the Child of Destiny. It is a garden inside, and I feel like I want to be infinite in the future, and the heroine Ino must be 5 stars. I feel that the golden flowers in Konoha may not be able to escape [laughter]

I'm tired of reading too many Naruto stories in Naruto Sunshine. Let's take a look at this Naruto story. This is where the original Naruto really comes to life [Blowing Kiss]

It's a pity that the author stopped updating. This book has great potential. If it can be updated 5 times a day, it will become an instant hit.

It's pretty good. Although it freed the protagonist Naruto from being labeled as Lotte, he didn't go mindlessly into cruelty and darkness. He retained his kind undertones, but he was no longer that kind of mindless kind.

It's very interesting. I've seen Date A Live and I'm really looking forward to how the author will write it down. Or else the three of them will meet each other directly and then the main body will be gone and they will just make dumplings together as a family? Or let Naruto hide it? I don't know how to write it if I keep it secret.

Divine grass, crush 99% of Naruto fans on this site Where is Nani's other chapter?

It looks good, I recommend it, but it's too little. It didn't take long to catch up with the big army. Speaking of which, will the Flying Thunder God appear? I quite like it. I'm really looking forward to when the Nine Lama Connection will be released [laugh][laugh][laugh]

The setting is quite interesting. It absorbs the systems of various worlds and becomes stronger. The author's writing is good. It seems that it should be a big harem at the moment. Come on.

A very excellent work. It does not limit the characters between justice and evil. It completely describes the growth of Uzumaki himself. It is much more interesting than those dark novels.

Not bad, not bad, the story unfolds from another perspective, and the other world is also well laid out, which is very attractive to watch. Big cheers to the author.

It's well written and describes Naruto's departure from his destiny and his self from a very novel perspective.

A very nice Naruto fanfic, with delicate emotions and good character creation. Although there are many female protagonists, it is very attentive. It is not a bulldozer or the reincarnation of Teddy. Big support for the author. I send you a five-star review. Quick update [I learned it]

I have only read twenty chapters so far. The writing is very good and I can use simple vocabulary to accurately describe what I want to write. But when I look at it, I feel that Naruto is like a tightly tightened string that may suddenly explode at any time because of some simple things. If it is not handled well, it will be very depressing.

The rating shouldn't be so low. The emotional description is very delicate, the logic is passable, and the battles are also exciting.

It's beautiful, and it made me see a different Naruto, a free Uzumaki Naruto who is not restricted by the theory of blood.

This book is okay, but the first five chapters at the beginning are too abrupt, a bit stream-of-consciousness. Later on, you can see that the writing is getting better and better. If the first five chapters can be revised, it can be regarded as a good Naruto novel.

Well, well, keep writing, the future of Hongda. But most novels seem to be only good at setting up and describing, and eventually come to nothing. The author wrote this book well. I hope the author can make more money until the end.

It's one of the top two Naruto fan fictions I've read in the past few years. It's as good as the one next door to Sandai. I hope the author can maintain his standards and continue writing.

It should be said that he is a Naruto who has lost his passion, but I found it quite enjoyable.

Please author, please give me another one. I feel like there are ants crawling on me

Don't be a eunuch, it's rare to see Aizen Feng's absolute calmness.