At the Beginning of the Cosmic Abyss, I Summon the Fourth Natural Disaster!

This theme is very novel. It is an online game theme that draws on the work cell's world view. It can be seen that the writing style is a bit immature, and it is a bit difficult to control the world view. After all, it requires a certain amount of physiological and medical knowledge support, and it also needs to calculate data. The flaws are not hidden, and the writing style is immature. However, the subject matter is too novel and gripping. I hope the author will not waste such a good theme, don't GG, don't collapse, I hope the author's writing will get better and better, and make a lot of money soon! RESPECT

Overall, it's ok, the ideas are novel enough, and the writing is also good. I've always been curious about how many light-years tall a body is. Isn't it like crossing the solar system from the inside to the outside? The biology class representative went directly to the epidermis, which is necessary to promote the plot. At what speed does the player advance in the protagonist's body? The speed of light or supersonic speed? A wound is a nebula. I don't know how big the wound is in human proportions, but at this level, the player has to move at the speed of light in the protagonist's body to develop at your rate.

The setting is clear, and I really like to see if we can find a way to create a super-large battle where the self-defense cells in the protagonist's body and the players fight together. [Laughing evilly][laughing evilly][laughing evilly][laughing evilly][laughing evilly]

It's a really interesting and innovative book. It reminds me of when I was in elementary school and my friends tried to create a game from a microscopic perspective. However, due to lack of biological knowledge, we failed to build a world view. Now I can make up for the regret [Blow kiss]

I am Shennong. Although some AI expansion is used in the article, the author does not rely on it. This is a four-day disaster story, but the world is a body. The writing is more creative. I usually don't comment on the four-day disaster because it is too common. The character is not outstanding enough, simply speaking, it is not attractive enough. Sooner or later, no one will ask about it. Even if someone looks at it, there are some people he cannot keep. I will continue to watch it because I will give it four stars because it is creative. If it is tasteless, I will give it three stars. Chapter 63 is not bad. The historical plot dialogue of the Light Clan is well written. It is currently four stars. The plot is also interesting and attractive, rather than a single plot.

Online games and cooperation are unprecedented and worth watching. After reading this book, you won't be willing to watch intrigues in traditional online games. Cooperation is the fun of the new generation of online games and online books.

The setting is good, and the path is clear, without any procrastination. As long as you write it, I will follow it.

A rare article about the fourth natural disaster, but I hope the game will be released to the public as soon as possible. Otherwise, 100,000 to 100,000 people would be too few. In the future, I feel that people of other races in the family can also play games together, which would be fun.

Four stars for encouragement. The subject of the Fourth Disaster, but from a very novel angle. The protagonist traveled through time and became a Titan and got sick. He cooperated with the system to use his body as a game battlefield to introduce players on the earth to kill the virus. But after seeing Chapter 14, players were directly told that they were helping to sterilize the Titan's body. To be honest, my expectations were greatly reduced. The reader's expectation is that the player has been fighting in the body as a game professional until the Titan's disease is cured and the truth is revealed, and the expectation is full. Finally, we conquer the universe together as Titan Familia. Of course, it's a family opinion, it depends on everyone.

It's pretty good, as I said before. A good book should be steady and don't collapse. Press the data to a low pressure and don't explode. After the body is repaired, you can conquer other star realms and divine realms to make the protagonist stronger. Blue star construction, multi-perspective group portrait stories, anyway, there is a lot that can be written [eat melon] and there is a lot of room for expansion.

It's very well written. I think one of the biggest features of this novel is that it doesn't have several protagonists like other novels, and then makes it very confusing. The character setting is also very well created, at least I can recognize it. First of all, what I don't understand is the inexplicable buffs given to Li You, and in recent chapters, the perspective has shifted to the four-person team and reality. In reality, the scene when two people go to the Lion Kingdom feels very sugary. There is already a tendency to drive high and go low. I still hope to give more pictures to the first echelon. Well, now it has started to go high and go low. There are too many national plot portrayals, and Li You is too defiant.

A very interesting book, the first surprise of the New Year's Tomato, the Titan who was overturned by the gods, the extradition of the fourth natural disaster, the incarnation of the immune system, quite a novel idea, the progress is good so far, it will be a good story if it does not collapse in the later stage

Not bad. The subject matter is novel and the writing is very good. [Blowing kiss][Flowing kiss][Blowing kiss] And it can be seen that the author has checked the information [Like][Like][Like]

This kind of subject matter is very vivid and creative, but isn't this Titan afraid of being hollowed out? [What] people can actually dig through his skin and go into the universe. If all the cells are subcontracted, wouldn't the Titan be dead? [Thinking][Thinking] If what I mean is, if the player doesn't want to stay in Titan's body [Thinking][Thinking] and wants to go out alone, what should I do if I let him go? ⊙▽⊙After all, if human cells have their own thoughts and they want to break out of your control, wouldn't you disintegrate instantly? [Smile][smile]

It's very nice to look at, but I can't go into details. The proportions are not quite right. The protagonist is said to be several light years old, but he can go from one organ to another in a few days. Even if you calculate it as one tenth of a light year, the speed of light would have to travel for a month.

In Tomato, it is one of the more innovative books I have seen so far (I have read the most). It follows the model of human body plus game. This article is a group portrait, which is also a relatively difficult article to write. Generally speaking, it is quite satisfactory. There is nothing too poisonous at the moment. I give it a five-star [already planted][already planted]

I'll give it a five-star rating after reading it. The subject matter is quite unique, a mixture of animation work cells and the apocalypse of cultivating immortals. It's not over 100 yet, and it doesn't look like it's dragging the ink. Characterization mainly depends on the later stage. It is not easy to write humanities well in this kind of novel. The key point is to be "special" and not cowardly. Leave it for a month and see what happens next.

Although the writing style is a bit down compared to the beginning, it is overall very good. The writing style is somewhere between novice writing and what traditional bookworms would consider non-novice writing. The idea of ​​this novel is very interesting, and I look forward to the author's subsequent development. I would like to make a small suggestion. The early stage of the real-world plot, in which the power in the game is realized in reality, is handled quite well. Unfortunately, the real-life situation is a bit deep later on, and I guess the author has no idea [laughing]. You can focus on the establishment and development of player groups, and further blur the description of the country's background, so that you won't frequently step on the red line or burst out a few confusing plots all at once. In reality, it still needs to be rewritten. Otherwise, just looking at Titan's performance, it is already a bit weak at present, and it is a bit of a waste of such good brainpower. I suggest the author refer to the online game trilogy of Lost Leaves by the Ancient God. The plot is old-fashioned, but the writing method and framework are used in this book. It is quite valuable to modify it. Is this a bad run? ? There haven't been any updates for two days, so at least send out a leaflet asking for leave. If you want to cut the book, just say so. No one is wasting time.

It's great. This book has new ideas and new content. It starts with a system that others did not expect. It is a path that we have never thought of. I hope the author will update it more, don't leave it unfinished, and keep updating it forever.

It's very interesting and very interesting. It's quite professional and very interesting. It's the kind of great work that's rare to see. And the author seems to be a staff member of bci, although he is a part-time job, he said it himself

It's very interesting and interesting. I highly recommend it. It can actually turn the human immune system into an online game. What a brain the author has. He's so creative! The only drawback is that the author is too short, can it be faster? ! !

Good looking(♥∀♥) Books, why are they updated? Is it simply because they want to be written about? But that can't be the answer. Because they must be written. When the meteorite of discontinuation falls from the book, only the serial author can escape from the predetermined demise. In order to prevent the work from being discontinued, the author flies high into the sky and takes away your book waste, and because of this, he will write and fall into discontinuity. And if you want your works to be constantly updated, you, you, must be pushed to a higher place than him. This is the logic behind discontinuing updates after crossing over from serialization to serialization. This is the author's pen is the end of this book Nothing to do with choice Nothing to do with life or death At this moment, the ideals of all people gather Step forward! This is the inscription of [urge to update]

The setting is good, but the real core of this type of novel lies in the group portraits. There are too many descriptions of the five people and too little descriptions of the others, so the plot must be greatly compromised.

The settings are pretty good, but too few. I personally feel that this explanation is more reasonable: Although the protagonist is a juvenile, his external defenses are already very strong and cannot be defeated by those people, but because he is weak internally, he disintegrates from the body

It reminds me of "Cells at Work". Although the setting has some annoyances, such as why Titans are still anthropomorphic structures (the human body is not perfect and can be improved a lot) and can feel pain, but the flaws are not hidden, and it is a good idea if you put aside your mind.

The plot is very good, and it has a more immersive feel. There are more character scenes and less protagonist scenes, so it is very good behind the scenes.

Personally I think it looks pretty good! Different world background! A different behind-the-scenes flow! You can enjoy the refreshing feeling of reading novels and experience the story! You can also see knowledge about human tissues, cells, and flora! The party that can withstand the strictness and logic! Also suitable for those who simply read novels!

The highest rating. As we all know, Tomato is a gold mining APP. The author is already considered a gold nugget. Keep writing and working hard and don't stop updating. As long as you become popular, or find some shrimp animations to cooperate and promote it, you will definitely shine.

The most satisfying thing is that this book does not act, and does not add any patches of confusion or cognitive confusion. Players were immediately told that the background of the game was inside the human body very early on, and later it was directly stated that the signal came from outer space.

It's very interesting. This is no joke. In novels of the same type, the main character is poor at the beginning and summons a few people to play house there. It is not brought into reality until the later stages. This book is different. The group portraits brought directly into reality are far more interesting and invincible than in the game. However, it is too slow. Two chapters in one day.