Traveling Through America and Fearing That Jesus Is My Brother

The book is very good, but I always feel that there are a lot of missing parts and a lot of content has been skipped. The Jesus in this book gave me the feeling of being a real wise man, and the character setting is very full.

This book has the flavor of a drama. Moreover, it is rare in the current world of novels to be able to seriously describe the power of the side of religion that teaches people to be good, and also has a positive view of love, sacrifice, and justice - how rare! Five-star recommendation! However, I would like to remind you that although the identity of the male protagonist is amazing, due to the author's writing style, the actual taste is not that "refreshing". Readers who come with a refreshing mentality need to lower their expectations.

I'm sure it was written by AI. Only AI can be so verbose. The subject matter is excellent, the writing style is excellent, and it's readable.

It looks good, and the type really satisfies some people who like religious beliefs and believe that pure positive emotional energy can play a role. It's just that maybe everyone prefers a plot where the protagonist kills everyone and then his identity is revealed, pretending to be a pig and eating a tiger?

It's very interesting. It's not the old-fashioned system upgrade to defeat monsters, where you can gain various skills and defeat monsters with various clicks. Although the protagonist has a big hangup, he still gradually explores the world.

The author writes it very well, every character in it is full-bodied, and the protagonist has a good personality. Personally, it's better than the Mythology of Wandering. I watched Wandering Mythology first. It was good at the beginning, but not so good when I returned to reality later. Don't criticize, this is just my personal feeling. Keep up the good work, author [Like]

So far, it's okay, but the AI flavor is a bit strong, and I repeatedly read the first three chapters and couldn't find where the system mentioned Good Friday. The protagonist just knew it, and it was suspected that the AI had been deleted after the changes. I hope to see the holy water dip into the tiger's finger later, and he will be saved while fighting. No, the parentheses in the text are not deleted, even if they are changed

The book is okay, but what is more painful is that the main character eats too much Chinese food, which is very dramatic. Where can I eat tomato and egg soup in foreign countries? [Awkward smile] I also bought celery in the supermarket and fried it. I will never forget that when I was studying abroad, I thought I bought celery in the supermarket, but it turned out to be fruit rhubarb [smile]

The writing is very good, the writing about Jesus is very sacred and fascinating, and the description of the horror movie part also makes people feel a little creepy. In short, it is suitable as a long-term food.

Miao Miao Miao, this kind of invisible and unconscious pretense is the best (of course the protagonist does not pretend but the effect is the same), look forward to more beautiful and horror worlds, make a wish for Constantine and Lucifer (drama version) I feel that the protagonist is useless, and the original plot has not changed at all. For example, the gun shop owner who died unfortunately in Dawn of the Dead still died in the same way when the protagonist came. The protagonist just pretended to be a b, which at least had some effect on the plot; in addition, the protagonist relied too much on external forces, and he did not know how to use magic.

This novel is a beautiful and novel Western mythology fused with horror stories. It avoids the fixed model of upgrading monsters and fighting power like Chinese online novels. Instead, it uses a model of faith or firmness of belief plus deification props. Although the protagonist has a certain improvement in the data panel, this value is currently only slightly stronger than that of ordinary people. What is commendable is that finally the gods described in this novel are not just human beings with extraordinary powers.

It's good to read. I love seeing that the author has actually read the Bible. In this book, the protagonist travels through a comprehensive horror world, opens the system at the age of 16, travels through various timelines and time and space to strengthen his power, protect his family, and fight against monsters and monsters. The first time line travel and Jesus called each other brothers. He is about to become a living dad in the horror world [cool]. Watch it later.

I really like the shaping of this book! The protagonist's behavioral logic is very "normal", not the kind of character who is always "killing decisively and with extreme emotions", but hesitant, weighing, and taking responsibility for the people around him. It is very comfortable to read [like] The design of the system is also very restrained. It only provides the protagonist with a window to contact different events and the world, rather than a "click-and-deliver" plug-in, and it is not over-personalized. The process of truly solving problems and gaining recognition is always completed by the protagonist himself, and the growth line is very solid. In addition, the protagonist's emotions towards his family after time travel are also very delicate. "The power of protection" is something I never get tired of talking about! It's not sloganeering. I hope that in the following stories, the family members will not become backgrounds, but can participate deeply in the story [Chigua]. I also have a small suggestion: Can the family members also learn how to deal with supernatural events with the protagonist, and have some self-protection ability? Otherwise, it will easily become a drag. After all, the protagonist has inevitably come into contact with supernatural forces... And the experience with Brother Jesus is also very shocking! I hope we can see each other more in the future and let the protagonist's family know about such a half-brother [I'm about to cry] What I personally feel is a bit lacking is that when the protagonist is talking on the phone, there are several dialogues that are slightly... Written...? Take the section on measures to deal with supernatural events as an example. The structure of "1, 2, 3, 4" reads slightly like an AI sorting out conclusions. If you use more colloquial language and use connecting words to expand naturally, the sense of substitution will be stronger. Looking forward to the follow-up! !

This book is extraordinary. Its starting point and some behavioral ideas are the same, but there are some differences from other online articles. Although there are still some superficial improvements and growth in the behavior model, this is not simply about killing monsters and upgrading, or killing an evil spirit and then gaining visible improvement in skills, but the author is trying to describe a person's actual growth in a gentler and vaguer way. Start by being guided by Jesus. At the same time, uh, when it comes to the guidance of Jesus, it is a relatively special prerequisite. A large amount of ink is used to describe this event in the early part of the book, but it does not make it cumbersome to read. I think the core reason is that the author created a relatively full image of a wise man as a guide. At the same time, it has raised the reader's psychological expectations. Of course, one thing is special, that is, the portrayal of the protagonist is an obviously imperfect character. It is not distinctive, strong, and eye-catching enough. Because it is difficult to put some specific and non-specific labels on it, it also increases the difficulty of understanding. The author uses a relatively ordinary way to advance the plot, but obviously, in the context of this online article, this is somewhat unfamiliar. In other words, this is a narrative that is more natural and plain, and breaks away from the traditional Eastern perspective. I have something to say, but obviously I don't know what I want to say, and I'm trying to put together some words to express that vague idea. Of course, the reason why I don't give it five stars is also very simple, that is, some other readers in the comment area said that they feel like AI. I personally think it is possible to use AI. However, I think the content inside the article is more or less the author's own inner thoughts. Therefore, I will not give him a low score just because he uses AI. Of course, another point is that the number of words in each chapter is relatively sufficient. Well, I have only read about 20 chapters now, but it took two hours. This is a bit beyond my expectations. I did not expect that it would take so long. Of course, well, the most important thing is that this is not a cool article, but if you really bring your brain to this kind of rational thinking and look at it, it is obviously not enough to support that amount of thinking. It can only be said that from this point of view, this book is in a rather awkward position. That's all I can say.

As other book friends said, this book is well written about religious philosophy and upward guidance for people, as well as the description of family love, but it is a bit less exciting for online novels, and it may be due to AI assistance or the author's settings are very detailed and complex. There are only a few fighting scenes with hand-to-hand fights, and most of them are about non-physical collisions such as spirituality and spirituality. (Based on the high opening of the opening) There is a feeling of being both powerful and weak. Maybe the author wants to write a more gradual one. Generally speaking, writing similar to this kind of Ye Ge opening, the basic cool story will reveal the saint to others, reveal the identity, and show off the fun in a hodgepodge of horror. However, the author of this article may be more inclined to write a slow-burning growth character, describing, well, the inner strength

Some people say that this article is an AI article, so it gets a low score. I think that the AI ​​article is not bad, and the author uses it well, and has his own content and understanding. You can see that the author really knows a lot in the comments, and it is not all thanks to AI. Really don't poke it. Some people say that the content written by AI is too complicated and convoluted to be understood. I think most people read this kind of novels for entertainment. Some of the convoluted and complicated content can be skipped or read briefly to understand the general meaning without affecting subsequent viewing. Some people say that the author is preaching. Isn't it true that some people believe in God after reading this type of novel? Don't they all find the setting interesting to pass the time? If you don't like free novels like Tomato, you'll be forced to return them if you don't like them, and your money will be confiscated. Tomato has so many cool articles that you can quit and swim in the sea of ​​cool articles. I'm not saying that the author's writing is great, at least it's above average. So are there any similar articles?

Although the overall description of this book cannot reach 9 points, and there are no ups and downs and exciting plots, the grasp of details can still reach 8 points. The protagonist is not Long Aotian who is in the sky or the madman who is fighting in the sky and the battlefield. He is an ordinary psychological person with a background but growing up on his own ✌︎˶╹ꇴ╹˶✌︎.

It's good to watch, especially the part where you travel to Jerusalem. The writing is also good, and it's not too toxic. It's okay.

Yes, the quality of the first 9 and 20 chapters is very good, and you can see the AI ​​polishing. However, only the first 20 chapters have a very obvious impact on reading. It can also be seen from the word count that after 20 chapters, the author started to type mainly by hand. Overall, it is a good source of American horror, with warmth, a sense of beauty, and people who like it. It is a good read.

It's good-looking, whether it's AI-assisted or not, as long as you write a good story. However, I still hope that the author can carefully edit the words and sentences. There are a lot of ambiguities in the sentences, which will affect the perception. The story of this book is very well-paced and charming, and there are no surprises. It is worth spending time to read [like][like][like]. I hope the author writes better and better!

The subject matter is good, the second one I read involves Jesus. Some discussions are quite interesting, but can the author check it himself after the AI ​​is generated? The use of parentheses in spoken words, the abrupt English words used when listing multiple items, and the inconsistency of time and setting all affect the viewing experience too much.

Oh my god, this article is so fucking serious. To be honest, I'm not sure foreigners and believers will like it very much. After reading this book, I felt that I was too evil. When I saw American horror, I wanted to kill and tear off the enemy's head.

The content is good, but the AI ​​still needs to be adjusted. Regardless of whether the plot content is important or not, AI basically uses a lot of adjectives and rhetorical techniques. If the author pays attention to this aspect, the perception will be much better.

It's a very good book. Although it's also refreshing, it's not brainless. The relationship between Ethan and Brother ✌️ and his own enlightenment at the beginning are very interesting.

1. The soul of an adult has not become immature due to time traveling into a child. One star added. 2. A purely Christian worldview, without any other mixture. I believe you when you say that the author is sponsored by the Vatican. I will add one star. 3. If you love polishing and redundant words and sentences, you will lose one star.

Really, the first time I read a poem I was shocked I didn't expect to read such a rare book in the mediocre Tomato I read the smell of publishing and the plot of a very formal movie. The rating is still too low. If the author adds more details, the book will become popular immediately. It's really amazing, everyone. It's not formulaic at all.

A very warm, comfortable and flavorful book. It's not the kind of mindless cool book. It's a rare good book. I hope the author writes more. It's so good that I can't stop reading it. [Laughs] If it doesn't work, the author will give me a supporting role (He Jun, a magical oriental chef or a passing waiter) ╭(╯ε╰)╮

This article is actually very interesting, with a bit of religious style. It may be a little confusing in the early stage. It may be that the author just started writing and failed to grasp the main point. He can jump directly to Ye Ge and it has already started to get on the right track. The writing is very smooth and very good.

I have read about 50 chapters so far and I think it is very interesting. In some of his films, he has been relatively restrained in his handling of some of the forces within Christianity, without the feeling of being too broad-minded. It has a warm and tender feeling, the kind of comfort you feel after watching a horror movie for the rest of your life, but it is not that scary. I think it is still very suitable for people who are intolerant to this kind of horror novels. Of course, it is also the first time to read this kind of novel. It is a very fresh experience. I hope the author can maintain his current level. Keep writing better and better.

Pretty good. The daily warmth and beautiful taste feel better integrated into it. The protagonist has a very high level and basically doesn't have much power, but it's enough. It's a cool story that's not very satisfying. It can be used as food for me. Do you feel that the Holy See written by the author is too kind? There are Japanese people who worship evil spirits and even wait until they kill people before they do it. It stands to reason that if someone is found to be worshiping an evil spirit that may kill people, and it is worshiped by an entire nation, then there should not be a direct crusade. And as those with direct ties to the U. S. Government, it is entirely possible for the CIA and ICE to strike hard in a reasonable and legal manner.