"Shen Nianzu! I fucked the eighteenth generation of your ancestors!"
"Shen Nianzu! This is my house key! That's your kettle!"
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"Comrade! Thank you for your efforts, but now... Please let us rewrite the past!"
"Comrades, shout with me: Drive the invaders out of China! Defend our country to the death!"
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"Ahem, senior, I, I can't go back. Please hand over this pendant... To my daughter."
"Brother Nianzu, I, I want to go home..."
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"Haha~hahahahaha~" Shen Nianzu laughed wildly, with ridicule, sneer, and even a sad smile.
"He, what is he laughing at?" All the immortals were shocked, why hasn't he fallen down yet? Why is he still laughing? Why...
"Chinese extraditer, Shen Nianzu. Armed with garrison aircraft and soldiers, pardon Wu Maple Realm - Yuan Ling!"
Reader comments
I think it's okay. Although I only wrote about 15,000 words in my student days, it was very real and resonated with me a little bit! Red content is really red, but some things still need to be protected from lightning! The description of family love is okay. What I am most dissatisfied with is (what I feel is) the only shortcoming of this book: the writing of Liu Bei (the emperor's uncle) is not detailed enough!
In novels, you need to pay attention to detail. Just like going to school, you also need to pay attention to detail when doing questions!
It's very beautiful. Are you going to prepare to break through the Daoding next?
I think it's okay. Although I only wrote about 15,000 words in my student days, it was very real and resonated with me a little bit! Red content is really red, but some things still need to be protected from lightning! The description of family love is okay. What I am most dissatisfied with is (what I feel is) the only shortcoming of this book: the writing of Liu Bei (the emperor's uncle) is not detailed enough! In novels, you need to pay attention to detail. Just like going to school, you also need to pay attention to detail when doing questions!
It's very beautiful. Are you going to prepare to break through the Daoding next?