After the Max-Level Sickly Beauty Transmigrates into a Cannon Fodder in a Fake Heiress Story

The writing style is okay, but the early plot design in the writing style is a bit heavy. At the end of dozens of chapters, there are statements like "I don't know what will happen in the future!". Internet articles are not comics, and not every chapter needs this kind of editorial language. I feel that the author wants to write about system, emotional pull and suspense. The author feels that not long after writing, the writing power in plot allocation is still a bit insufficient. It's not that he can't write three, but he should pay attention to plot allocation and plot design. Why is it that in Miss Xu's part, the system that can interfere with the plot lasts for dozens of chapters without any prompts or interference? Is it a function problem of the system itself or is it that the system itself cannot be interfered with? The key is that this system has a mall, that is, the system is manually operable in setting rather than triggering at a point. In the dozens of chapters of the plot, the system never appears at all, which is a violation and contradiction. The author's strength in emotional pull is that he pays attention to pull. He should not only write about the pull of the male protagonist, but also the pull of the female protagonist. At present, there are hundreds of chapters only about the male characters pulling and pulling and the female protagonists pulling each other (without the pulling part). I understand that the female protagonist's emotions are relatively weak in the setting, but people will still be wary (for the prince), unworthy (for Wei Zheng), and why it is love (for Qian Ji) even though they are obviously comrades in arms. And what aspects of the heroine will be written about in the future, whether it will be emotional growth or magnetic attraction (all in). Since the author said that at least 1/4 of the story has been written, it would be a bit strange if there is no foreshadowing. Overall, it is worth reading and suitable for killing time. I hope the author can write better articles.

It's a very interesting book, and it feels like it's being told eloquently. The character portrayal is excellent, with distinct personalities that are not thin. The emotions of the characters are connected and transitioned naturally, including psychological and action descriptions (especially the travel scenes, which are very vivid). You can quickly judge what kind of person some characters are based on their clothes and temperament. When it comes to certain areas, it can be seen that the author's writing style is very solid, the transitions are not abrupt, the relevant materials are carefully researched, and the plot is advanced layer by layer, including the conversation with the system, which is also handled appropriately, without the feeling of being superficial. But in fact, during the reading process, I personally felt that the description of the red mole at the corner of the heroine's eye was too complicated and too frequent. However, if the red mole was connected with the protagonist's temperament and character, the description of the mole could be weakened slightly, and the charm of the protagonist's character could be expanded, it would be even more brilliant. A good book is worthy of everyone's appreciation. I hope that Miss can continue writing, as gold will always shine [Sending Hearts]

Much better than many high-scoring articles. It shows that there are not enough people to rate and there are no points, so let me add more firepower. To be honest, it is not a problem to get a score of 9 or above for this essay. I have read too many 💩same so-called "high-scoring essays" in the past two days. Suddenly, I felt like my eyes lit up when I read this unscored one [face covering]. Although the heroine is frail, she is sober, smart, decisive, not pretentious, does not feel sorry for herself, and is not procrastinating. These few points alone can put aside 90% of the delicate dodders. But the early stages were a bit rough, so I jumped to watch it.

It's quite good-looking. The hostess's setting is suitable for Chen Duling. I always watched it as Chen Duling.

The characters in the author's works are all very three-dimensional and distinct, with a strong visual sense, and they also have a very pyrotechnic atmosphere. The plot is also quite novel and unconventional. It is really worth watching [Flowing Kiss][Flowing Kiss]

It's amazing, such a good book, no one recommends it! The teacher writes very well, with good rhythm and good plot. There are no particularly brainless plots or plots. It is a completely high-quality book!

After reading a few chapters, I slowly read on. The author's writing style is pretty good. Now that I see it, I feel that I like Crown Prince Wei. I hope he can be the main palace [crying] [crying]

Like, praise, praise, praise

If you like cool articles, don't read them. The feeling of narrating the story is just one thing. I thought it was a 1v1 at first, but I didn't expect it to be a multi-dove [laughing]. After watching the check-in, I can watch [shy]. The above opinions of the female video article only represent personal opinions, so don't like it!

You should just watch it and watch it without saying a word. The heroine has come through the end of the world. She is well-organized and has a strong heart. She looks like a sickly beauty to the outside world. It seems that there are few chapters. In fact, one chapter is four to five thousand words. The relationships of the male protagonists currently appearing are also gradual. Although the fake daughter is very annoying, but every time she steals the chicken but loses the rice. It is very satisfying. I fell in love with it as soon as I saw it. I saw it last night and quickly tied it this morning [shy]