So Far************

Now that I have read it, I can briefly summarize the main plot of the whole story. It is probably a story about a saint who is ignorant of the world and full of curiosity about everything, and an indifferent young man who has an empty heart, and they go to clean up the mess caused by their controlling brother (the male protagonist) and travel to save the world. ([Laughing evilly]) In terms of plot: The thirty-eight chapters so far feel pretty good. There are no problems with the logic of the writing. The main line of the story is clear and clear. The characters are also well-shaped, and each person's image can be clearly displayed. The whole plot of the story will have a bit of The Riddler, but it will also be revealed bit by bit in the text. There is no Riddler for the sake of the Riddler. In addition, the combat power feels a bit vague and not fully displayed. There is also a slight discrepancy with the introduction, but overall it is pretty much the same. However, the author's daily writing is really good. I hope this aspect can continue. After all, you also said that it is more daily [laughter]. Emotional aspect: To be honest, the emotional line between the male and female protagonists is relatively hazy. After all, there is no clear progress now, but it can be said that it is destined. After all, it is expected by the gods [laughing evilly]. Now it can be said to be a pure love story without ambiguity. The emotional progress between the male and female protagonists will probably gradually increase during the subsequent travels and getting along, and it will be good to have a relationship over time. The minor flaw is that the heroine's favorable impression of the hero is a little inexplicably high at the beginning. There is also a lack of internal or other descriptions of why the heroine is not disgusted with leaving the Holy See (the "kidnapping" incident), which is a bit strange. However, it is somewhat rounded out later, and overall it is okay. All in all, it seems to be a pretty good pure love story with a single female protagonist. It has an atmosphere of getting better and better when reading. I hope the author can maintain this level in the future (I even hope that he can maintain the fifth chapter [smirk] [learned]). Come on!

The daily life is fresh and the plot develops steadily. It is a good Western fantasy novel. You can see from the lines that the author is very careful. I hope that the proper nouns and other exclusive settings will be further supplemented later. The interaction between the male protagonist and the female protagonist is very interesting. I hope the author can continue to maintain this daily style in the future. There are a lot of foreshadowings about the male protagonist, and I hope the author can fill in all of them. I feel healed after reading this refreshing article written by the author. I hope the author can continue to update it. It's a pity that not many people have read such a beautiful book. Come on, author! I hope the ratings will get higher and higher in the future! [Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss]

It's a well-written pure romance novel. The female protagonist has a bit of a favorable impression of the male protagonist at the beginning. She was not even angry when she was abducted (Misty), but the male protagonist and the people in the tavern were very nice to her, which is just tolerable. The structure of the worldview is a bit big. It would be nice if the author could give a separate chapter to talk about many countries and proper nouns.

It is a very delicate Western fantasy pure love story, with a lot of idle writing (such as the small movements of the characters, the clothes, words and deeds of the NPCs), and mostly uses daily foreshadowing, character dialogue, etc. To slowly lay out the world view and depict the characters. For example, the opening chapter describes in detail what Arya sees and hears on the street, thereby showing the life style of the locals and introducing the concept of "adventurers". It also hints at the hero's transcendent status and strength in the conversation with Mo Guichen and the words and deeds of passers-by. The case of the disappearance of the saint brings all parties to the stage, and at the same time shows the attitudes and interests of all parties involved. It is one of the few readers who are not in an omniscient and omnipotent perspective. Unlike other articles that throw out the world view and introduce the characters of all parties; the author's good narrative skills also prevent readers from feeling boring and confusing when they start reading. In addition, many people think that the author's "microscopic and irrelevant descriptions" affect the reading experience. On the contrary, I think that this kind of idle writing that has nothing to do with the main events is the highlight of the article. The description of daily trivial matters does not need to be like a task column with only useful events. Only writing "useful" descriptions will lose the natural leisure of daily trivial matters. Write wherever you want to go, as long as the whole is coherent and smooth, there is nothing wrong with more idle writing. The reading experience is pretty good so far, but based on my experience, the author's delicate writing style is destined not to be read by many people. Authors of similar slow-paced daily articles either discontinue or change platforms, or switch to a concise and compact writing style. This kind of book is really hard to read on Tomato. Good luck to the author. I hope the story will have a good ending.

Overall, the book is quite good so far, with a relatively complete context and three-dimensional characters. However, the author has a big problem, that is, he spends a lot of time describing people's clothes and some small movements. In some cases, these things even occupy nearly 1/4 of the content. This part of the content makes readers seem to be mysterious and incomprehensible. The feeling of the mind, because of this kind of detail, you just need to add a little touch to give the reader an impression. The subsequent development of the story will naturally enrich the description of this part. Deliberately spending time to describe it, but it falls behind and makes the overall reading effect very poor. If this aspect is improved, this book will be better. Overall, it is good. I give it a four-star encouragement.

The Saint is quite cute. Although there is no clear relationship progress, it is okay so far. I am looking forward to the growth of the heroine. The heroine is only 17 years old, so don't have such high demands on her.

I must give the author great praise. Meow [love] [love]. Although I was a little confused when I first read it, the plot is still good. Meow [love] [love]

It's great. I love watching it. I'll watch it next time.

It looks good, the plot is pretty good

Very well written [send heart] [send heart] [send heart] [send heart] Come on author [send heart] [send heart] [send heart] [send heart]

It's more everyday, and the character design is very delicate.

Looks okay, give me some encouragement

I want to eat more candy and teeth

My second five-star book [Learned]

The ancient Greek god in charge of characterization! What is a top-notch western fantasy pure love story? [Like][Like][Like]