HP: Twin Platinum

I hope you guys can give more paragraph reviews, otherwise it will be too cold, and don't get too hung up on logic. The progress of this book will be slightly faster. Draco has shortcomings in the early stage, which will be slowly corrected later. The plot of this book is more of a novel (in fact, it is basically a novel, but occasionally when I run out of ideas, I will use movie snacks to make up for it, and then go to the novel) [Send my heart][Send my heart][Send my heart] If the plot you are watching is not to your taste, you can exit in the upper left corner. Don't scold Zaizai. Zaizai is always the best in the author's heart. There will be partiality, but Zai Zai will not be partial. Zai Zai is good to everyone. Draco is a good brother, Malfoy is a good family member, and Hufflepuff is also a good partner. But if the brother does not protect the younger brother, the younger brother will become someone else's younger brother. Those who covet Zaizai want to be Zaizai's brother and sister. There is no love plot, but they can be messy. If it can be written to the finale, there is a 10% chance that there will be a side story, but the author is a bit lazy. I usually don't write side stories without good inspiration. The author also hopes that this can be completed as much as possible. Thank you also to readers for your support. ଘ(੭*ˊᵕˋ)੭* ੈ♡‧₊˚ Damn it, 🍅when did you change the label for me? CEO, how can there be a president? I'm convinced. I asked why the traffic dropped to such a low level, and I applied for non-CP. Why did you change the label for me privately? I don't write CP, and I don't write romance. I'm convinced😅 (The application for modification has been completed, but the data has not been increased)

I am essentially a person who likes to read CP novels. Although I know that love is not everything to a person, it is indeed a way for a person to quickly obtain dopamine, so I prefer reading CP novels. Therefore, I rarely set foot in the field of family love literature, because I feel that family love is very sacred and should be tainted by the love I pursue. It's not that love is not sacred, it's just that the love we see in reality is not that good, and family affection is always so noble, so deep in my heart, love is far inferior to family affection. Moreover, most of the love in the novel world is "delicate and artificial". I set out to read this book with a gambling heart. I was betting that this book would not let me hit the CP randomly, but I was right. It is very warm and sweet to say this. It is the love of parents for their children, the love of older brothers for younger brothers, the love of children for their families, and the love of children for the world. This book should not be obsessed with love, it should be the epitome of all kinds of love for all kinds of people. The writing is very good, I hope to keep it up, and I also hope that after this difficult half year, after realizing my ideal, this book will be liked by more people (of course, if it is really sweet with other people, I will still do it 😁) This is my first time to write a long review. Please forgive me if the wording is inappropriate. I have only read a few chapters, but isn't this the embodiment of the charm of this book? Finally, let me end with the ending of my favorite Chinese composition, "I want to find a way through flowers, go straight into the depths of white clouds, and show my majesty in rainbow colors." Youth is like us, when our ambitions are irreversible, we will reach for the stars with our ideals ☺

The whole style of writing is a very healing group favorite. The author's writing style is very delicious. It feels like warm and soft bread freshly baked from the oven () The interaction between the brother and the brother is very loving. The younger brother is like a velvet, so cute🥰

I really think this book is very good-looking and a classic group favorite. Why is the rating so low? There are several negative reviews in the comment area. To be honest, it's really hard to find good articles on Tomato. The writing of this article is very good. The only drawback is that the plot progress is a bit slow after more than 100 chapters, but after 200 chapters, the rhythm is just right. I like reading it very much. Please keep up the good work, author! !

The plot development is quite good, especially the brotherhood. I love watching it. But I personally feel that some of the descriptions are repetitive and will make me feel mechanical and tired after reading for a long time, such as "the tie is tied meticulously", "what about xx, how about xx, even..." And some details. The tone of the whole story is peaceful, without too sharp conflicts. The difference from some HP fans is that the elders did not hide the Horcruxes, and the title of Voldemort. I don't know that the "Voldemort" in the author's context is the Chinese version of "you know" Who" or directly call him Voldemort? People who directly call "Voldemort" can be found by spells, so no one dares to directly call him by his name. See the latest chapter and just call him Voldemort. Isn't Voldemort worried about coming back later and being found [Thinking]

Those who like to read group favorite articles are in luck, my dear friends. It's really warm and healing. My dead heart seemed to be beating again. The warmth made me forgive the world for a second. Great work, author, I support you! [Send heart][Send heart]

Harry Potter: "Don't worry, Princess Darien. I promise you as a knight that I will defeat the hateful Dragon of Drak and save you from fire and water." Malfoy-Drake: "Damn stinky Knight Potter, you dare to block my rare meeting with my brother. This dragon is going to burn you!"

Overall, this is a very warm and good book, but there are always some problems with details that make it difficult to read (only my personal opinion) 1. Do some people really like to eat a kind of food, and eat it every meal since childhood? When it comes to describing meals, it is roasted pumpkin. At home, it is mother's roasted pumpkin for every meal, and at school, it is roasted pumpkin. It seems that the protagonist has never eaten other meals (I have not had this experience, so I don't know much about it. It's just from the visual perspective, and I feel a little tired) (Maybe I really like it, but after seeing it too much, I always have a sense of sight) 2. Sometimes in the language of the characters and various descriptions, there is always a sense that they are not going to school in Hogwarts, but in a three-dimensional school. There will also be an illusion that the protagonist is not in the wizarding world, but in the ordinary three-dimensional world (of course, after all, everyone lives in the ordinary world and goes to ordinary schools, so it is inevitable to have these in the writing) 3. The description of some things is a bit too homogeneous. It feels like it has been described in the first chapter, but the same description will appear again in a few chapters, and it will come again in a few chapters (this point is similar to the first point, and it will cause some fatigue in terms of perception) But it actually doesn't stop this from being an article worth reading. I haven't read the rest of it yet, so I'll add more when there are other questions [laughs]

I think Darien's setting is very good, and I look forward to his future plot direction and greater display. I also like the family relationship between the Malfoy family and the professor's family, the rivalry between Hades, the interaction is very smooth and full of reconciliation step by step, I like it. Advise the author to update quickly [cry][cry][cry]

The writing is smooth, and the protagonist's creation is more in line with my XP. The protagonist is very cute, and the Malfoy family's protection of children also makes me like HP fanfics. I have read a lot of healing series that focus on family and gentleness. Most of them are more ambitious protagonists. Occasionally, I look at this kind of healing series. It is not bad, but the author's writing is a little immature, but it is already very good. I hope the author will continue to work [love] [love] [love]

It's very warm. The whole article is full of plain happiness🥰🥰I really like this feeling. The author's writing style is really good. Although it is plain, it is very attractive. I personally like more stimulating articles, but I didn't feel bored after reading this. I give the author a thumbs up, but the popularity is a bit low. It shouldn't be. I hope the author will not be affected and continue to work hard. I will keep chasing it!!!

Everyone took out their smartphones to comment!

It's very beautiful, I'm not flattering you, but why is the rating so low?

A very healing novel, a family line.

Good-looking (♥∀♥) Darien is a good baby ♡˖꒰ᵕ༚ᵕ⑅꒱ Harry has too many scenes. In these dozens of chapters, Darien only has a few lines. The petrification of Darien can be written about Darien being somewhat conscious. His parents and brothers care about him. Darien is very touched. His parents and brothers are desperately investigating for him. The story about Harry can be completely omitted. It's really uncomfortable. It's been more than ten chapters and Darien only said a few words. With so many scenes of Harry, I might as well read the original work. When you read fan fiction, don't you just like the author's fan character design? I hope the author can change it a bit. I also know that the author mostly writes for love (not many people read it [grievance]). The author also loves Darian very much, otherwise he would run away, but I still hope the author can change his writing style a lot [sending my heart][sending my heart][sending my heart] Thank you for your hard work, the author [Sending my heart][Sending my heart][Sending my heart]

Malfoy is affectionate, and everyone's interactions are very loving. There is still no CP in the places I see now, and I hope it will be the same later.

The corpse is warm... Is it heaven...?

I like the protagonist baby very much, who doesn't love him?

Me my my favorite

I personally think it's really good

The main character is so cute! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

The interaction between Darien and Draco is really heartwarming!

So far I feel pretty good, but since it's Hufflepuff, how do I see Cedric? Is it a chapter where I haven't seen him appear?

No cp group favor article. The perspective of the story does not entirely revolve around the protagonist, but mainly reflects the group's favor from other people in various aspects.

It's rare to see the two Malfoy brothers without their HP together, but! Darien, you are really a fragrant and soft little cake, so cute.

Good-looking - I don't know what to say, but it's good-looking - I am also a member of the Badger Academy and I am proud of Darien ´ₒ⦁⩊⦁ₒ`

Author, can you please update more? It's so beautiful [sending heart][laughing][blowing kiss]

Yes, it would be better if she was a girl. She didn't say she was in love. It's just that she is a girl, but she looks good!

I stayed up all night watching it, the main character is like a little angel, it makes me feel warm after watching it

I really like the detailed description of this book. I hope the author will continue to work hard and give us the best ending for little Darian.