No Stealing! This Is the First Witch's Back Garden

It's quite satisfactory. The world view is very interesting, but there is too much pressure. The heroine is always busy, but she doesn't feel that it is of any use. She just finds things for the heroine to do. I suggest you balance it. I see that now it is just as relaxed as the auction, and less pressure will be fine.

It's very interesting to read. It's different from the same old magic. It's quite in line with my own reading taste. First of all, the heroine is not the first one, which is too exaggerated and brainless, and the golden finger is too big. Secondly, the heroine is also difficult at the beginning. She doesn't easily feel that she is the boss, the earth is the second, and she is the third. The heroine has a clear self-understanding of herself, and she progresses steadily step by step, and she can see the heroine. The Lord's psychological growth and changes, he does not easily trust others, and the help he gives people has prerequisites, which is great, and the lack of CP is also great. The living environment has become difficult, and people's moral bottom line has become lower. The relationship with other people is a matter of life and death. It is difficult to live alone. How can I have any thoughts about falling in love? The only shortcoming is that there are too few books. After reading it all night, I felt exhausted [face covering]

Advantages: A growing female protagonist who can be seen to be constantly learning and improving. There are more supporting female characters than male supporting characters, and there is no female competition. In the later stage, she will learn to use means to suppress disobedient magic props and creatures. Disadvantages: In the early stage, he was a silly kid from a landlord's family. He had no plan and the magic props he created were somewhat disobedient. In the later stage, I was too frustrated. I was bound by a powerful devil contract and was forced to become the only witch. I had to prevent everyone from hunting me, and at the same time I had to clean up the mess of the previous witches. At the same time, I lost the ability to "knowledge" and was unable to join other camps (ordinary players can join three) After reading similar articles, the author seems to like silly and sweet heroines, but in order to increase the traffic of the heroine, he forced a silly and sweet heroine in the early stage to become a cold and strong "witch" in the later stage. If you like weak women, stick to literature about weak women. There is no need to forcibly create a lot of hardships for the protagonist to highlight her strength for a strong woman. There are a lot of enemies in the later stage, including two. The heroine has been unable to defeat them and was forced to sign a contract.

Witch + time travel management is an old routine, but the relationship game with the indigenous people is quite interesting. I feel that the author has carefully compiled a lot of strange materials and the names are very interesting. The various conscious magical creatures in the territory are also very interesting. On the other hand, the description of the heroine's interpersonal relationships is also good. Many authors will not write a bunch of preachy words, and the heroine will easily appear stupid. The author does not write much in this aspect, but creates a bottom-line silent and powerful feeling for the heroine. The psychological description is also quite cute. It makes me feel that the heroine is particularly charming. I have fallen in love with it. It completely hit me.

It's good to watch. The protagonist's character is stable and decisive, and the plot is logically consistent and has no bugs. The protagonist's ranking behind is reasonable, and getting the first place is based on his own efforts and not all thanks to the golden finger (unless you say that the protagonist has a rare magic talent and it all depends on the golden finger, I don't think it is). As long as it doesn't collapse later, it will definitely be a masterpiece in the survival genre. [Learned][Learned][Learned]

It's not a golden finger that has fun all the way, but the heroine is indeed the most special one. This uniqueness also explains that the road to growth will be more difficult than that of ordinary players. Moreover, the heroine's high-pressure attitude against the whole world makes people very curious about her subsequent growth. The world view and setting are unexpectedly realistic and novel. I have seen so many reincarnation games, and I feel that this one is really unique. In particular, the setting of the aboriginal people is not a walk-on NPC, but a strong sense of real and flesh-and-blood hostility. It makes me feel that such a real Western fantasy world really exists. Very to my liking However, the heroine's unique sense of deserving her strength was not written. She is unique, but not very strong. Instead, the difficulties first outweighed the heroine's growth. The viewer is very powerless and feels like he is going to be turned into villain cannon fodder. It seems to me that the author did not want to give the heroine a golden finger. If you really want to write something unique without adding cheats, I think it will test the author's writing skills. I hope the author can work hard. This world view is really interesting.

It's a very good world view, a very magnificent world, but it's a pity that it doesn't belong to the heroine. The heroine doesn't have even a moment to take a breather to take a break from her busy work. She has been surrounded by enemies on all sides, and has been chased by life crises. She doesn't have any friends she can trust, and she can't see where the future is. I'm too tired, so I'll stop here and wish the heroine the best in the future.

It's pretty good. Some people may find it not satisfying, but I think it's written more realistically in the early stages, and the hang-ups aren't too big. The protagonist will be better than the mid- to low-level players, but not as high as the mid-to-upper-tier players, which is much better than the one who was ranked first at the beginning. But the heroine is always giving supplies and stuff. . I feel like it's not very pleasant here. I wish I could be more cruel. . The heroine is always not soft-hearted when she should be soft-hearted, and she doesn't take it seriously when she should be cruel. ———————— In the early stage, the author didn't know why he designed a cannon fodder. After being greedy, he started to scold the heroine. She has been blocked. I think there is no need to write the scolding part. The look and feel is really bad. . ———————— And the heroine is also very weird. . If the meat is not eaten up, sold or grilled, it just keeps piling up. When it is all rotten, it starts to say that it has a food crisis. It made me pee. . What are you doing? . 0 People understand.

Good-looking, rich in content, and compact in plot The more I watch, the more uncomfortable I feel. The world view is quite exciting, but the protagonist has no ideas or plans of his own. Not to mention the slow progress, there are a lot of hostile forces. He is timid in everything he does. Enchanted weapons are not for sale, and tasks are not done proactively. He will be confused when studying. His combat power is always weak. I am exhausted. The author should also plan a little bit. Don't pour out all the information you want to write at once. It's too messy. The timeline can be stretched a little longer. Don't have so many accidents happen every day. You can allocate some time for the protagonist to organize her own territory and digest the acquired knowledge, skills, and information. Don't arrange so many tasks at the same time, otherwise you will forget everything you write.

I like the subject matter very much. The heroine is not a virgin, she has a decisive character and the character is very good. I haven't seen many magical survival genres like this, and there are very few that I like so much. At present, the heroine is a lone wolf and only trades with some players. You can call me an i person. I like the heroine to be alone, and there should be different elves or magical creatures later. The layout of the heroine's territory is exactly what I want. The background setting of the whole world is also very good and complete. There is a feeling that all the magic is real, hahaha. Anyway, I like it. [Shy][shy] Some people in the comments said that the author wrote only a few supporting characters, some of which are not likable. However, in this kind of living world related to life, there must be evil and good, sincerity and interests. However, the author has a good balance. He does not say that the bad guy must be a man or a woman, that he must be greedy from the beginning, nor that good people are completely sincere, and people are multi-faceted. The heroine keeps growing and is very resilient.

I have finished reading the novice phase. The author is really attentive. The character is a growth-oriented heroine. She is ruthless and doesn't talk much. She is not good at dealing with others. I wrote 130 chapters in the 15-day novice period. If you like fast pace, you can avoid it. However, if you like infrastructure and stocking up, you must read it. The author is really detailed and the world view is very large. After the novice period, you should start to engage in the planting and breeding model. It is quite suitable for me. Secondly, the bad points in the comment area may have been corrected. Personally, I think they are a bit verbose (I can understand the article about stocking up). The other bad points are really not worthy of being called. For the two villains that have appeared so far, Karami, especially the Alchemist, I think the writing is quite good. There is no repayment of gratitude. Harmony, friendship and sweet alliance. Ordinary people are out of danger. I will pay 50% every time. Most people will be reluctant to part with it. Or, after a long time, there will definitely be resentment and hatred. The heroine only got a toothbrush in the 80s, and it took her 9 days to change her first pair of underwear (it was really not easy). Finally, there is a survival story instead of a tour group. I have watched various male and female survival videos before. The male videos are all about cigarettes and alcohol. The first thing female videos do is take a shower. Civilization is second in front of being alive. Secondly, articles of the same type always set up some idiotic characters in the world server, including the Madonna character. I'm not saying it's not possible, but this crappy plot is really old-fashioned. Is there any photo exchange for material? [Vomit] I've seen too many protagonists. First, the others are all NPCs. At least there is no such crappy plot in this article that jumps out and slaps you in the face. One suggestion is that when the author has time, he can make some AI pictures of the magical creature buildings in the territory to make it more intuitive and immersive. Especially the infrastructure. The territory currently has infrastructure, but the directions are not clearly written. I can't construct a floor plan in my brain. I almost don't understand the living area, breeding area, fishing, including traps, and the placement of buildings. I really can't figure it out every time I write a battle. At present, I will give it 8.5-9 Points

This is a novel that completely combines one of my best recent novels: witch + survival + infrastructure + western fantasy world. It has already tied. It can be seen that the author has perfected this world view. It makes me very curious about the follow-up development. Although it is not a great novel, it can be regarded as a growth-oriented survival novel. The heroine gains wisdom through every experience and slowly becomes a heroine. The author is very attentive to this western fantasy world. Some props and some scenes can remind me of some RPG games or infrastructure life games. It is really very interesting. Author, I'm waiting for your update

I think it's pretty good. I saw it a few days ago and the rating is up to 8.3 Today. One star is deducted because the heroine's sense of fate is too strong. It's as if the whole world is waiting for her to arrive. She is the absolute protagonist of the era. This lacks freshness and uncertainty about the future. I read a lot of survival stories. I think one of the highlights is the uncertain growth of the protagonist. That is, we don't know what direction the protagonist will eventually grow into, or at most we know what the protagonist may grow into in the next two stages. What kind of increasingly powerful enemies will we encounter? It feels like this book directly tells us the final ending of the heroine. Even if the magical buildings and creatures in the middle are interesting, it still feels like you are reading the process with the answer.

I feel that the writing style is relatively immature, but the imagination makes up for it very well. I think the plot and world view are completely worthy of 9.5 Points. [Congratulations] Ignoring the bugs and repeated descriptions, it is a very good book. The problem is that it is not readable enough. Some of the criticisms in the early stage were all corrected in the later stage. I am glad that the sisters are very sensitive. Fortunately, the author will also make corrections. Sometimes the inner descriptions of those men are so interesting that I almost get mad. The teacher still understands Bro too well and supports the big witch to blast the little Bro hard. As time goes by, I can feel the author's writing skills are improving. I hope he can write a hundred chapters a day. The only thing that makes me a little uncomfortable is the part about making profits from sanitary napkins. In fact, you can find some other substitutes to make money. I feel that in reality, it is already very difficult for everyone. The sanitary napkins that are easy to use are really expensive now, and girls are also very sensitive to these, and they have been making calls. Teacher, if you have time, can you correct some of the previous bugs and catch some more bugs? I feel that the early stage is a good time to catch readers. Some bugs may drive away many readers [Sending my heart]

This is my favorite type. The reason why I give it four stars is that the heroine was very busy in the later period, but the materials were very expensive, and she felt lonely because of her busy schedule.

It's nice to see. Although I didn't look at many of the collection materials and architectural descriptions, it's overall pretty good. The plot twists in some places are a bit blunt. There are often plots where the heroine's negligence causes the resources in the territory to be damaged. It is really heartbreaking. But the author will write that after this crisis, the heroine finally defeated the temporary BOSS and got the treasure chest. The resources obtained by opening the treasure chest can make up for this loss. However, this kind of plot often appears, which is a bit cliché. I hope the heroine can grow more and more comprehensively. The good thing is that the plot is now unfolding, and it has a sense of the main plot. The heroine's magical talent, and the witch, the witch is expelled from this plane, the ban on magic, etc., Feels like the heroine and the witch will join forces in the end? The name of the witch was rectified, and then everyone in this plane began to learn magic or something? But now the author has just reached the beginning, and there is still a long way to go, and he is particularly afraid of pitfalls. . .

It looks good. It is currently in the early stage of development. I just hope that the heroine will have a higher sense of deservingness when trading. You can also confirm your inner price and market value before making a transaction. I hope that the heroine will develop better in the future. The heroine will take the magic route in the future and feel that she is an all-rounder. She can handle both life and battle. I look forward to the effect after the talent upgrade.

It's tied with the speed of light on the list. I think it's relatively good-looking. The plot and writing are not too bad. The heroine is measured and kind, and the description is great. The only shortcoming is that there are too many typos. I will keep following the article, author, come on!

A very good book. The shortcoming for me is that the heroine is too gentle. Every time someone wants to take action, the heroine will fight back. There is no reason to guard against thieves for a thousand days. You can take action when others show malicious intent. The solution is too slow. And there is no taboo when to kill him.

The world view is very grand, the little animals and elves are well described, and the heroine is relatively normal. The whole world view is very real. The author is very talented in writing. But I think the problem is that the heroine often starts to encounter dangers after experiencing dangerous things before she feels comfortable for a while. Before the reader is satisfied, the heroine is wronged and encounters danger again, which makes her feel very tired😫. Moreover, the heroine has been busy collecting supplies in the early stage, but she feels that when something happens, she suddenly lacks this and that. Anyway, it's not a fun read, but overall it's pretty good. I just felt very tired after reading it.

It's tied, overall it's good, but after reading it, you will have a sense of urgency that the heroine is under a lot of pressure throughout the whole process, and she doesn't know what she is busy with. But when I think about it, it is very detailed. It may not have been a month of survival. It is normal to be busy in the early stage of survival. The writing is okay, and the descriptions of many props are very detailed and special. The author really puts a lot of pressure on the heroine. It's more than 600,000 words. The heroine still doesn't have the power to kill enemies or has a very strong trump card, so she is suppressed in various ways. It's very unpleasant. If you want to read a refreshing article, you can withdraw it.

I like it quite a lot. Although I have seen some comments saying that the protagonist is busy, chaotic and not exciting enough, I want to say that there are enough boring and mindless novels. Most of them I read a little bit and then gave up. It is very true that if you are talented and work hard enough, you will inevitably face difficulties and malice from other aspects. The same goes for territory construction. At the beginning, it was normal for ordinary people who mistakenly entered the magical world to be confused. And it can be seen that the author has built a complete world with huge size and complicated rules. I hope the author will not be influenced by different voices and write at his own pace. There is no such thing as anything that can be liked by everyone.

It looks good, but it's too short. I like the settings and everything. However, I feel like there was a legendary defense tower when I was a novice, and it was only 15 in the rankings. How outrageous others were, and I was a little worried that the combat power system would collapse.

The setting is still very interesting. I especially like to read this kind of Western fantasy magic setting, and the author can still read it without thinking, so I give it four points. But if you look at it carefully and think about it carefully, it will probably drive you crazy. [Laughing and crying] One is that there are many repetitive descriptions. I have read Chapter 117, and I am still saying that I must remember to upgrade the cabin, cabin, cabin, but it still hasn't been upgraded. The character setting of the heroine is also very average. She is always forgetful and procrastinates. (Of course, it is normal for many things to be difficult to remember at the moment. But you can make it on A4 paper. You can trade a pen, make a plan every day, write down the materials you have obtained, review before going to bed, how much time will it take to do one thing and one thing [face covering], but no, and then there are many things that you just keep forgetting and procrastinating...). I hope the author will write better and better as he writes. If he can have a more logical plan, I believe it will be a great book! It's even, the later settings are more interesting, so I give full marks for the settings, and I hope the author will keep writing. Also, please make the heroine smarter, neater, more planned, and faster-paced. Please stop being forgetful and stupid at times. [Cry]

It's a very good game article, but the writing is flawed and there are a lot of typos and omissions that I won't go into. The descriptions of the game's items are often unclear. It's not about the background story of the Riddler, but the descriptive text is not clear enough and can lead to ambiguity. The most uncomfortable thing is that there is often a kind of English word order and perverse word order similar to machine translation in the article, which is not in line with Chinese reading habits and is a bit nondescript. Everything else is pretty good so far, waiting for updates

Our novel has its own nurturing heroine. From the beginning, the heroine was stupid and grateful when others defrauded her of supplies. In the later stage, she gradually became wise and became skilled in bargaining at low prices. To clear things up, the heroine is really kind in the early stage, a little bit ignorant of the world. But it looks great when it grows up. Advantages: The world view is quite large. In the magical world where witch hunts are carried out, there are indigenous people (who seem to be hostile). The heroine is a lone wolf, but she has many cute magical creature companions joining her territory. The workbench that doesn't like working and the dew collector that secretly hides dew but loves having fun are really super cute!

This is probably the difference between readers and authors. In the eyes of readers, they hope to see a protagonist who is smart, smart, brave, strong, and will strive for... The one they think is the most perfect version of themselves (adventurer, survivor, protagonist). But in the eyes of the author, you will feel that the protagonist is the protagonist. She can be not so smart, smart, brave, powerful... An ordinary person (it will reflect that the protagonist is very realistic, as if she is really just a real little girl). But on the one hand, the author can't help but give the protagonist a golden finger (lucky) that is higher than reality, and will bring her various props in advance that can save her life in various crises. Therefore, this will lead to the fact that the heroine often fails to prevent risks in advance, hoard information to benefit from events, and make arrangements in advance for events where the follow-up news is known. This will make the readers uncomfortable and feel a little disgusted. You obviously know this news in advance, but it feels like you don't know. In the end, I spent most of my time relying on the rewards arranged by the author in advance, or I didn't want to get a share of the benefits. [Cover face] ps: This book is really good and beautiful, and it is very imaginative. It is normal to have one or two flaws. Even the most popular novels or literary works on the market cannot guarantee that there are no flaws at all. This is why although I think this book has some poisonous points, its flaws do not cover up its flaws, so I give it five stars. I am still full of hope, maybe because this book is still too shallow, and the heroine is still growing bit by bit, and her story will eventually become her perfect or imperfect version of herself.

In fact, I really like this book. It's very interesting to create, well, a national survival type, but the background and world view are really novel and interesting. How to say it? Many people complain that the heroine is busy in vain, so what? But in fact, I personally like this type better, that is, it is not a fun game to cheat invincibility from the beginning (I don't like to be very strong right from the beginning, and the type that is particularly invincible is a personal preference). I feel that there is always a reason to become stronger. If you start to pull others away for no reason, it will make me feel a little fragmented (still a personal preference), but the protagonist is also relatively powerful and works hard to become stronger. In addition, I actually quite like the protagonist who works harder and has a better mentality. Anyway, I recommend it~ It is not recommended that authors read comments, read books, review and revise articles, and revise articles. I personally like this rhythm at the moment, it feels good The people you don't like are gone, but the people you like are still there. Your story attracts the people you like, so please continue~

It's a good read, a good read, the author's writing is very good, and the plot is very smooth. It's not a simple upgrade survival story as I thought at first. It has a complete world background and framework, which is very comfortable to watch. The rating should not be so low. I look forward to the subsequent development of the plot! I really like the new map! Now the heroine's thinking and the process of integrating into the world, and the details of the background of this story are slowly shown to us. Come on, come on.

I think it's very interesting. As for what some people say: I don't feel aggrieved. I think the author is very spiritual. If it is the first time to write a novel, then I can only say that it is pure talent. I think this book is not a pure novel. You can clearly feel the growth of the protagonist. , And this book is very dynamic. It is not as obsessed with describing the intrigues between people as other novels. Although this book has a little but not much, it also focuses on describing various small creatures and various equipment blessed by the protagonist. It warms people's hearts when they see it. I hope the author can keep this style, because I really like it. I have been looking forward to reading a novel that is not so fond of writing about intrigues between people. This one is really well written, and the world view of this book is still quite interesting in my opinion. I look forward to the author's update [laughs]