After I Was Diagnosed with Infertility, My Cool Best Friend Gave Birth to a Baby for Me

When I first started watching, I thought that the female protagonist would cause a lot of trouble or hinder the relationship between the male and female protagonists [smile]. After watching a section, I didn't expect that the female protagonist was also impressed by the charm of the male protagonist. By the time I finished watching, it should be in the early or middle period [whatever][ Thinking] (Chapter 50), I can guess a few characters in the harem, and I look forward to the subsequent storyline ~ [Making faces] And when will the "careless" male protagonist discover the thoughts of his harem [Shy], will there be a Shura field ~~ [Sneaky smile] [Blowing kisses]

It's hard to imagine how Shen ended up with a harem. There's no reason why a girl whose normal logic has been clearly rejected 23 times would continue to develop. Shen in the last few photos is a bit too perfect. I guess he will break through from Tang (white cut black) Suggestion 1: Don't overdo it with the plot. The overall impression is plot > writing style (importance). Pay attention to ethical issues, such as: Shen Hao is tempted to die, and does it behind Tang's back. 2: Shen is a little slow about emotions in the first half of the film, and then suddenly draws a clear line in the follow-up. There is no turning point or foreshadowing, and it feels a bit abrupt. 3: You can add more small foreshadowing to truly reflect the character's personality Overall, this is a very good novel. It would be nice to change the introduction and title of the book. I would like to hear back from the author (the above is just my humble opinion).

Okay, although it's a bit bland, but no 💩, the emotional line is also handled very well so far, there is no such brainless place, it is rare that the heroine can be written in such detail, and the characters are very realistic.

I've read 70 chapters. Although I haven't read a lot, I feel pretty good. I mean, can the author consider Jiang Yanyan? I haven't seen any black spots on her so far. If there are no black spots in the future, I hope it can be accepted. The only one I've seen so far is because of the dark spots. A girl who is in love and gives silently, I think it is good to have a scheming girl who can help Shen Shi manage the company. In short, I hope the author can consider it [Top post][Top post][Top post][Top post][Top post][Top post][Top post][Top post] Um, I saw the back part, how can I say, it's a bit hard to comment, it suddenly became a strict henpeck, and whether to accept it or not is up to Tang Wan alone. Anyway, the status of the male protagonist suddenly dropped, and the two people became unequal. Although the male protagonist felt sorry for Tang Wan at first, it is hard to accept this sudden incident. I think the author of the subsequent plot can slowly ease the conflict between them and slowly bring the relationship back to a normal and equal state (this does not mean that the male protagonist should give up Su Mo).

Author, please tell me for sure, is this a harem wing-knotting novel or a harem novel?

The first one or two hundred chapters are really good, and it is ultimately a good pure love story. The harem in the later part is not handled very well, but under the circumstances of various mainstream Tomato feeds, it insists on not insulting the audience's IQ, and does not use those disgusting defense routines, and retains the audience. This persistence is enough for me to give five stars. I don't give the quality of the work, that is, the pure love theme will always come first (the harem is also love!)

No one? Actually it's okay, but a little bit poisonous The AI is really running, why is it getting more and more chaotic?

It's very interesting, please update soon, but the male protagonist is a bit too straight [laughing]

Real feelings. The author's writing is very sweet. It's a very nice book. I especially like the small details of the interaction between the male and female protagonists. So far, the writing is very good.

So far, there's no big problem failed works

This book is obviously a harem story. If your guess is correct, there may be four female protagonists in the end, who are in the dormitory. It doesn't look like it. There may be three heroines. The three in the dormitory, Jiang Yanyan just doesn't know if she will accept them in the end⊙⊙

When will Su Mo collect?

It looks good, but can Su Mo really succeed as the male protagonist sticks to the bottom line? If it is successful, Jiang Yan has spent a lot of pen and ink, so it will be successful no matter what!

Come on, don't stop, I like sweet love [shy]

It's quite good-looking. It's not a mindless and silly industrial saccharine, nor is it a boring and ordinary daily article. Very nice to look at. The male and female protagonists are living people with distinct personalities. Haha, it's early to comment, but it's still a boring daily article…

No, buddy, you wrote pure love and tricked me into killing me [angry]

Very exciting!

Not bad, very pretty

It's a bit messy, but still readable and more realistic. (I just want to see how he will come around later)

I suspect the author has had a crush on many people

It's okay, let me ask how many female protagonists there are Okay, I take back this sentence. Let me ask you, how can it be reasonable to add a third person, and Su, to the early relationship between Shen and Tang? One person has changed so much? Next, let's talk about how harem stories are set in the city (I'm not talking about urban harem stories, it just feels weird. I personally think harem stories are nothing, but urban harems, well...) And how can a person accept a third person when he loves others wholeheartedly. After Shen and Su slept together, I felt that Shen was quite hypocritical. To compensate Tang, he didn't want to admit it, and it was a different situation towards Su (if Shen's attitude changed later, just think I didn't say it). There was also Shen, who wanted to write a harem story but didn't write it thoroughly (look at the introduction, there is no Shen) [smile]

It feels pretty good, the writing is very delicate, and it doesn't give me any uncomfortable feeling so far.

The new track is okay

Not bad, I hope I can write it down.

It looks okay so far

Not bad, keep watching.

Beautiful, the plot is super interesting

Found gold again

It's actually a good book Well, a bad book

Awesome! It's quite pretty! ! !