Xianyu Wenci passed away unexpectedly, and he likes to introduce the quick mission system. His daily focus is to make trouble and fish, and he resolutely perverts the mistress's high-level work. Unexpectedly, when traveling through the planes, I would repeatedly bump into a love-minded male protagonist, and my life would be turned upside down in an instant! From then on, he got involved in all kinds of missions, desperately exploring different novel worlds. Others did missions as a counterattack, and he traveled back and forth just to find his lover lost in the years.
World one
Lu Jin: My wife is the most beautiful, stay away from my wife
Wen Ci: If I cheated on you during marriage, will the tens of millions of yuan in compensation be returned to me?
Fu Boqi: Get out of the way, love brains, don't stop me from making money!
World 2
Zhan Yejin: It doesn't matter if he's a substitute. From now on, I will only be by his side day and night.
Wen Ci: Where did the substitute joke come from? This is my lover!
Star Territory: What does their relationship have to do with me? I'm just a soy sauce person...
Reader comments
It's not that amazing. The first world is indeed quite novel. But if you want to make the heroine of the original plot a strong woman, you don't have to let her say so many disgusting things to the protagonist... But then you have to make her a strong woman? Sorry, it's not that happy [crying] There's no need to think about the second thing, I don't pay enough attention to the three views [crying]
It is not recommended that these can be viewed in general [exploration]
Very well written! ! ! ! Real! ! ! The first world is always the most unforgettable, especially at the end, I cried to death, Lu Jin really doted on Wen Ci! He always wanted Wen Ci to draw a portrait of him, but Wen Ci couldn't draw at all, and kept finding reasons to refuse: "I miss you, I can see you when I turn around, and there is no need to paint to miss you." But when Lu left in the end, Wen missed him and started painting one after another of him [crying] In the end, I really hoped that Lu would be resurrected, and then be with Wen all the time! ! !
The first world is so well written that I even feel that that world is the core of this article. It could be written as a separate book. It is obviously very sweet, but it still makes me sad to see them grow old.
It's very interesting, but in fact, in the first world, I really wanted to see a detailed description of Fu Boqi's regrets. Later, I thought it didn't matter. After all, as long as the protagonist is happy, there is no need to see her regret.
In the first world, I actually wanted Fu to know about the love of the original owner. The original owner's love was also very tangible. This is a point that I regret. His traces and his love were worn away in the story that the protagonist came to continue. I don't mean that I want to see Fu regret it. I just want her to know that the original owner is very good, but she doesn't deserve it. The painting that the original owner painted little by little was packed up and I don't know where it went. Fu Kezhi's gift was the best gift he bought with the money he earned from working hard on painting. He didn't spend any of your money. But what you have brought to him is making him feel inferior and sad. Especially when he went to get a divorce, the original owner was still not good in his heart. I am not saying that it was wrong after the protagonist arrived. I also like the protagonist very much, but I always felt wronged for him by the original owner, so There were people who misunderstood him, belittled him, and even humiliated him. They didn't know him and never tried to get to know him. Even after the original owner arrived, what he left behind disappeared little by little. Ah, it's two o'clock in the morning. I don't know what I wrote, but it's so sad.
I read the first world. It was very well written, but there are some stereotypes about women in the text. I hope you can pay more attention to it, but it is really great [Blow Kiss][Flow Kiss]
The author's writing style is still good, but the characterization of the protagonist Shou is not in place, and his charm is not written out. He is too replaceable. I suggest you write about this aspect carefully. I feel that the protagonist Shou is a bit too "coquettish" [face covering] I hope to see the career line of the protagonist Shou, or his efforts in the relationship line.
It's really good to watch, but I'm not happy after watching it because it's really too cool [cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][ cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry] [cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][ cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry]
The second world is indeed not very good, a bit alienating
I would like to give you a suggestion, (｡>∀<｡), shouldn't Dada Shoubao have to maintain his own personality? Personally, I feel that after meeting Gongbao, I couldn't feel that Shoubao was maintaining his personality. It felt like he was seriously OOC. I hope Dada Shoubao would pay more attention to his personality and it would be better. Of course this is just my personal suggestion =ᗜωᗜ=
The first plane was written so well, I hope the following ones will get better and better.
The characters are described very vividly, and I don't feel like I've seen any bad points yet. Just don't get too involved in the characters when reading the book. After all, it's just a novel.
Finally, I would like to ask the author, is the latest one about five people?
Author! Don't get tired and don't stop! ! ! [Angry][angry][angry]
The content is fast-paced and not procrastinating. It is my favorite type. I think the development of the story is very delicate. I recommend it.
Not bad, not bad, good looking
Well written, thank you to the author
Good-looking. Love to watch. Like to watch.
It looks good, I love reading it, write more, write quickly!
Looks good, the plot is well written
Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking
It's very interesting and suits my taste, but I came too early. Why is it only chapter 53? It's not enough. [I'm about to cry] Are we going to start the hard work of catching up on updates again?
How could the rating be so low! WOC, as a person who has read thousands of books, I am crying, it is so well written, I love this kind of pulling [heartfelt]
Damn it, why is this a new book? I didn't notice it at all. Why is it such a new book if it looks so good? Tomato, why do you always like to promote new books😭
I loved the first story! ! ! Let me see what's going on behind the scenes!
Looks good! Very warm! The author is also very creative! Like!
Super Invincible is very good-looking. Why is it only 6.0? Come and watch it. Everyone, come and watch it.
The book is very beautiful, sweet and sad at the same time
The first world is a good god. . . Goddess, you are so good at writing [I'm almost crying] [I'm almost crying] I'll look like a giant after eating it, it's so delicious🤤
It looks good, especially the first world. The length of each small world is also very suitable, and the emotions are very delicate.
Super pretty! [Crying][crying][crying] Very sweet! ! ! Love this pair so much! ! ! ! Happy little couple 99
It's not that amazing. The first world is indeed quite novel. But if you want to make the heroine of the original plot a strong woman, you don't have to let her say so many disgusting things to the protagonist... But then you have to make her a strong woman? Sorry, it's not that happy [crying] There's no need to think about the second thing, I don't pay enough attention to the three views [crying] It is not recommended that these can be viewed in general [exploration]
Very well written! ! ! ! Real! ! ! The first world is always the most unforgettable, especially at the end, I cried to death, Lu Jin really doted on Wen Ci! He always wanted Wen Ci to draw a portrait of him, but Wen Ci couldn't draw at all, and kept finding reasons to refuse: "I miss you, I can see you when I turn around, and there is no need to paint to miss you." But when Lu left in the end, Wen missed him and started painting one after another of him [crying] In the end, I really hoped that Lu would be resurrected, and then be with Wen all the time! ! !
The first world is so well written that I even feel that that world is the core of this article. It could be written as a separate book. It is obviously very sweet, but it still makes me sad to see them grow old.
It's very interesting, but in fact, in the first world, I really wanted to see a detailed description of Fu Boqi's regrets. Later, I thought it didn't matter. After all, as long as the protagonist is happy, there is no need to see her regret.
In the first world, I actually wanted Fu to know about the love of the original owner. The original owner's love was also very tangible. This is a point that I regret. His traces and his love were worn away in the story that the protagonist came to continue. I don't mean that I want to see Fu regret it. I just want her to know that the original owner is very good, but she doesn't deserve it. The painting that the original owner painted little by little was packed up and I don't know where it went. Fu Kezhi's gift was the best gift he bought with the money he earned from working hard on painting. He didn't spend any of your money. But what you have brought to him is making him feel inferior and sad. Especially when he went to get a divorce, the original owner was still not good in his heart. I am not saying that it was wrong after the protagonist arrived. I also like the protagonist very much, but I always felt wronged for him by the original owner, so There were people who misunderstood him, belittled him, and even humiliated him. They didn't know him and never tried to get to know him. Even after the original owner arrived, what he left behind disappeared little by little. Ah, it's two o'clock in the morning. I don't know what I wrote, but it's so sad.
I read the first world. It was very well written, but there are some stereotypes about women in the text. I hope you can pay more attention to it, but it is really great [Blow Kiss][Flow Kiss]
The author's writing style is still good, but the characterization of the protagonist Shou is not in place, and his charm is not written out. He is too replaceable. I suggest you write about this aspect carefully. I feel that the protagonist Shou is a bit too "coquettish" [face covering] I hope to see the career line of the protagonist Shou, or his efforts in the relationship line.
It's really good to watch, but I'm not happy after watching it because it's really too cool [cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][ cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry] [cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][ cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry]
The second world is indeed not very good, a bit alienating
I would like to give you a suggestion, (｡>∀<｡), shouldn't Dada Shoubao have to maintain his own personality? Personally, I feel that after meeting Gongbao, I couldn't feel that Shoubao was maintaining his personality. It felt like he was seriously OOC. I hope Dada Shoubao would pay more attention to his personality and it would be better. Of course this is just my personal suggestion =ᗜωᗜ=
The first plane was written so well, I hope the following ones will get better and better.
The characters are described very vividly, and I don't feel like I've seen any bad points yet. Just don't get too involved in the characters when reading the book. After all, it's just a novel. Finally, I would like to ask the author, is the latest one about five people?
Author! Don't get tired and don't stop! ! ! [Angry][angry][angry]
The content is fast-paced and not procrastinating. It is my favorite type. I think the development of the story is very delicate. I recommend it.
Not bad, not bad, good looking
Well written, thank you to the author
Good-looking. Love to watch. Like to watch.
It looks good, I love reading it, write more, write quickly!
Looks good, the plot is well written
Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking
It's very interesting and suits my taste, but I came too early. Why is it only chapter 53? It's not enough. [I'm about to cry] Are we going to start the hard work of catching up on updates again?
How could the rating be so low! WOC, as a person who has read thousands of books, I am crying, it is so well written, I love this kind of pulling [heartfelt]
Damn it, why is this a new book? I didn't notice it at all. Why is it such a new book if it looks so good? Tomato, why do you always like to promote new books😭
I loved the first story! ! ! Let me see what's going on behind the scenes!
Looks good! Very warm! The author is also very creative! Like!
Super Invincible is very good-looking. Why is it only 6.0? Come and watch it. Everyone, come and watch it.
The book is very beautiful, sweet and sad at the same time
The first world is a good god. . . Goddess, you are so good at writing [I'm almost crying] [I'm almost crying] I'll look like a giant after eating it, it's so delicious🤤
It looks good, especially the first world. The length of each small world is also very suitable, and the emotions are very delicate.
Super pretty! [Crying][crying][crying] Very sweet! ! ! Love this pair so much! ! ! ! Happy little couple 99