Grandfather**********

I read all the chapters in one go, the thinking is clear, there is nothing to criticize, and there are many foreshadowings, which can make people think about what will happen next? But often the ending is not just a guess, it is really full of curiosity, but the update is a bit slow.

A novel worth reading. I haven't encountered such a high-quality novel in Tomato for a long time. Five-star praise and recommendation.

At least it's not an invincible urban cultivator, the setting is quite fresh~

I have read Chapter 93 so far, and the system has appeared. The previous writing is quite good, and I enjoyed reading it. I haven't discovered the pitfalls mentioned in the comment area yet. It's a bit difficult to deal with later on. I think the author is talking about a single female protagonist. The emotional line is not well written and is rather abrupt. There is also a past and present life with a supporting actress like Xiang Qianqian. The entanglement of cause and effect is a bit difficult to deal with. The emotional line with the female protagonist was not reflected in the first place. Then there is a system in the middle. I think this point is quite interesting, but suddenly a lot of background is explained. In the first two chapters, even what the door is has not been explained clearly, and suddenly a heavenly blockade and a heavenly court pop up, which makes me confused. As soon as the system came out and gave me the immortal cultivation level, I could accept it. I thought that it would be no problem to enter the secret realm this time, and there would be no rivals on the earth. Then, a martial artist who could not surpass the elixir power, and an immortal who could not surpass the reason came immediately. It was as if a 30-second commercial was shown to me when I was about to take off. It was uncomfortable. Let's see what the author writes later, come on [laughing awkwardly]

Very good, but the protagonist knows too little. The Riddler doesn't talk about anything at home, and the other kings explain everything very clearly. (I just read more than 30 chapters, and this is where I feel a little bit poisonous at the moment)

I finally finished reading it in one sitting. I hope to keep working hard. It is well written and much better than other books.

I've read more than 40 chapters, and so far it's to my liking. I hope it doesn't end badly. I blame me for speaking too early

I haven't read such a good book for a long time. From late at night to early in the morning, after reading the first few pictures, I feel that it is completely different from other novels currently. I don't know how many times it is better. The author is very capable and I am very fascinated by it. I hope the author will continue to write.

This urban martial arts book has a tight rhythm, a clear combat power system that is not broken, a natural integration of urban and martial arts, a solid and exciting protagonist's growth line, sufficient fighting descriptions, vivid supporting characters, and suspense as the world view gradually unfolds. The overall passion is high. It is a sincere masterpiece in the same genre.

The author's content structure and the plot are very good. I think the mixed history is really great. I feel that the author has done some research on the history of this family. I wonder if the author has read any books about the family. I am curious. If possible, can you recommend them to me?

For someone like me who has not read many books, this one is just right. It is also very well written and the content is very exciting, but it is not finished yet.

The content of this book shocked me

The rhythm is relatively tight, and the story has good foreshadowing.

It's well written and worth continuing to read.

Because no matter how big the back is, it is just the icing on the cake for a time traveler with a golden finger. It is bound to be a low-level existence left behind. Because the protagonist is bound to stand on top of the world, overlooking all living beings, your foresight today will eventually turn into a smile or even a laughable generosity.

The official division of the Hornets just now seems like there shouldn't be a big difference. It's too much. Delta may let everyone in the school rejoice in the new year. Your thighs in the south work hard. Secretary, look at your widower and loneliness and want to learn the results.

There is no fancy plot. It is simple and clear. It is very comfortable to watch. There is also content that can be incorporated into it. It is tense, exciting, and exciting. It is very well written. I have never read this type of novel before, but this time I was really surprised.

Really good, five stars for you

This book is okay

What can I say, it's still okay for now

The writing is good, stable, and in-depth. The author has put great care into it.

It's very, very beautiful, and the writing is also good. The author should update it soon. I feel like this book has the potential to be a big hit.

I just don't know the realm ranking [smile]

The early stage of writing is good.

Very well written and beautiful.

Very nice, support the author greatly

Very beautiful, recommended

Very good. After listening to Tomato for three years, most of them scored 8.9 Or above. This one is in my top five!

The plot is okay, I prefer to watch it, it motivates me a bit

I personally think it looks pretty and suits my taste