Legend of the Dark River: Jia Hui Zhaoxing

It's very interesting. CP Su Changhe. The latest plot is that he has a son. The heroine is a very real ordinary person. Although the system is a childbirth system, it is proficient in pulling wool. At the same time, the underlying logic of "birth" also has unexpected help. The system and the heroine are partners. There is no What kind of conspiracy is there? The heroine works hard to live a better life for herself. She has good looks but no love brain. In the later period, the system was temporarily switched to the martial arts system, and the force value also increased. Although she is an ordinary person, the heroine is much stronger than many real ordinary people. She has brains, ambition and perseverance. I saw that several friends came to read it because of my comments, so I will make a follow-up comment. This book is also quite good in the later period. The author has a clear plot idea, including some plots in the later period when readers thought they had to follow the routine. The author went against the routine and used the heroine's words to tell the readers why this was the case. At the same time, it further deepened the heroine's independent and sober character. There is no doubt that this is a heroine novel. Love is just her embellishment, career is her pursuit. She loves very stingyly, but at the same time, it does not mean that she does not love, but there is a process of deepening love. In the end, the heroine took the world directly to the dimension. Now I look at the heroine in the first chapter and sigh that she is really amazing.

The author's writing is fluent and is a rare masterpiece of "The Legend of the Dark River" fanfic. Currently, the character Su Changhe is very charming and has no OOC. Even if he loses his memory, he is still sharp and vigilant. I give the author a thumbs up for this

Recently, I feel that in Shuiwen, Su Changhe is a little bit OOC. The plot is okay but a bit draggy. The heroine has a very positive outlook on life, which is very consistent with the look of a modern ordinary woman, and her personality is also very good.

The writing is really good. I looked through the author list and sure enough, I have read your other books. A few of them have logic and plot. They are not completely dependent on the original plot, but they also participate in key nodes. The heroine is very cute.

The plot is great, the logic is tight, and the characters are non-ooc

Nice! ! ! She is logical and not a noob. The heroine is definitely thinking in her own way. The interaction with Su Changhe is very sweet, but she has been improving herself. She is struggling with life and death, waiting for the second child, hahaha, but it is estimated that the heroine will improve her strength first [ Eat Melon ] [ Eat Melon ]

Looking forward to Xiao Changhe regaining his memory, it's not enough!

I think the character design of the heroine written by this fan is quite good. Of course, what I most appreciate is the heroine's love for herself in all aspects. Even the two systems are very good and cute. What can I say? Except for the small problem that the male protagonist has less roles

It's great, I love watching it [Blow kiss] I hope I can have a movie viewing experience in the end [Shy]

(⊙O⊙) Wow, it's really interesting to watch so far, the emotional line is well written, and Su Changhe's reaction is really interesting!

It's really good-looking, and I'm a bookworm. (I'm afraid of being affected by high scores, so I'll give it four stars, haha) Ah ah ah, the author will update soon. I will check out your other books first.

It's very novel and good. Come on, write more. If the outline allows, please be nice to our Changhe, poor baby.

It's so beautiful. The author is great.

It attracts people, and all I read are good books without realizing it. 1V2, but I feel a little sorry for the two male protagonists. They are both really handsome. The three of you are happier together than anything else. This is what I think of

Very interesting and the plot is smooth Great 👍🏻Want to watch it all the time

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking

This angle is really clear, and so far it's very, very good.

It's good to watch, I hope the author writes about the movie viewing style ~

Not bad, I like it very much. I hope the author will work hard and have a happy new year!

Good-looking🌹It's the type I like to watch

This is by far the best fan fiction I have read.

The setting is novel and the characters are full-bodied and realistic. Also very careful. The logical interactions between characters are natural and harmonious

A very novel fanfic about Su Changhe. I really like the character of the heroine.

Putting aside the details, the plot is pretty good

It's well written, but not enough to read.

Very interesting, very beautiful

Good-looking, good-looking, like to watch [admiration]

Looks good, I recommend it

It's really beautiful and well written.

Super pretty, great