The Redemption of the Fallen Magical Girl

This book is really very similar to "No Spring for Older Magical Girls", whether it is the relationship between the two heroines with the younger sister, the seven energy crystal cores, or the magical girl's concert (anyone who has read the other book knows that these settings are really similar) Of course, it's all about learning from others, and the writing style is pretty good. There are currently no outstanding points in the thirty chapters. Those who like a little bit of fighting in their daily lives, or those who fight openly and secretly, can read it. I don't know why, the quality is obviously good, but few people read it (maybe the writing is too similar to the one next door, and the traffic is diverted) So I think we can do something different. For example, the heroine doesn't have to be so strong (I don't like the one next door that covers the sky with one hand), and then the second heroine can be used to redeem the heroine's broken heart (those can be written as more sadistic). In the end, the truth is revealed, and the boss fight ends perfectly [smile] I take back what I said about micro-battles. By Chapter 90, there were still too many scenes. I guess I was still pushing the plot, and it wasn't as common as daily life. Also, I don't know if it's my imagination, but the descriptions of battles and a small part of daily life are a bit AI-edited. Anyway, it just made me feel a little uncomfortable. Of course, if it wasn't AI, the author's writing would be good. It would be better to add some details of fighting during the fight, and the magical girl should have skills. Why do I only see melee combat with a knife?

First of all, give me a good review. Although the update is a bit slow, I hope that when I lost my horse, I was temporarily blinded due to saving people. I hope that there will be more chapters to describe it. Taking care of people is also a daily routine.

Currently watching the tomb sweeping chapter few questions 1. Shui Mo was not present during the Tianling disaster, so where was she then? What have you been doing? Is she really a traitor? 2. The number of the magical girl is 500213. According to the number starting with 3 when the ink is level 3, the 5 should refer to the 5th level rather than the 5th generation. So does the last 213 refer to the 213th level 5 magical girl? Does the 6th level number count? Well written, keep it up

Hao Chi's rice, come on author, at least I see there's nothing poisonous about it now [Admiration] The food is very good, but I don't know why no one eats it. Is it because we didn't sign the contract? [Thinking]

There is a familiar smell

Being able to kill the command level instantly shows that the strength is not at the same level and is much stronger than the command level. Why is the magic power still overdrawn? [What]

It's very interesting, come on the author!

It's very interesting, good luck to the author💪

What the hell, no one is so good-looking? Did I strike gold? Tonic, the author will come back soon [crying] [crying]

It's good. I don't know what to say. Just light up everything.

It's pretty good, you can give it a try

The book is a good one, but I have a question, can ghosts be harmed only by magic? Why don't modern weapons appear in the article? Their technology should be similar to ours.

Oh my god, it's so beautiful! Not shown at all! Update soon! Great author!

The author's writing style is really good, including the setting, which is actually quite novel. However, I feel like the repeated descriptions in some places give it a watery feel.

Still enchanted golden apples, high quality and fire resistant