The Shrine Maiden

A very nice light novel, Lily Immortal Grass. Excellent plot design, skillful perspective switching, stable style control, and good writing style. I almost got insulin shots from Qixi's love. Spoiler warning below - But I always feel that the rhythm of the climax of Qixi's emotional line is a bit too fast? I thought I would have to write at least a dozen chapters for the twist in the wall of their hearts. Unexpectedly, it took less than a day. In the evening, Qixi just said "I like you, you like me" to each of them, and the story was completed. The curse was lifted the next day. This speed is really fast. There is no foreshadowing (although there is basically no foreshadowing. I wonder if Nanai's father counts?), And there is no long-term emotional pull and perspective change (the reader's main perspective is still stuck on "Nana" who does not know Maki well enough and can only listen to her description. Maybe let the two separate briefly, focus on describing Nanai's regret and sense of dislocation, Maki's past and her specific "other side" life, and then write about friends after returning to school) (Would it be better if the help of the mastermind and the renewed friction of Qixi's relationship?), Without the parallel in-depth and crisis follow-up of the behind-the-scenes plot (or is it that the behind-the-scenes plot was so frightened that they didn't dare to move when they saw the team of men in black being struck by lightning. I saw that people were dumbfounded when the five thunders of Xiu Xian were struck, so they really didn't dare to move. It's strange to say that the strength of a large consortium can allow a group of people to get so close. This plot itself is very strange.), In short, it feels like there is a lot missing. This treatment does reduce the number of knives a lot, which I think is pretty good, but it would still be a bit sad if the second heroine were to start or end like this. So is there still candy to eat, is there a wedding or something, I must eat it immediately. Speaking of which, Maki's love story is basically over. Has the harem (to be determined) in the introduction been finalized?

As a Nikgaru fan (it should be considered), because Tomato cannot divide a large chapter into several small fragments like normal Nikgaru, and open a new chapter by switching perspectives, but based on my current experience, there is no problem (but some people may not be used to this kind of perspective cutting). It is a pretty good Nikgaru, and it has the characteristics of Nikgaru characters (character description is clear, The mood is in place), and Nikgaru's language style (such as running away). I hope Nanai can become stronger (my expectation is that a protagonist like Nikgaru will experience some special events and grow up). I hope the author can continue to do more. After all, it is quite rare to see Nikgaru in Tomato. It is still so consistent with the real Nikgaru's novel, although there is still a gap between it and the real Nikgaru. Good luck, author.

I think it's pretty good so far. The multi-view switching is also very smooth. The dual advancement of the daily main line is also within a reasonable range. Come on (I'd like to give you a suggestion. If you switch the view, you can put a small bracket next to the title to mark it)

It's ok, ok, it has the flavor of a light novel. Basically, as long as it's not bad at this level, there's nothing wrong with it. The writing is fine, but it's just a matter of time. Otherwise, I'll have to write a book [Chigua] The main point of view is very smooth, and there are almost no criticisms. I feel very comfortable watching it, and the main plot and daily life are well interwoven. It is as comfortable as having a delicious meal at night and then drinking a bottle of drink. Afterwards, I took a comfortable bath and slept in bed, and woke up full of energy in the morning!

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The author is here to fry fish with tomatoes

It looks good so far. It is a first-person novel rarely seen in Western countries, and the writing is pretty good. Although I'm not a Touhou fan, the popularity is quite Touhou (laughs) Come on, I hope the author can keep writing.

It's good-looking, and so far it's still sweet.

Like daily life, good looking

It's so awesome, come on⛽ Oh, author, you must keep writing! A very pure and sweet article🤗🤗🤗🤗My eyes have been looking at this for a long time😡😋😋😋

Not bad [Chigua] When did you kill these two villains?

Very interesting, the voice is very vivid and can make people imagine the picture