Five Senses: Malfoy Hears My Heartbeat

First of all, I want to give you a good review. I am the author. The plot of this film is a bit jumpy. It is mainly because I wrote it last year. I just picked it up from Writer's Assistant a few days ago. If you like details, you can read what I wrote: "HP: In this life, Mrs. Malfoy can only be you" CP: Draco x Pansy (double/strong/childhood sweetheart/Slytherin power reshaping)

I've seen Chapter 28, and there are some strange places, such as, uh, Harry has fallen. As a result, he suddenly disliked Draco, such as the episode in Lu Dese's notebook. And most of the plot feels contrived. As follows: Harry seeks death - Draco saves - Harry falls. . And it feels like it's ooc in some places. Then there is the pain system. If there were cars in the future, if Draco hurt Harry, wouldn't he also feel pain? Anyway, I don't think there's much progress in the love line. I have never kissed him, I have hugged Harry at most (of course, as of now, I have caught up with the latest chapter updated by the author, and then I will review it) 😌 But I have to say that the author updates very quickly, so five stars [shy]

It was lighthearted and happy at the beginning, but it became a bit depressing and heavy after the fourth year. Deha's feelings also changed accordingly. After reading it, I had a great feeling. No one trusts you except Draco. It's beautiful. Come on, author, Deha 99 [love] [love] [love]

Ah, a peerless book, a peerless book that I highly recommend. I've been in a book drought for a long time, and I found this book to be so good. It's like a fairy to me! Oh, the author, please keep going more, don't force me to beg you, it's really good-looking, good-looking, very good-looking, it's recommended by Shuhuang Xingren (Xingren), oh my God, this five-star rating is absolute, this is the limit of evaluation, not my limit. If this is an infinite rating, I will give him a lot of money, the author must keep going, this is simply one of the best Harry fanfics I have ever read😊! ! ! ! Hmm... When I saw the later part, I felt that it was not as amazing as the previous one, but I can still recommend it.

After reading Chapter 20, I feel like Draco is a little dead (ᐡ т ̫ т ᐡ)

Hahahaha, it's good, it's a very novel subject matter, I'd love to read more

The book-eating plot is a bit serious. Draco didn't feel like he was reborn for a long time, but it was a rebirth setting at the beginning. What he knew at the beginning was unknown later - later it was like a non-rebirth but binding setting. But this book is really funny regardless of logic, and the character setting is also very interesting. I like it very much (except for the logic, I really can't understand...)

Something feels weird. Draco must have experienced everything he should have experienced before he was reborn. Although he didn't actually participate, he should be able to hear many things through people. When he saw Draco later, it was like knowing these things for the first time. 😯But overall it's pretty good

People in the outside circle will all say "It's really good-looking!" I read it, and I kind of want to join the circle. Hiss——The author's writing is a little too good🥰

It's so good. I've been following it. The author updates quite a lot every day, four or five chapters a day. It's so enjoyable. Every time I finish reading it, I still want to read it. I have no words to describe it. I can only say that it's really good. It's really good. It really makes me happy to see the latest 90 chapters. It's so good. I must continue to read more. It's really, really good.

Is the author here? Is he here? Is he there? Is this Hader or Deha? [Laugh]

It's pretty good, but life is miserable hahahahahaha [laughs]

Draco's character description is really true to the original work! Harry is cute too! My wife wrote really well

It made me laugh so much, so funny

I love you so much, the author is big

Special

This is the funniest book I have ever read [Adoration]

Really, I read the first two chapters and thought they were quite interesting.

[Sending Hearts] Very well written and beautiful

It's super nice and doesn't feel OOC at all! ! ! Strongly recommend everyone to take a look! ! ! ! Really pretty

It has to be said that the Potter family is quite capable of self-defense [laughs awkwardly]

It's really beautiful, but my wife stopped updating for a week [almost crying]

It's so funny, I almost collapsed laughing. The plot is also very well written.

Very nice The author writes very well

Nice! Why is it not popular if it looks so good? ! This foreign persimmon should continue to limit the traffic of my goddess!

It looks great, keep it up!

It's beautiful as long as you ignore some small details

It's so beautiful that I've already read it three times, but I feel like it's not enough! I can't find a replacement copy

It's very novel and well-written, but some words read strangely.

It looks good. Teacher, I must keep writing it. I am especially looking forward to how their emotional line will develop in the future.