BG, 1v7
After accidentally entering "Beast World: Fluffy Entrapment Plan", in order to be resurrected, he reluctantly embarked on the Neptune line!
However, what awaits her is a special plot——
This is not the case in Nono game!
Faced with the sudden darkening of the characters, Su Jiujiu could only start the show and start the Duan Shui Dafa.
The snow fox from the Diao Department said with a smile, "Ah Jiu, the bright moon and the cool breeze are always with us, making us happy every year."
Silent Silver Wolf saluted her as a knight, "I won't say nice things, I just want to be by your side every day, no matter what my status is."
Green Tea Lion Rabbit acted coquettishly, "Sister, you know I have lacked love since I was a child. Sister, love me a little more, okay?"
Gloomy Snake Sai said quietly, "Are you smiling at him like this? You are mine. In front of me, you are not allowed to think about other males."
The arrogant and cold Hai Dongqing lowered her eyes, "I don't miss you very much, I just happened to pass by."
The naughty killer whale smiled heartily, "I will take you to play in the sea. My female will always be happy!"
Introduction 2
Fishing Silver Fox: "She saved me at all costs in several reincarnations, so I was reborn."
Loyal Dog White Wolf: "I used to be unable to speak, but she taught me how to write, so I had a new life."
Green Tea Lion Rabbit: "She saved me once, so from now on my life belongs to her."
Qing Leng Hai Dongqing: "She once saved me from breaking my shackles, so she is more important than the freedom I long for."
Damp Snake: Very good, I'm isolated again.
Reader comments
I read it from beginning to end and have finished it. I'm curious if this is a finished situation? Is the author a new writer? Here I would like to mention my opinions after reading.
First of all, I was attracted by the title and introduction. At the beginning, there were a lot of cheats in Goldfinger that were okay, and I highly recommend them if they are acceptable. Most of the characters are very well-created and vivid, but some of them are not very good and may be OOC. I'm a little curious whether the author wrote foreshadowing and didn't explain many pitfalls clearly? A lot of plots almost touch on the emotional line, which is a bit confusing. The most interesting thing about the whole story is Hu Yueze, and only the story about him is the longest. I think the shortest emotional line among the male protagonists is the bird (I forgot its name). The background of the appearance is not clear. Doesn't it say that he went to a forest? Why did he suddenly come back to be with the heroine later? (Is it because I didn't pay close attention or something? I couldn't understand this character the most when he appeared. It made me confused) The character development of this character was not very good. I couldn't tell what his personality was. All the fellow characters who appeared later were better than him. The writing was pretty good at the beginning, the timeline wasn't very clear but the events were clearly written, but once it got to the end it was all confusing and I was in a mask of pain. Many things appear and exit for unknown reasons. The ending of "Scorpion Loulan" is not mentioned, nor is there much description of how the bird comes back and the background of being chained, it is just a blur. Also, why did the fellow at the back promise to become a beast husband, only to say that he was attracted by modern technology, and then suddenly said that he was not married yet. I don't know who brought it up, but in short, I felt like I was kept in the dark about The Riddler, and the writing was not clear enough. The writing at the beginning is very good, very clear and thoughtful, but why does it become so chaotic at the end?
In summary, what was written earlier is very good, and it will be even better if it can be refined later! It's obvious that the author has some ideas, but the rest of the writing is just confusing. The more I look at it, the more painful the mask becomes. The explanation is too unclear.
I read it from beginning to end and have finished it. I'm curious if this is a finished situation? Is the author a new writer? Here I would like to mention my opinions after reading. First of all, I was attracted by the title and introduction. At the beginning, there were a lot of cheats in Goldfinger that were okay, and I highly recommend them if they are acceptable. Most of the characters are very well-created and vivid, but some of them are not very good and may be OOC. I'm a little curious whether the author wrote foreshadowing and didn't explain many pitfalls clearly? A lot of plots almost touch on the emotional line, which is a bit confusing. The most interesting thing about the whole story is Hu Yueze, and only the story about him is the longest. I think the shortest emotional line among the male protagonists is the bird (I forgot its name). The background of the appearance is not clear. Doesn't it say that he went to a forest? Why did he suddenly come back to be with the heroine later? (Is it because I didn't pay close attention or something? I couldn't understand this character the most when he appeared. It made me confused) The character development of this character was not very good. I couldn't tell what his personality was. All the fellow characters who appeared later were better than him. The writing was pretty good at the beginning, the timeline wasn't very clear but the events were clearly written, but once it got to the end it was all confusing and I was in a mask of pain. Many things appear and exit for unknown reasons. The ending of "Scorpion Loulan" is not mentioned, nor is there much description of how the bird comes back and the background of being chained, it is just a blur. Also, why did the fellow at the back promise to become a beast husband, only to say that he was attracted by modern technology, and then suddenly said that he was not married yet. I don't know who brought it up, but in short, I felt like I was kept in the dark about The Riddler, and the writing was not clear enough. The writing at the beginning is very good, very clear and thoughtful, but why does it become so chaotic at the end? In summary, what was written earlier is very good, and it will be even better if it can be refined later! It's obvious that the author has some ideas, but the rest of the writing is just confusing. The more I look at it, the more painful the mask becomes. The explanation is too unclear.