The author writes well, clean and not wordy, and has a strong sense of immersion. What's more, the character design of Crazy Batch is very interesting. If there are any shortcomings, the words are a bit short and I wish there were more. It would be better if more details could be added later to make it more delicate. [Sending Hearts]
Four points for encouragement. The subject matter and plot are quite good, and the characters are also very good. Those who hate stupidity are lucky~ The plot itself is quite well written, but it feels a little lacking and it feels like it ended right after it started.
Make some suggestions
There are too many descriptions of the characters' emotions and appearance, which makes people feel boring, especially the heroine's calmness. There are too many descriptions, which makes it feel a bit watery and redundant, and there are not many words. I always run out of words to describe. In short, I feel very uncomfortable (personally)
The plot feels a bit straight forward, it goes straight on, and it doesn't matter if it's a little twisty (I personally don't like it)
If it's not foreshadowing (I haven't finished reading it), then the characters themselves sometimes deviate from common sense.
(Also, I feel a little watery, so to speak👀)
It's just a personal thing. I only finished the first story. I don't really want to read the rest. Sorry for the biased comment. I'll change my comment to ₍ᐢ..ᐢ₎♡
The writing is good, but the plot is a bit hallucinatory. What can I say about many horror novels? It does have an ancient feel as the review said. Well, it's okay, but I can't stand it. The characters are not very distinctive.
It's very visual. After listening to it for a while, I didn't sleep until early in the morning.
The author writes well, clean and not wordy, and has a strong sense of immersion. What's more, the character design of Crazy Batch is very interesting. If there are any shortcomings, the words are a bit short and I wish there were more. It would be better if more details could be added later to make it more delicate. [Sending Hearts]
Four points for encouragement. The subject matter and plot are quite good, and the characters are also very good. Those who hate stupidity are lucky~ The plot itself is quite well written, but it feels a little lacking and it feels like it ended right after it started. Make some suggestions There are too many descriptions of the characters' emotions and appearance, which makes people feel boring, especially the heroine's calmness. There are too many descriptions, which makes it feel a bit watery and redundant, and there are not many words. I always run out of words to describe. In short, I feel very uncomfortable (personally) The plot feels a bit straight forward, it goes straight on, and it doesn't matter if it's a little twisty (I personally don't like it) If it's not foreshadowing (I haven't finished reading it), then the characters themselves sometimes deviate from common sense. (Also, I feel a little watery, so to speak👀) It's just a personal thing. I only finished the first story. I don't really want to read the rest. Sorry for the biased comment. I'll change my comment to ₍ᐢ..ᐢ₎♡
The writing is good, but the plot is a bit hallucinatory. What can I say about many horror novels? It does have an ancient feel as the review said. Well, it's okay, but I can't stand it. The characters are not very distinctive.
It's very visual. After listening to it for a while, I didn't sleep until early in the morning.
Okay, super great